Transmigrated to DC with the Magical Awakening System

The characters are very OOC, and it can be seen that the author has tried his best to capture and amplify a certain trait in them. But maybe because it was placed too big, the characters were a little deformed and looked a little less like living people, which made me feel inexplicably scary. For example, Batman is suspicious, but he will not take away the life-saving weapons of his teammates without any reason. He may be more inclined to make plans from a to z, and then develop high-tech weapons. Strengthen his security instead of directly collecting the belongings of people in the same camp. Because according to this logic, why didn't he take away Wonder Woman's rope? If someone took away Wonder Woman's rope and tied him up, he would also tell the truth. There are also certain language plots that make me feel like I'm reading a high school student's composition. Why do I say it's a high school student? Because the word count is serious for high school students. For example, there are some inappropriate sentence patterns and some inappropriate expressions of emotions. Just an inexplicable sigh and an inexplicable application. There are also very strange person pronouns that jump repeatedly. I have seen first person, second person and third person in succession. It is really confusing. Ah, if you use it well, you will have a stronger sense of immersion, but if you use it poorly, it will just feel inexplicable and awkward. Obviously I don't think this is a good use. But at least the concept of the work is quite good. The idea of ​​​​the magical twins was something I had not thought of, and it was one of the reasons that attracted me to read it. It would be better if the writing style could be strengthened to make people read it.

The setting is good, but the writing style is too elementary school, and there are many strange oral habits, and some unnecessary modal particles are always added at the end.