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It's so nice, light, growing step by step, supporting each other, with the breezy and cheerful spirit of a young man, and a little bit of fun. The heroine's transformation from boy to girl is subtle and non-obtrusive. The brain circuit is strange and cute, and the hero is coquettish and innocent? , I finally picked up a light and pure love book (remarry or remarry, the male protagonist remarries in a non-greasy way). I really don't like the kind of story where the heroine becomes a canary after three chapters of the book, sleeping and six chapters, and then having a baby. There is no character in the whole book, it's all sexual innuendo, really I wanted to say that you should just read the book. I digressed. The author's writing style is getting better and better. Although it felt like a running account at first, it is becoming more and more delicate now. I hope the teacher will get better and better. Come on, come on✧ദ്ദി˶>ω<)✧ദ്ദി˶>𖥦<)✧ ദ്ദി˶•̀֊•́)✧ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ )✧

It's a very nice story about changing a marriage. The author's writing style is also good. It's a sweet story. It's a rare masterpiece. I'm willing to give the author five stars. But it is a pity that the author may not have grasped the direction in the later period, and gradually lost the true nature of the story about changing marriage and became a slightly unfinished ending of a spoiled wife. Ever since the "female protagonist" became pregnant out of wedlock and had to give birth to her child in a secret realm, she felt like she was gradually becoming a slave to the male protagonist. They are both high-level monks of the sect, and when discussing sect affairs, they actually asked the heroine to go home to nurse the child [Petrochemical] After they decided on the wedding date, the hero only told the "female heroine" when to get married, but the content involving immortals and demons was actually hidden from the parties, and the control of many small details made this bowl of fragrant rice slightly spoiled in the later stages. The content of the first two-thirds is actually very exciting, whether it is the author's writing style, the plot, or the pulling feeling caused by the male protagonist's love that cannot be tolerated but respects tolerance, and the "female protagonist"'s slowness and freeness. The writing is very delicious, and it was so delicious that I stayed up all night. Everything was ruined by the content after giving birth - the equality between the protagonists gradually tilted, the status and respect that the "female protagonist" deserved gradually disappeared, the pull turned into a vassal, the male protagonist was overwhelmed by Long Aotian and the heroine couldn't stand up, and the heroine in the marriage story gradually lost her true character and became a spoiled wife. The above is not a criticism but just my reading experience. I would like to thank the teacher for his careful creation. The teacher's "Change of Marriage" is really very, very good! I sincerely hope that the teacher's works will get better and better.

Maybe I wrote the story too quickly in the early stage, and there were a lot of bugs in the setting and plot. I knew a lot of the shortcomings. I covered my head earlier, and I really lacked control. I wrote impromptu and just wrote whatever I thought about, which was very inadequate. (There are bugs in Changing Marriage. It is recommended to read the introduction and comments to clear up mines, and proceed with caution.) I still try my best to write according to my original outline and fill in the holes. I feel that this book is still very rewarding, and I should be able to read it more smoothly next time when I start a new book. Another point is that there are some differences in the author's thinking (thinking between people). For example, I think there are some plots that I can accept, and then I write them that way. Speaking of which, my poison resistance is quite high, so I can continue to watch it as long as I like the setting. In this way, I will also have some of these problems in my writing, so I am very grateful to everyone for your tolerance and encouragement to a new author. Thank you for your understanding (hand over) Still wishing everyone the best! ! !

Oh my god, it's so beautiful that I tied it in one breath. I love this kind of writing. I like the character of the "heroine" so much. Some stories have heroines who really don't suffer any grievances at all. They want to be the best and it makes me feel uncomfortable. This "heroine" can endure any hardship at the beginning. I really like it! ! ! There is no female competition, it looks so comfortable, I like it! ! ! ! ! !

There are few poisonous points, the author also listens to the readers' opinions, there are no knives, the plot is interesting, and the writing is also good. I think there are few books in the same level that can compare with this one. In an environment like Tomato, it is rare to find a book about not driving for a long time, but the plot describing the emotional line is more interesting than many books about driving. Although the framework is a bit old and the pace is a bit slow, it doesn't seem to be laggy, and the three concepts are relatively correct. If there are bugs, the author will correct them in time. There are just a few updates. It may be that the author still has to code the framework, which leads to low efficiency. But because of this, there are very few poisonous points and the plot is not very cliched. Another highlight of this book is that there are basically no abrupt plots that would cause inexplicable hardships for the characters, making it uncomfortable to read. It feels like this is a more everyday fantasy novel about marriage. And there are a lot of jokes incorporated into the article, and it's not too dramatic. Personally, I think this book is relatively high-end and suitable for reading in succession, because there is probably no embarrassing phenomenon of being stuck, so you can basically rest assured that you will not read the book.

