Thousands of Miles Away from Wilderness, Spring Breeze Blows on My Face

So far so good looking. The writing is very sincere. The biggest problem is that the author's use of punctuation is not standardized, and he doesn't like to use commas. He doesn't give a breath to long sentences, which makes it difficult to read. After entering the marriage line, the charm of all the characters dropped significantly, as if their energy and personality had been drained by marriage, and the problem of random punctuation and no commas has not changed at all.

It looks good, I feel like the author is getting better and better at writing. I like this kind of story where the heroine slowly grows up I don't know why the author wrote a plot in which the heroine is snatched away. This paragraph feels almost like a non-existent one, and it does not contribute to the development of the main story line. The male and female protagonists in the emotional plot are already engaged, and the male protagonist in the imperial examination plot is supposed to work hard. Adding this paragraph feels purely disgusting. Originally, this novel changed from the heroine's escape to the male protagonist's imperial examination, which already made me feel the author's preference for the male protagonist. The only effect of this addition is that the female protagonist was originally better than the male protagonist, whether it was family or emotional, it was the male protagonist who was superior to her, but now it is her who is superior to the male protagonist. There is reason to suspect that the author saw that some readers did not like the male protagonist and deliberately created this story.

I came to give a good review after reading Chapter 37. When I first read the first two chapters, I almost wanted to give up the article. This girl is so pitiful and I can't bear to see her suffer. Her parents are so inhuman. The more you read later, the better it gets, because the heroine is very smart and clever, and the hero is not annoying, and is relatively gentle. The heroine's good friends Sanya and his wife are very good, and the heroine's old aunt is also very good, taking care of her like a mother. The scholar and son they met on the way to escape are also very good. The transformation of the hero's mother is a bit abrupt. The first part is very good, and the second part has a lot of minor problems, but generally it is OK. I like to read this kind of story about using wisdom and wisdom to resolve crisis and lead to happiness. It's so great👍🏻 I've abandoned the article and stopped reading. I've been a little disgusted since the heroine was almost defiled and the hero didn't mind being like that. He didn't even want to touch the heroine on their wedding night. Later, Sanya's man actually took a concubine. Sanya was so smart and had such a pitiful life experience. I thought she was assigned a good man and had a good ending. Even if the man took a concubine, she was not short of money. I thought it was good to get married with her daughter. Why did she have to suffer this kind of injustice? I feel so depressed that I won't watch anymore.

It's a very interesting novel, most of it is quite real. There isn't much halo of the protagonist. Everyone is trying to live a better life. Currently I like Sanya the most, she is sober, independent and has her own ideas. After Xiao Tao got together with Shui Sheng, she felt that she no longer had any ideas as before and was living in her comfort zone. If Shui Sheng changed his mind, she felt that Xiao Tao would not be able to accept it in her current state. She currently relies too much on aquatic life. She obviously accepted Master Zhou's teachings at the beginning, but she felt that she did not learn the essence. I hope that the subsequent author can try to let Xiao Tao be herself. In order to highlight Shui Sheng, Xiao Tao cannot be written as his canary.

The author's writing skills are undoubtedly great, the plot is compact, the characters are well-drawn, and the control group is substantial. "Perfect" love: Xiao Tao + Shui Sheng, Xiao Tao is smart, discerning, willing to learn, and manages the family and finances; Shui Sheng does not run away, is willing to work hard, and is unyielding, able to establish a family, a friend is seen in times of adversity, lovers will eventually get married, and they are a model of two people for life; Love but not able: Uncle Zhou and Aunt Zhao, Wan Ning and Chong Ren, etc., Love each other, consider each other, restrain themselves and return to etiquette, succumb to etiquette, and have great righteousness; Asking but not getting: Sanya's family is a typical example, Minyue, Aunt Yu, etc. Sanya asked for a family, but other people came to the family, Minyue asked for a higher position, but couldn't take it... Exchange of interests: King Xuan and Wan Ning, the Chongyu couple, etc., In their positions, seeking their own affairs, upbringing, gains and losses... Thanks to the author for giving them a "happy ending". In fact, aquatic girls are us ordinary people. The background of kindness is full of holes: timidity, greed, selfishness, gossip, partiality...

This novel is one of the novels that I have read in recent years with excellent writing and content! So I would like to express my humble opinion for the first time, and I hope that such a good work will not be buried in the world [laughs]. The logic of this novel is clear, consistent with common sense and unconventional. The author should have built a big structure before starting to write, and it is smooth and well-thought-out. Every part is stable, powerful and interesting. What's even more rare is that it completely breaks away from the clichéd forms of most novels, making people constantly feel fresh and surprised while reading. The characters in the article are all three-dimensional and vivid. Whether they are the protagonist or the supporting role, they all have their own unique character traits, destiny trajectory and life value. They are full of flesh and blood, and each has its own strengths and weaknesses. Their interactions are reasonable and more reasonable! Please keep up the good work and look forward to more surprises!

