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The writing style is very good, and the time-travel novel is easier to write than the original folk novel, but the original folk novel does not have the formula of a time-travel novel. The main thing to read is the integration into the daily life of the original novel and the unpredicted true reaction when facing the events of the original novel. And most importantly, the way of thinking that is different from the netizens in the time-travel novel is more in line with the style of the original novel. The first two are good, but the protagonist is a bit too strong as a time-travel novel. The style of "Wei Wang" is much different from that of the original work, and the overall style is a bit depressing (the focus is on the first few dozen chapters, but this is also the premise of mutual comfort in the introduction), but the original folk writing is much better than the time-travel formula writing, and the author's writing style is much better than the first time writer (although I personally think that some setting details are a bit problematic, but the original work has similar problems, so I don't ask for too much), so I give it 5 stars.

I suggest the author write more about behavior and demeanor and less about psychology. There is really too much psychology.

The author's writing is really good👌🏻. There is no sudden feeling that there is an extra person. The relationship between brother and sister is really good. Please give it a try, author.

The only way I can say that the language is not good is that it is beautiful. It is very good. There are relatively few books that are obsessed with magic. Most authors can't stick to it, but this one has persisted for so long. I hope it can continue to be updated. I will always follow this book [Blow kiss]

It's actually a super hard-to-find demon! ! ! ! ! ! ! Madam, I hereby declare that you are the Kami of the new world! ! ! ! ! ! !

Not bad, the writing is also good, the heroine is really cute

Great, I hope you stick with it.

Haha, I actually like Clara and Anri.

It's okay. I've read chapter 140 now. I hope the heroine has more role in the plot.

Damn, keep up the good work, it's really interesting! Come on more, please!

Very nice 🉑️I like it💕 [full] [full] [full]

It looks good, I hope I can see a good ending and not a bad ending

My sister is very cute, and everyone is a very cute baby. This is a long novel, and it is also very graphic. Come on, the author! I'm really looking forward to the heart rupture chapter [Please update]

Score yourself, hey hey hey, increase the number of people

Very exciting, looking forward to the follow-up Very pretty\(//∇//)\

It's really beautiful!

Super super super beautiful! ! ! ! !

Teacher, you must persevere [crying] Teacher, your writing is very good, come on, teacher! ! !

Come on, watch it well. Although I haven't watched the anime, this novel made me imagine the scenes of the anime [sending my heart]

It's super good-looking. I highly recommend the author and be sure to join and follow it.

The language is concise, the description is very successful, it is easy to understand, and the picture described can be presented in the mind. It is a good potential book.

Damn, it's really beautiful. I want to keep updating. (´๑•ω•๑`) I love you😘

Come on, teacher, Anri is so cute, and the writing is more fitting of the original character (≧ｗ≦)

The plot is really awesome, I especially like the heroine of this book