HP: Alchemy and Getting Rich at Hogwarts

One star is deducted for many places that are contrary to the settings of the original work... Private settings belong to private settings, and ooc belongs to ooc. However, some of the more obvious settings of the original work cannot be changed. For example, owt is in the fifth grade instead of the fourth grade, Dumbledore doesn't know about Horcruxes (otherwise there's no need to trick the old cunning guy), Apparition can't go to places he hasn't been before, etc. I like the author's description of perfecting the protagonist's character, showing the responsibilities of Slytherin's chief, the back-and-forth confrontation with Dumbledore, and the improvement of some small details. If you don't care much about the setting of the original work, you can read it. It will be a good HP fanfic, but I personally care more about it, so I'll see you later.

It's not bad. The plot is not laggy, the pace is tight, and the writing is good. The identity of the protagonist is a bit confusing, but some of the names mentioned are a bit confusing, but it does not hinder reading. This is the first one I have seen, and Voldemort is the earliest to go offline. The rest have to follow the plot of Harry's era. Even the way to eliminate Voldemort is a bit ooc, but it feels very reasonable according to the plot. And from another perspective, as a foreign protagonist, looking at the daily life of Chinese students going to Hogwarts, those hot pots, swords, and talismans also have a strange angle. When it comes to Xiao Lizi's uncle, I thought it was Uncle Jiu, but it turned out not to be the case. In addition, looking at the plot line, it seems that Harry's surname is not Potter, but Snape is very likely ~ Harry Snape

The writing is very good, the male protagonist is a story, the emotional line is adgg, Si Jiao and Lily, the male protagonist has no cp, the ending is happy, no one died except Voldemort. The male protagonist is a genius, and the family background setting is very novel, worth watching!

This novel is written by Snape. The protagonist incorporates the setting of Xingyue Magic, and other characters also have the setting of Chinese Taoist priests. The writing feels readable. Although James Potter is criticized, I can also understand that James Potter was originally a tool used to shape the character of Snape. There are many bad plots and there are many people criticizing him. However, the protagonist is engaged in research and another of their friends also wants to learn magic, but is sorted into Slytherin. At this time, I feel that it is possible to switch from Harry Potter's nanny to Snape's nanny, and it should be written about Sly. Due to Snape's attitude towards people other than Potter and Lily (such as Neville), and his personal inability to be Sly, I personally stopped reading it, but I feel that the follow-up may be okay, and it should be worth reading.

It took me a day to read it for him. It was very good. I feel that the protagonist and his puppet are also very close to each other. Falling in love with the person who gave him life is what he should do [laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's good-looking, solidly written, and close to the original. Except for the death of Voldemort and some Death Eaters, it has a happy ending. Dumbledore and Grindelwald reconciled, but their sides turned against each other. Dumbledore's sister was also resurrected. Voldemort was offline relatively early, and the way he was offline was also very unexpected, but it was very reasonable based on the development. Sijiao was not bullied during his schooling, Lupine did not hurt Sijiao, and Sijiao no longer suffered from favoritism and injustice. Moreover, he had his own friends and small group. It was really great. He also got rid of the influence of his family early. The scholar's temperament and reason prevailed. In the end, Lily proposed marriage, hahaha. However, some settings are contrary to the original work. Although the fan fiction has private settings, some details are too different from the original work. For example, during the OWT exam time, you cannot disapparate to places you have not been to. Voldemort cannot use the Cruciatus Curse to torture Abraxas Malfoy. Their status is relatively equal.

This is the first time I have finished writing a long story (although I have only finished the main text, there are many extra chapters to be written later), and I would like to thank all readers for your continued companionship. There are a lot of holes left unfilled in the text, because the title of this article refers to "What Happened While Studying at Hogwarts". As for what happened after graduating from Hogwarts, those are all extra stories. The extra chapter will be updated next week, with one chapter a day (I really can't stand two chapters a day). Write as much as you like, and fill in all the pitfalls. I will also write about sub-eras, and jokes like "when someone from the original story time travels to fan fiction". Finally, reward yourself and give yourself a five-star review~

Read through the 40 or so that I only have now. At least it is considered a good product among the current Harry Potters. As a bookworm who has read 10,000 books and 10,000 hours. It's pretty good in tomatoes.