Realistic character logic, cool plots, and beautiful group portraits. The novels I like to read all follow this pattern. Unlike some escape stories, where the heroine has a high level of intelligence and the other people's IQs are sealed. All the characters in this novel are very realistic, and because of the relatively refreshing plot, escape will not seem too heavy. It looks great, I love watching it, and I give it a five-star rating!

The escape part is super invincible and beautiful. I especially like the author's character creation. The characters are not broken from the beginning, and the character creation ability is very strong. I particularly want to praise the author for (1) the author's portrayal of the aquatic mother and the author's explanation of why he created it this way. The characters are all three-dimensional and complex. The current Internet environment is very demanding on people. If a person has a shortcoming, he will be criticized by writing and verbal criticism. Many authors also like to write a single character image, either the protagonist is extremely perfect and refined and self-interested, or the supporting role is full of ugliness. So I admire the author for not being afraid of being scolded and bravely portraying the characters he observes in his own heart and in real life in such an environment. (2) What I admire even more about the author is that Xiao Tao's Yin-Yang Water-born Mom loves to take advantage, which reflects the author's tolerance for imperfect people and the fact that the protagonist is not always right (if this were another novel, Xiao Tao's Yin-Yang Water-born Mother would be portrayed as a cool point, but I prefer the author's attitude) I really like this novel and the author's attitude reflected in it. I think the author is a talented and tolerant person who will write better and better as time goes by. Therefore, our big introduction may consider not using "an incompetent and boring" person, but rather "an excellent and talented person". I can't really relate to Shui Sheng and Xiao Tao, but that's not the author's fault. It's just that I don't relate to this type of cp. The development of their emotional line should be about it later, so I might not read it, so I'm waiting for the author's new book hahaha I also want to say that I didn't like writing book reviews because I felt that my expressive skills were not good, but when I saw that the author would be sad because of other readers who didn't like the work, I wanted to let the author see that there are still readers who like me and support the author's creative attitude but have not said it out loud. I love the author a lot (ღ♡‿♡ღ) and wish you a lot of money [adoration] [adoration] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] By the way, one thing I think is unreasonable is that the protagonist group fled with a donkey cart. They went to the refugee group. Logically speaking, many people in the refugee group should be starving to death. They are extremely vicious. Many people should be thinking about their donkeys and want to eat them. Besides, there aren't many strong men in the protagonist group, just two. Even if they are afraid of Sanya's men, the protagonist group is still small and cannot scare the refugee group. And usually in this situation, some people will coax others to grab the donkeys first, and they will rob them continuously, and they will swarm them, and they can't stop them at all. Anyway, for them, death from starvation is still death, and being shot to death by a Sanya man is also death. Maybe they are lucky, and they can still grab donkey meat.

It is a rare farming novel, and in my heart it is comparable to that of Zhiqifu. The characters in the author's works are flesh and blood, and the plot is fascinating with its ups and downs. The childhood sweetheart relationship between Xiao Tao and Shui Sheng in the book is plain and warm. Sanya's wisdom in life and Zhang Huaiqing are not worthy of such a good sister Sanya. The relationship between Uncle Zhou and Xiao Tao Niang is forbearing and tear-jerking. Love, Yan Zheng's sobriety, the daily interactions between Wan Ning and Shui Sheng's grandson, and Wan Ning's extraordinary but not abnormal intelligence in the overall situation. Although I knew early on that the qualities she had prepared were the perfect choice for the queen, she and Pei Chongren still made me cry a lot. King Xuan is not worthy of Wan Ning, who is as good as us! Finally, I would like to say that the author who is so good at writing can write more, it is not enough!

I don't understand why the score is so low. I saw the update and wanted to read the book, but it turned out to be the first one. I saw that except for the size of the book, the writing style and process are very good. The plot is not streamlined and it is not as low-fat as most of the books on the overall list. The author cares too much about comments! People who like it will also like it😘like me, looking forward to updates❤️

It's well written, the story outline, and the characterization are all good. A few minor quibbles, punctuation, and overly long paragraphs. Is it because the flow of literary thoughts flows in one go? Ha ha ha ha. However, the flaws do not outweigh the flaws, and it is one of the more enjoyable works to watch in recent times. The heroine Xiao Tao is tough, smart, and has her own principles and ways of doing things. Also, due to limited age and experience, one may be tempted to take advantage of others. The young male protagonist is reliable and honest. He is willing to work hard and study for the goal in his heart. He has low self-esteem but is easy to coax. Including his mother, Mr. Scholar, and the lovely scholar son, the characters are all three-dimensional. Especially Mr. Xiucai, he is the best scholar I have ever seen. Not bad, looking forward to the next post.