It is a very high-quality story about cultivating an immortal and getting married. The transformation into a heroine is natural. She accepts reality and understands the current situation, and then faces up to her own feelings without being masculine. It is not like the cute pig story that is pretentious - just wants to enjoy but does not want to pay, nor is it like the female channel story that is too emotional - too emotional and irrational, and it feels that the author should be an experienced "wife". Many of the emotions and thoughts in the article are very mature, giving people a sense of "understanding smile" after being tempered by society.

The writing is very good, good luck to the author. The emotions are described very delicately. Don't listen to the arguments of people who eat too much shoddy fast food and feel sad and internally upset about it. I can beat 50% of the authors just based on their writing skills. No matter how many times I read it, I will always be amazed by the perfectly placed poems. So what if the plot is a little cliche? Unlike other things that are particularly bloody and full of poisonous points, it is eye-catching. The plot is gentle and powerful, the characters are flesh-and-blood, down-to-earth, and each has his or her own arc. Writing about the changing relationship between the heroine and her family is naturally interesting and promotes the development of the story. I have rarely seen it handled so well. It's just that the plot is a bit cliched. Aren't these treatments and descriptions very innovative, thoughtful, and spiritual? Author, who do you think found fault with you? Is it okay to hit wherever I point you? I like all the young couples in the article very much. Always support, come on! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart]

It's beautiful, I didn't expect to see a marriage change article here. The novel is neither too long nor too short, and I can finish it before I get tired. It's good. The beginning is not like the traditional plot of telling the protagonist not to bully the poor young man, or talking about it on the spot, or fighting each other. On the contrary, this is quite beautiful and innovative, and it is clearly written about the love story between the male and female protagonists. There is no overly grand story, so it is very suitable for entertainment as a sweet snack. The story of the fight between the male and female protagonists is good, and the chapter on the change of gender mentality does not drag on for too long, and it feels like a natural progression. Sometimes there are some problems with the performance of chapters. I guess the author may be thinking about it while writing without an outline, but the impact is not big. If you want to read some relaxing articles, you can try reading

The character of the protagonist is well grasped. Even after cooking or even giving birth, there is still a sense of freedom and ease. It really allows me to always remember that the protagonist is a male-to-female novel. It does not limit myself to gender. It is really good.

Overall, the writing is okay. The writing is considered to be top-notch in Tomato. The emotional transition from male to female is also relatively natural, without a lot of deliberate procrastination. However, the article has some threads buried in the front that have not been cleaned up later. For example, the heroine first fell into the Weapon Refining Peak and had three senior brothers. As a result, the article was past 8/10. The Weapon Refining Peak was still a background, and the heroine still learned how to practice the weapon suddenly after receiving a strange fire from heaven and earth in the narration. It's probably because the author suddenly added the plot when he realized something wasn't right. It's a bit abrupt. There are also three senior brothers of the heroine in Lianqi Peak. They are mainly described in the front, but they do not appear in the back. And the heroine is a disciple of the Weapon Training Peak. She doesn't know how to practice weapons, so she needs to find someone to help her practice swordsmanship. Instead of looking for Master Bai Ji, she goes out to find a cute little sect, which is quite strange. However, this may be written specifically to fulfill the previous cause and effect, but to accept a young apprentice who can practice weapons, the female protagonist does not receive it in her own weapon training peak, but the result is that the male protagonist receives Wenjian Peak? Let the heroine's master teach you? ? What a chaotic cause and effect this is. As well as the special identities of the male protagonist and female protagonist's family, based on the previous layout, all overseas families will be introduced later, but I have already watched 9/10 of them, and no other hidden families have been introduced yet. I guess there was either too much writing here and it was so miscellaneous that I forgot about it, or it was so written that some of the plot was cut off. However, these are all minor problems that can't be seen without paying attention. The overall quality is still very good. Those who can accept the change of marriage can take a look. After reading it, the hidden family came out in the last dozen chapters, and Granny Zhou also encountered reincarnation in the last chapter. It's a pretty good result, but there's no extra story, and there's no explanation of what's going on on Earth.

It's very good. I like the sweet love between the male and female protagonists. I'm very envious when I see it. The feeling of being pampered and pampering others are completely different. No wonder girls always think about domineering CEOs falling in love with me. It would be great if I was also a girl. I also want to feel happy [shy]

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In the beginning, Grandma Zhou actually gave me a very novel and warm feeling. Later on, the writing became smoother and smoother. In the middle, there was also the psychological process of Leng Huan changing from a boy to a girl. It was just a sweet article (I don't think it was a vigorous one). The two people's cultivation levels improved quite quickly, but when they fought against the demons later, they didn't expect it to end so quickly. It's a nice little sweet article. Cheers to the author [blowing kisses][sending heartfelt wishes][likes]

