Is HP Going on a Quick Trip?

Nice! But I think it may be cruel, do I have to stick to the original plot? If there was no outline, could Lily not have died? Is it okay to let the heroine's friends live in other ways? Based on the heroine's behavior earlier, I think she might die if her friend dies and the hero is caught? I simply think the author wrote it very well and the image of the heroine is so vivid and sympathetic that it makes people feel distressed. Your writing style deeply attracted me! A sincere request from a book fan! Big imagination, easy to describe and make people sympathize! (If there is any bad part, I will delete it immediately) I wish it a big hit! [Love][love][love]

Super pretty! It's rare to find HP fanfics on Tomato that are so interesting to me. I really found a great author! [Love][Love] Author I love you! (Super loud) Who can say no to a little Hill who will treat you to candy? (It's so cute, I want to kiss it.) Lily, who loves this book so much, would be so happy to have a friend with such a personality by her side 🥹 And Sirius! The description of the changes in the eyes and the pulling of the wrist really poked my nerves (I screamed like crazy in my heart😍), but the serialized article was too painful [crying] [crying] More updates from the author!

I wonder if my wife has given up. It's been a long time since I've seen such a happy HP fan, I really hope there will be another update one day Is the wife really not coming back? TAT

Treasure! Aaaaaaa Hill is really cute

Very beautiful, everything is very natural. The heroine is very cute. The interaction between Sirius and Hill is natural and sweet! Awesome [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

This is so beautiful. The two people are very direct and ambiguous in many small details. I feel that this kind of relationship is very good.

Nice! ! ! ! ! Come on, teacher, please update more! ! ! ! !

I really like reading it. The daily warm writing is not awkward. When will the author update? Please update more. I really love it [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

Very pretty! I hope the author can keep updating! ! ! The writing is very good, it is really beautiful, I must update it more [adoration][adoration]

I haven't finished reading it yet, it's really good! ! In my opinion, the whole article is very novel, and the details are very creative. Hill's setting really impressed me, so keep up the good work. This type of setting is really rare [love] [love] [love]

So pretty! ! ! I really like Sylvia and Sirius! !

I like it. Big boost for the author. Don't be fooled.

It's gone, eh eh eh

It's beautiful, come on, madam [sending heartfelt wishes]

Love Hill's reaction!!!!!!!

Beautiful!! Looking forward to the follow-up

I really like the interaction between the male and female protagonists [Adoration]

It feels pretty good, but after reading it for a long time, it feels like I'm reading a Japanese version of HP fanfic, with frequent modal particles and the like. I feel like the author has written Japanese comics before.

It's really, really, super, super beautiful [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

Super pretty! Super pretty! ! One of the few tomatoes I've seen that looks good! !

I think this book is very interesting. I have read other novels before where the protagonist falls in love with Sirius, but I think this book is the one that attracted me the most.

So pretty! Great writing style

Hill is so silly and cute, and the interaction with Sirius is also great. I hope Elise can survive in the end.

The writing is good, the characters are well drawn, and the emotional descriptions are detailed and natural.

I really like my silly little sister