Written very realistically. Everyone has their own strengths and weaknesses, and they continue to grow through experience. Not everyone is born with how to deal with the world and have insights and experiences. Some people have to hit the wall many times and pay a lot of money to grow. For example, aquatic girls are difficult to change. There are also people who are good at observing and learning from other people's experiences, such as the heroine Xiao Tao. Shuisheng does seem a bit ordinary among so many people with their own strengths, but in fact he also has many advantages. By accompanying Xiaotao, Xiaotao will support his decisions. He knows that his knowledge is limited, so he listens to others. Shuisheng and his mother don't have an advantage on the way to escape, but once they settle down, they may have more opportunities to show off. In the past, when I read a novel, I lost interest as soon as I knew who the male protagonist was. Basically, once the male protagonist came out, the female protagonist would have no brains. Everything depended on the male protagonist, and the female protagonist's brilliance was gone. This book doesn't feel like it. I saw the companionship between ordinary partners. Each has its own advantages and disadvantages, and they grow together with each other.

The writing is really good. From the article, I can see the hardships and tenacity of the people at the bottom who want to survive. Natural disasters and chaos, wars are cruel, but the people who can overcome difficulties are down-to-earth people. The emotional scenes are also written very delicately. Xiao Tao and Shui Sheng are firm and sweet, while Sanya and the others are plain and bitter. When I saw the middle and later parts, I really felt aggrieved for Sanya, but then I thought, isn't Zhang's behavior just what men have done throughout the ages? The only good thing is that he has a bottom line of conscience, and Sanya is wise enough... Although the couple has emotional regrets, it is this regret that makes the characters real. Unlike ordinary romance novels, they are not superficial, they are flesh and blood, they are living people [love]

It's a rare good book, the characters have distinct personalities and each have their own strengths, I'm looking forward to it!

This is a normal ancient novel, without time travel, space, golden fingers and rebirth.

I feel that the author must have a certain amount of knowledge to write such a good article that is real and not boring! Please remember this is not a cool article, this is an article based on facts. The writing is smooth, the plot is realistic, and the characters are vividly drawn. Very nice!

It's okay. The characters are well-drawn and distinctive, but they're still not enough. In some aspects of the plot, it feels like they were deliberately weakened or demoted. That is, people who were very smart in the early stage ended up not being able to see through people's hearts. Also, some of the characters' descriptions feel a bit inconsistent with that era. Of course, overall it's not bad, mainly the heroine's daughter. Such an eccentric and unique person ended up with the prince. , I feel restrained and can't stand it. Personally, I feel that I have a unique focus, contribute to the country, try every means to grow food, and end up with a man who is two years younger than her father (the male protagonist), which I can't accept. Also, I wrote it for Sanya. My husband had a concubine which made me feel uncomfortable for a long time. I feel that Sanya is more intelligent than the heroine. It was a little sad to be paired with such a person, but in the end it was overall good. (Personally, don't spray it. If you spray it, you are right)

This book is so beautifully written, every character has flesh and blood, and some funny daily stories are interspersed in the middle. It shows the various aspects of life, and everything will not always go as planned... In short, it is beautiful! It's not a loss if you enter the trap! Wouldn't it hurt the conscience of readers who give low scores? ! ! [Code hold]

The story is novel and unconventional! Everyone in the group portrait has an online IQ, and there is a mutual kindness and scheming. My favorite characters are Shui Sheng Niang, an old lady with a simple mind, a kind heart, and an outspoken voice. It makes people laugh when listening to it. There is also Wan Ning, who was smart and lively since she was a child. She grew up in love and was not smart. She had to marry an old man and the prince as his concubine, but she was able to suppress her temper and take the initiative. There are also Xiao Tao, San Ya, Uncle Zhou... After reading, each character still stands out in my mind. The most reversal of the character is Mr. Feng (the ex-fiancé of Xiao Tao's adoptive mother). He was always thought to be a villain who sold his fiancé for the sake of his future. But later he found out that he was a pitiful person who was deceived by an adulterer and was exposed by his ex-fiancee. However, he did not defend himself for the sake of her reputation. Although the character appeared rarely, he was still memorable. The most annoying character is the prince, who made his fortune with Wanning's family, and finally planned for Wanning to marry him. The old man was still suspicious of her, so Wanning had to worry about training her. If she could be innocent and free, that woman would be willing to bother planning at home!

It still looks good now. The personalities of the main characters have changed, and the facial expressions are not serious. For example, the aunt went from praying for death when she was in the Taoist temple to the calm and calm person she is now. The description of the transformation process is well arranged.

It's rare to see a novel with reasonable logic and a small character growing up slowly. Xiao Tao's change is not sudden at all, but I like her so much.

