I Hear You Want to Take Me as Your Disciple, Hongjun?

Tiandao: Baozi, stop writing me like a wheel. At least give me some IQ, otherwise I will always be fooled by Hongjun. Ancestor Earthworm Hongjun: I still can't escape the fate of the wheel with big eyes Pangu Zhengzong 12th Ancestral Witch: In addition to fighting, we barbarians are still on the way to fight. If you don't accept it, come and do it. The Demon Clan Emperor Jun, Donghuang Taiyi, Kunpeng, Nuwa, Fuxi, the top ten demon commanders, we are not just serving food to the human race. Pangu Zhengzong, Sanqing, Laozi, Yuanshi, Tongtian, the three of us are Pangu Zhengzong, I want to change my name, Lao Wang next door, brother Yuan, come quickly. Good chance, chance, Laozi, the second brother Yuanshi wants to trick me again. You don't know that I am the most tricked person in the prehistoric times. I am the one who intercepts Tongtian. Believe it or not, I will let you guys continue to set off firecrackers. Nuwa, alas, I have to prepare myself to be called a stupid snake without milk, and it is also the kind of saint that no one can defeat. I'd better stay at the Nuwa Palace of Chaos and continue to live at home. The West is shameless, Jie Yin, Zhunti, Senior Brother, the West is poor, Junior Brother, you go to the East to catch the autumn wind, Zhunti, Donor, you and I are destined to the West. Zhen Yuanzi, Hongyun, I, Zhen Yuanzi, want to become an authentic spokesperson, I, Hongyun, are afraid, Houtu Humanitarian Spokesperson The people are in harmony with the ancestors, the people are not reconciled to each other, I will not die Chaos eyes: What, God is not convinced, I will tear you apart if you are not convinced Pangu: Is it surprising? Surprised or not? Actually I didn't die, I became Lychee Avenue This time it's my turn, Li Xiu, to be the protagonist. This time, I will be sent to Li Xiu at the home court of the prehistoric era. I, you prehistoric country bumpkins, how do you think I will kill you? [Cover face][cover face] Big meat bun, I, Li Xiu, will carry the burden of your book for you. If anyone refuses to accept it, tell me to kill him [face covering] [OK] This book can't be scrapped like this, keep writing, I'm always here, I'm always here [cool][cool]

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I haven't read this novel for a long time, so I just commented on it casually: ① I don't know what to say later. I only know that the protagonist at the beginning is a bit sanctimonious, which gave people a bad first impression, and directly discouraged many readers (I don't know about others, but I was very uncomfortable when I read it). In fact, more readers prefer protagonists who are positive or who are both good and evil. ②The subject matter is not novel enough. Most of the current prehistoric novels with scores of 9 and above are based on a new word, innovation. It is difficult to make a difference by writing the traditional and monotonous prehistoric prose. You can only write about something that has not yet been written, something that others have not thought of or have but that no one has written yet. Or you can add more elements to traditional prose and get the first wave of dividends. For example, for a period of time, the prehistoric prose established a lot of teachings and created a lot of cultivation methods Methods such as medicine, martial arts and other elements are all the traditional prehistoric + clone + various ways + behind the scenes. There is also a category where a bunch of systems are messed up. There is one where you can transform into Pangu and fight with a bunch of systems. There is also one where you can transform into Hongjun and cut the system and let leeks grow in the ancient world. There are two books where the results of the ancient world are okay. I have read two of your other prehistoric novels, but the creativity is lacking. The above are just my suggestions. 111. The above remarks on behalf of my own person have nothing to do with me (just kidding) [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] Hehe

Go listen to Hongjun's sermon and steal Hongjun for 9,000 years. Will Hongjun be stolen to death? ! ! ! ! !

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According to my many years of reading experience, this is a good book. Anyway, after the update, it will definitely score 9.0. Moreover, the author's previous works on "Honghuang" are also quite good, and there are connections between each one.

Still the same taste! ! [Adoration]

This book is very good. Keep up the good work.

I give you five-star reviews for steamed buns, come on! ! ! Also update soon! ! ! !