Red Mansions, Rising from Literary Giants

The latest 80 chapters, a Red Mansion fanfic, but the content is more time-traveling than family gossip. The writing is excellent and the descriptions are vivid. The protagonist has a pleasant personality step by step. The rhythm is progressive and exciting. It feels a bit like reading the Yue Guan book. There is currently no female lead, but there should be one. Five stars for encouragement. [Learned] I've finished watching it, and it's a three-star rating. The book is actually really good. At least the writing, the characters, and the knowledge base far exceed that of the novice author. However, there are two serious problems. The first is that it is unfinished, and there is no need to explain this. Even if you write it in ink, if you can finish it completely, it is a unique style of book. Maybe some people are like this, but if you just cut it in half and don't write it, there will be nothing to say, and it will be deducted stars. Second, the writing style is very self-contained and does not care about the reader's experience. Comments always talk about water, but in fact this is really not water. What is water? Too much is useless, water is called water if it is bland and tasteless. I drank a large bottle without tasting anything. This book is not watery, but it has a huge amount of expanded content, which greatly affects the viewing experience. His expanded content is different from others. In a normal book, the expanded content is appropriately interspersed with the plot to make it easier for readers to read. But this book, I would like to express my personal feeling, is purely for self-pleasure and to teach others. It quotes all kinds of classics and allusions. For example, if you watch a costume drama, 18 minutes out of a 20-minute episode are extended content. The protagonist goes out, opens the door, and inserts a short documentary to tell you why the threshold is so high. A video is inserted to tell you about the style of shoes. As soon as the camera switches to the street, a beggar enters the street and is immediately inserted to tell you how the beggar came, the current situation in the world, and people's livelihood... The protagonist moves twice in 20 minutes. I know a lot of miscellaneous knowledge. He himself showed off his wealth of knowledge by quoting from other sources. The reader felt as if his mother had drunk fake wine when reading a novel. He could cut off three or four chapters after reading a chapter. [Eat melon]

The writing is pretty good. I was originally not interested in this kind of Red Mansions novel without extraordinary power, but I kept recommending it back and forth. I clicked in to take a look. After reading it, I felt that this type is also very good.

The language and plot are very good, but there are too many expanded contents, which somewhat affects the smoothness of the plot. It is also too professional and makes the viewer dizzy. Those who like archeology may like the expanded knowledge, but most people will either browse it in a hurry or skip it. But the shortcomings do not hide the good points. Overall it is still very good. If you have the patience to look at it, you can learn a lot.

In fact, it is undeniable that the author's writing style is very good, but most of the comments are criticizing the author's word count. After reading it, he expressed his understanding. The author actually wanted to express some of his own opinions, some about the Red Mansion, and some about his insights on life. However, I have to say that this is Tomato, and reading cool articles is the mainstream. There are not many plot twists and turns within three to five chapters, so it is easy to be disliked. There are so many novels that I can't finish them all. There are also many choices for everyone, so I don't have a lot of patience. If you want to retain readers, you can only rely on small plots that keep appearing. Personal sentiment, the author does not need to pay attention to it, come on😊

The writing was so good, but suddenly it was tied. It was too short and not enough to read. I just wanted to stop reading it, but my interest was aroused. It felt like other people in the novel chasing the divine eagle🥲. I urged it to update it, and it was not enough to read. Now I wanted to find a replacement article. But this is the first time I saw an article written by a Red Mansion fan on Tomato. It feels hard to find it🥹🥹🥹

This is the best Red Mansion fanfic I've ever seen. It's nice and interesting. I hope it's free of cp.

I admire the author's profound historical and cultural knowledge. The historical and cultural cross-descriptions in the book are really beneficial. Although how to write is the author's mental structure, according to the writing routine of online articles, too many brief descriptions in the article will inevitably affect the perception.

The article is rigorously conceived, and the protagonist is Jia Yun. Very few people write about this character, and it is worth recommending.

There's nothing wrong with shooting the eagle, but if you write about the little dragon girl with the eagle, you'll be beaten to death, right? [Smile]

The writing is very good, but it is too detailed and the plot development is slow. Those who are impatient may not watch it.

The feeling of being the enemy of the whole world

I feel like the author's writing is very good, keep up the good work!

A dream in Red Mansions, a dream in the world. Only when you reach the point of "no self, no one, no sentient beings, no life span, can you see the Tathagata." The appearance of all living beings in the Red Mansion is the appearance of all living beings in the human world. This book is based on Red Mansions and creates new ideas.

Unlike the red buildings on the bad streets, this work opens up a new track I just regret that the accumulation is still shallow, I wish I could go back and read it all Don't stop

The writing is delicate and the process is smooth. Recommended by a 20-year-old bookworm.

It's a very interesting video about the man in the red mansion. He's not stuck in Rongning.

It's good-looking. Believe me, it's one of the best-looking among the Red Mansions fanfics. People who like Red Mansions can read it, and those who like literary novels can also read it.

Nan Bo Wan in the Red Mansion category, a rare good book for Tomato I can't stand it anymore. The first few dozen words of a chapter are all narration, and the rest of the words are all translations of this sentence. It's all nonsense.

A good book, the protagonist is resolute and wise, decisive and strategic in doing things, and the storyline is progressive and fascinating. Come on, [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

Author, please write quickly. It's not enough [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

A different red building

Write faster, it's not enough to read

It's all okay, just a little bit less [exploration] [exploration] [exploration]

There's a bit of a pattern, and there's nothing wrong with the writing style.

The biggest problem is that there are too few chapters. There are only 94 chapters. Who can read it? ! This is the first time I watched the bookstore opening. Some parts don't make sense, but it's enjoyable enough.

The writing is very good, but there are some problems with some parts. Send me the following chapters and I will help you read it [laughing][laughing][laughing] The writing is very good, but there are some problems with some parts. Please send me the following chapters and I will help you read it [laughing][laughing][laughing]

So far, pretty palatable. If you like this kind of novel, you can read it. I don't understand why the rating is low, I really think it's good. Forgot to mention, there is just some water. It obviously feels like the number of words has been shortened [face-covering] [face-covering] [face-covering]. All right. That's the end. The front is okay. There's a slight collapse at the back. It's all good, I hope the details will be improved in the next book.

Looks good, I'll send you a gift [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss] Come on, author

Very well written, guaranteed to be recommended by a 20-year-old bookworm

The author's writing is very good. It's not bad, but it's too little. It's not enough to read. Please update it quickly.,,,,