Kamen Rider Black Sun and Ultraman

The setting is good, and the plot so far is okay, but the writing style is a bit weird, using too many metaphors. The whole article is full of sentence patterns like... Like... Like... Every sentence has to use a metaphor, and every action has to be described with a lot of complex sentences. It is really too wordy, and the words are not gorgeous, but redundant, which makes people uncomfortable. Just like when I write an essay, I have to write long sentences to make up the word count, which makes people look awkward. I hope the author can make some improvements and not put the cart before the horse in pursuit of a gorgeous writing style.

I didn't feel wrong. I seemed to be watching the narration tell a story. It was a strange feeling 🤦

The protagonist's presence is too low.

Nice!!!!!

Feeling pretty good