Because I often suffer from insomnia and stay up late, my liver seems to be not in good condition, so can you call me a careful person? If the universe is an illusion, you and I will all be called brilliant - Zhang Haochen, the little thing is quite fierce, I knocked out the bottle for you

I discovered that you can't be too rigorous when writing novels (I'm not saying that the author is not rigorous), otherwise there will be a lot of people discussing it. [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua] I don't quite understand, but I respect it. I hope the author can write better and better, and become better and better!

It's really good to read. The logic of this book is very strong, there is no feeling of confusion at all, and the protagonist has brains, IQ, and strength. It's a very good-looking book. I really recommend it (//∇//)

Review after 3 hours of reading The writing is solid, the descriptions are detailed and vivid, and the beauty of ancient literature makes people feel comfortable. Yes, I am short of words and can't describe it, but it is a very comfortable feeling. I think it's not a loss to invest in shares

It's really nice, Lily and Steve are together, and Potter is with another blonde girl. Lupine didn't hurt Sijiao anymore, and the ending was pretty good. Sirius reconciled with his family, and Peter also got a good ending. Dumbledore is also with his old flame. The ending is perfect.

This book is not bad! Time travel, male protagonist, no CP, fan fiction, many private settings, threesome, micro group portrait, career, family and friendship, happy ending. Some of the settings are novel, the writing is good, the plot is coherent, and the characters have distinctive characteristics. The male protagonist is lively and cheerful, smart and clever, calm and decisive, humble and studious, powerful, with clear goals, bottom line and means. Great, keep up the good work^O^~

It's super nice. There are Narcissus (similar) in the back part of this book, and GG AD, the protagonist Snake Yard, who is very capable personally. There are two friends around the protagonist, one is Snape and the other is a warlock from the East. Voldemort died early on. Snape changed his name to Prince early on and inherited the Prince family. Snape and Lily were together. Porter and the other four also had a happy ending. Porter's mother was replaced, but Porter was still born, and the James team of four had a good ending. Arianna also came back, and Dumbledore found family affection and love at the same time. The protagonist is an alchemist who creates an alchemy doll that looks exactly like him. The plot is a bit narcissistic (I don't know how to describe it actually) and there will also be a bit of generation at the end (in the extra)

How to say it? I'll just watch a little bit of it first and then I'll comment later. Let me give a star first and give you a warning. This book is good, but the comment section is a bit noisy and biased. The author's writing is fine, but the people in the comment section are inexplicably malicious, so I suggest you turn off the comment section when reading.

When can the Holy Grail War begin?

The protagonist's world view before time travel is the world view of "Fate". I haven't seen it and it doesn't affect my viewing. There was Black James and Sirius in the former Sri Lanka. For example, Sirius said "Mudblood" James pushed and Sirius pushed, don't look at it. Expose Zhan Li, this article recommends Sili. There's a bit of Narcissus, the alchemy doll created by the male protagonist who is possessive of him. There is an Oriental student who is the protagonist's friend. ☆☆☆☆Star

It's very good, but I didn't expect that the ending of Sly was not written. The conflicts between the parents' generations are basically concentrated at the beginning. Later, the Gryffindor four rarely appear, and the Black family has changed. Part of the plot involving the World Tree of Avalon can be understood even if you have not read the relevant works. The protagonist has a great halo, but I personally think it is reasonable. Oh yeah, the extra story has Sili haha, I also think Lily will be like this [laughing]

Please cb, please don't abuse me! The trio has a good relationship

One less star is an understatement. This book is really good-looking and very logical. The definition of the Philosopher's Stone is also very novel.

Well, yes, I'm probably addicted૮₍ ˶•‸•˶₎ა

Author, I hope you will spend twenty-four hours a day, thirty-six of which will be spent coding [smile]

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It ends well. Voldemort and his followers were eliminated early. It didn't cause too many bloody killings, and several major pure-blood families also escaped unscathed.

The former alchemist Eddie (goblin) was reborn in Voldemort's era and changed the original tragic fate, defeating Voldemort, the emotional line adgg, the happy ending of Sri Lanka's teaching Lily, the group portraits of family and friendship, and the settings of the adapted fan writing are all good

The protagonist has no cp and no ambiguity, the timeline of the parent generation, Yusili, GGAD related, it integrates part of the world view of Honkai Impact 3, overall it is very relaxed, Voldemort went offline relatively early

The ideas are great, and you can teach Si to play with them, great Nice looking narcissus, I'll eat it

Looks great, looking forward to the follow-up

Yay! So pretty