This book kept me reading from around 8pm to 2:30am until the update was finished. I really liked it. It is very real and will explain the reasons for many things. It also taught me a lot about how people behave. I'm surprised that its rating is not high. Maybe it's because it's not a regular novel. Everyone in it is imperfect and has their own shortcomings. Be patient, read slowly, and don't dislike the characters who are growing up. From the early stage to the later stage, maybe in the middle, he will make you angry, but the more you see the back, the more comfortable you will be. (⁎⁍̴̛ᴗ⁍̴̛⁎) I will do my best to rate the book, and I hope the author will continue to write. I really like this kind of reality. I am not interested in reading classics, but I really like reading novels. It is very important for people who are from the first year of junior high school to the second year of college. [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss]

The author's writing is good, and the story is long and eloquent. I have read sixty chapters. So far, the heroine is quite lucky. All she has met are kind people, and she has been supported all the way on the way to escape. There is no top quality. Of course, the heroine herself is also very good as a little person. She is smart, smart, kind, and diligent and studious! Life is too hard, I hope that all I meet are good people and there is warmth everywhere! Give the author a five-star review and reward it. Don't update two chapters every time. Please update more. I hope it can be maintained at this level and not be unfinished!

It's very interesting, the characters have unique personalities, and the storyline is not just mindless and cool. This kind of book where the male and female protagonists grow up step by step will be more realistic than a book where the age and IQ do not match. I will keep reading it.

The escape from the wilderness in the front is quite interesting. The heroine tries her best to study and survive. It is very inspiring. The heroine is like a pendant for the hero. After entering the capital, Xiao Tao Niang died. It was heartbreaking and I couldn't watch it anymore. I feel that Sanya is more suitable to be the main heroine in the book.

This is a good book, a group portrait, every character in it is very vivid, and every branch line is wonderful. The part where Sanya took her two children to the border made me cry, and I couldn't even sleep at night. I was originally looking forward to whether there would be a story about Aunt Zhao traveling through her soul to be with Uncle Zhou, but it turned out not to be the case. When I saw the prince marrying Wan Ning, I lost sleep again [laughing and crying]. Not to mention my age, I have to be careful about what I say when marrying a royal family, for fear of saying the wrong thing and hurting my relatives and friends. I still hope to see Wan Ning and Chongren together, otherwise it would be perfect.

Very nice. Xiao Tao Sanya is looking for a way out in the midst of hardship, trying every possible means to make use of limited resources to live a good life, which embodies the wisdom of the working people. One of the two female elders has her own opinions, boldness and some insight, while the other is a simple and frugal example of a common citizen who is cautious and has never been out of the house. The male characters also have their own characteristics, the smart and knowledgeable Zhou Xiucai, the calm, bold and careful Orion, and the young Shuisheng who grows up and learns step by step! Big thumbs up👍🏻The author should not let some inappropriate comments affect his judgment. He can look at the analysis from the perspective of a bystander and use it as a reference. Don't take the objective discussion that he disagrees with seriously. Everyone's life is different. Everyone has different experiences and sees things around them. People's thoughts and qualities are too different. The world is so big and different. As long as you write what you want and what you know, I believe there will be many readers who can understand, understand and like it! Great writing! You are really great👍🏻Come on! !

I really feel like this book is very good! I strongly recommend the author to write more books. I like the author's style so much! First of all, the author's writing style is really good, with strict logic and attention to detail. I saw that the author also answered some questions in the short review, and he was very serious and responsible. Secondly, the writing of this book is more in line with reality and human nature. It is not a cliché of mindless novels. The plot is ups and downs, warm and touching, and the characters are vivid and delicate. It may not be very good to describe in detail what is good about a certain book, but you can feel the quality of the book you read. Thank you to the author for writing such a good book!

The author's writing skills are solid, the plot is not detached, the story is told eloquently, the characters' inner thoughts are carefully portrayed, and it teaches people how to be self-reliant and self-reliant in adversity. It is worth adding to your bookshelf and reading again and again! ! !

This book is really well structured... A complete group portrait. The people Xiaotao met along the way were all good people. Sanya who taught her sense, the nanny who was still thinking about her before she died, the old aunt in the Taoist temple, Shuisheng mother and son, and the rescued Uncle Zhou and Jingyu... They were all good. The one with the most three-dimensional image is the Shuisheng Niang. At first glance, she may feel a little selfish and take advantage, but who can guarantee that she has no flaws in her body? It is precisely because she has flaws that she looks cuter. Wan Ning always felt that King Xuan was not a good match. Not to mention the age difference of 20 years, Wan Ning had the ability to manage farming and be an official. It was really hard for her to figure out the calculations every day. Fortunately, she could stand on her own. After reading this book, I understand better how difficult it is for women to survive. Thank you to the author for writing such a good book [Like]