It's very interesting. I have never seen such a good story about a young couple on Tomato. There is no vulgar abuse between two people when they fall in love. They are a young couple with pure love. It makes my body and mind smooth. (100 A day is even better)

It can be regarded as reading the latest chapter directly in one breath. As far as the events are concerned, in the early stage, they were one after another, a bit cramped, but not chaotic. It was one of the highlights. It was a bit strange at first to be caught two or three times in a row. Of course, it was acceptable when the circle came back later. At present, the plot generally has no poisonous points for me, but I can't read the text and only remember some events. I won't comment much here, and there are no poisonous points between the events. The current shortcomings I think: I actually want to see the mental journey of a man changing into a woman, and the author also has it in the writing process, but for me, I don't have a very clear feeling (it's a highlight for those who like to read more plainly) The second is the plot: Actually after watching a lot of fantasy, I found that this is the same as the previous fantasy male protagonist, as far as the relationship between men and women is concerned: medicine - antidote - no antidote. I have read this story line many times. (However, the perspective changes from the male protagonist to the female protagonist, which is also a highlight) Of course, the above is just my personal opinion. What the author has written so far is already very satisfying.

Good looking! The heroine died in the disaster, and the hero was so sad that he finally made the Spring and Autumn Cicada. He went back in time to save the heroine and went through rebirth again and again to save the heroine. However, the heroine asked the hero why he had not become a noble after this disaster. The hero also experienced rebirth again and again and found that he no longer loved the heroine. In the end, he killed the heroine and murmured "I regret it."

Too arrogant and spicy! A brilliant poem about wine with a broken halberd, worthy of Shi Zhe's song👍🏻

First of all, I would like to give my opinion. The main content of the book is not very novel, but it is definitely quite readable, and the plot narrative is relatively compact. However, some plot renderings are still not polished well enough. I can't really put it into it, and a few hasty strokes can't attract attention and arouse interest in reading, but on this platform I can give you the best!

It's a pretty good book. Don't read the bad reviews. Whatever you write is up to you.

It took me about 10 hours to read the entire text. At least in my eyes, this book is not inferior to any other high-scoring book of the same type (hence why the Tomato score is 8). If I were to rate it, it would be around 9.3.

This book is a bit slow, but not bad! Those who haven't watched it must watch it, and those who have just watched it must stick with it! This is because the book starts to speed up after chapter 103. Chapter 103 goes directly to the high-speed train. The speed is so fast that the reader can be knocked unconscious [snickering] [face covering]

I have also finished reading it. From the saint who escaped marriage to the Mahayana monk, from resistance to dependence, from dislike to love, I feel a little emotional. It only took me about a week to finish reading this book, and I still have more to say. Summary: It is a very good book.

January 2, 2025. So far, there are no problems with the characters. The writing describes the protagonist's emotions and main plot, without mentioning the feeling of overwhelming combat power. It has a little warm feeling, which is quite good. I won't know in the future, and I hope the author will write with his own ideas and not let others influence him. It's a very good work.

It's good. The main character is fully developed, but the male protagonist is a bit stiff. There is no gradual foreshadowing of the male protagonist's relationship. In the middle, he suddenly falls in love with the female protagonist. However, it is not a poisonous point. The setting of the world of cultivating immortals is a bit barren, focusing on the emotional line. In the later period, it is basically daily life. Summary: There is no poisonous point in the whole book. The heroine is quirky and cute, so you can read it.

I sincerely hope that it will become popular. Because it is a slow-burning one, some people may not think it is good to watch in the early stages. But as I read it slowly, I found that the plot written in the back is quite good. The heroine feels that her understanding of emotions is not clear yet, but I quite like her character and the hero is also very affectionate. That is, can the protagonist and the others return to the real world? It would be nice even for a while, I feel like I have too many regrets

The female protagonist is very cute. She feels like she is just a layer of window paper away from the male protagonist. But now she is still in a confused and evasive state. The male protagonist quickly works hard and attacks with a straight ball. Breaking through the barrier can win the game.

It's very beautiful. I didn't understand why when I read it, but this book makes people calm down and read slowly. The emotional development of the male and female protagonists is also very good. I highly recommend it!

This is a very good book, Tomato, which has gained a lot of money in this system [Like]

After reading a hundred chapters, I started reading. The author's writing is very good. Let's talk about the shortcomings first: in the early stage, it can be seen that many plots are a bit far-fetched, but overall it is very good. (This is the most common problem for new writers) Advantages: The plot is not procrastinating, the overall transition is okay, and the subject matter is well chosen. The author has listened to the advice, and seeing that the issues mentioned in the previous comments have basically been corrected, I hope that I can continue to write more.

In the early stage, the plot has ups and downs, and the emotions heat up; in the later stage, the plot is sweet, the family is happy, and the world is proud of it. I really like the author's writing style. The emotional line and the rising strength line are clearly visible. The male and female protagonists really have soul!