HP an Old Dream

It's pretty good. From my point of view, there aren't any red flags. Draco has good grades and Snape is Draco's godfather. These private settings are not particularly emphasized. Even if you mind, you can accept it. The narration is very bland, which is suitable for ordinary reading. The content is occasionally funny, and it is a light-hearted and joyful style. What I encountered in other HP fandoms is that there is almost no female protagonist here who is Hermione. She is originally one of the three, so it is normal for her to be close to Harry and Ron. Then the relationship between the heroine and Draco was well integrated by the author. Subtly, the two of them became friends and accepted each other, and there was no particularly obvious factional opposition. Maybe there was some gap between the heroine's father and the Lucius family, but there was no relationship between the heroine and Draco. I'm back again. I can be said to be the first reader of this book. Although there were some small flaws at the beginning, I can see a lot of room for development. It is very different from most HP fanfiction on Rotten Tomatoes now. But I really can't stand it anymore. I have abandoned the book review that I suddenly thought of adding for a while. First of all, I'm a noob at writing (this is normal in Tomato, but it doesn't matter) the first few articles are quite novel and are told from a first-person perspective. If the author keeps this up, I'll probably keep reading. Because this book didn't have the same flaws as other HP Slytherin fans at the time, but it became more and more similar later on? Then there are the common flaws among HP Slytherin fans, which I would never click on. Beautifying Slytherin characters such as Snape and Draco, the characters are seriously OOC (the fanfic is definitely OOC, but it is impossible to start with OOC. The OOC I can accept is that the character has different memories and feelings after a plot, and the OOC has been changed, which is a reasonable OOC) I won't go into details about the shortcomings of HP Slytherin fans because I'm afraid there won't be enough words to list them. If you don't care, if you look at it with a normal mind, it can be regarded as a romance novel with HP background, and the sweet one is still good (≧∇≦*). But! ! If you're like me, you have a bad taste and want to read excellent fan fiction, then forget it. To be fair, this is indeed an ordinary HP fanfic. Oh, by the way, if you don't particularly hate Ron or Ron recommends it, don't come in.

She is really good-looking. Hermione fits what most women want to be. Unlike other heroines who are always wronged, Hermione just fucks [covers face] when she doesn't accept it, and people who look at her have breast glands.

It's good-looking, there are some personal settings, but not too many personal settings that are annoying. The relationship between the heroine and Draco is also very sweet, but I have seen the latest one. I would like to ask the author not to let the heroine forgive Ron easily.

First person. Generally speaking, novels written in the first person have no writing power, and most of them are unreadable. Although the writing style of this book is not particularly good, the writing style is relaxed. The heroine's relationship with them is really funny. From the first chapter to the end, the smile never stopped. I would have thought that it would Does it feel awkward to have Hermione as the protagonist in time travel? After all, the original Hermione's character is quite impressive, but after watching it, I don't feel this way at all. Her character will not be the same as the one described in the photo. It is a brand new but somewhat similar character, and the heroine is decisive and not indecisive in her actions. It is very beautiful! !

Not bad, I personally like the way Xiaolong is bullied (´∀`) So cute [thinking][thinking][thinking] It's a pity that I don't have such a cute boy in my family (T＿T)

This book feels very good to read. There are many people in the comment section who don't like Harry Ron and Draco before the war, but I feel like I can accept it. It's just that Harry is too soft, holding on to his position as best friend, his savior aura has been weakened too much, and he feels like a little hot chick. I won't mention Ron's rebuttal personality. I feel like he's very pitiful if he doesn't have a wife. In fact, I sympathize with him. These two idiot brothers have been making wrong reasoning in the movie, so whatever stupid things these two idiots say feel like FP. It is a pity that the relationship between the three people is not as good as in the original work. Then Draco's sudden breakup didn't feel very annoying, mainly because there was no emotional description of his side, and he was always cute in the early stage, and he wouldn't suddenly dislike him because of a brief moment of alienation. It's still a refreshing novel with a taste for Chinese babies. I'm not a fan of the original novel either. I've just watched the movie and don't delve into the details. As a poisonous woman who has never been in love, I recently gave up writing when I saw someone I was dating who was too sweet. But this one is really sweet. P. S.🍅I couldn't find any other sweet articles about Dehe. Do you have any recommendations? The plot doesn't deviate too much from the original work. The heroine flaps her butterfly wings but still manages to come back round. I feel that this aspect is handled quite well.

How to put it, it exceeds 70% of female Draco Dreams novels, but it is too clear-cut. It is said that it is a strong woman. The last two children born are all named Malfoy. I don't know if the heroine changed her surname to Malfoy. I haven't specified it in detail, but I guess it has been changed. After all, none of the two children is named Granger. The family property of the Grangers will probably all be named Malfoy in the future. Well~ I'm not saying that she is a strong woman, but the heroine is indeed strong. Grindelwald's goddaughter, her strength is second only to Grindelwald, Dumbledore and Voldemort. In the later period, her status in the wizarding world was higher than that of the Malfoy family. She finally became the Minister of Magic, but as soon as she became the Minister, she immediately married Malfoy, and then there are some surnames mentioned above... It's hard to comment...

A pretty and sweet little couple, even sweeter than the edamame cream flavored Kikufu.

I declare that you have successfully become one of my favorite HP novels. After all, I only have three favorites in total.

It's not too OOC, the author's writing is good, and it's easy to bring scenes and thoughts into the story. He will be worried about Hermione, and Qingshi is a bit of a love mind, but he can be treated as a sex-transformation boss and pamper his sweetheart. After all, the young master is really good-looking. Viewers like it very much, I hope the audience is not just Hermione and Draco, but other people as well! (If you are afraid that Hermione's identity as a time traveler will be exposed, you can set it to leave no memory after watching it)

The writing is good, the plot development is basically reasonable, and the main characters' personality traits are basically in line with the original work. However, due to the differences in details, the story develops in a different direction, which is very worthy of appreciation. Compared with those so-called high-scoring articles that just borrow the names of HP characters, this article is much better.

I read it several times, but I gave up because I saw it was Dehe CP. Recently, I suddenly saw it again and I read it all night long. The result is very good, the emotional line is very sweet, and GGAD reconciles, and the final ending is perfect. Although in the 5th grade, Voldemort was a little bit cruel, but it was okay. The one who was a little miserable was Xiaolong, a broken beauty, but I have to say something. Daddy Lu and Narcissus are in true love, but Xiaolong is an accident.

It is particularly beautiful, the writing style is also very mature, and the logic is clear. It's particularly refreshing, leaning towards the growth of the heroine, and there is a growth process. It's also very easy to get along with emotionally. Dumbledore and Grindelwald reconcile. It's a very good hp article

It looks good. Even if her soul is changed, Hermione's character is still not OOC.

I have read Chapter 87 so far. The emotional line between the heroine and Xiaolong is handled very delicately and not awkwardly. They used to be very in love with each other. What's rare is that the OOC is not serious and Xiaolong is still the high-spirited Xiaolong. It's great. 👍 The other plots are also very enjoyable to read and not aggrieved. It seems to be worthy of five stars at the moment. I will review it later after reading it.

I love it so much [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] Happy Enemies, I really like the interaction between the heroine and Xiaolong. Come on, madam✊

So sweet, so sweet, so sweet! But the name of this book is An Old Dream! No knife, no knife

I've always wanted to read Hermione and Draco's articles, but I haven't found them. The ones written in big letters are really beautiful. Hehe, they're good to read. If you like them, read more.

Let me read them all. You know, I read and listen to HP fanfics at almost three times the speed. I have read no less than thirty books. I can only count the ones I like on one hand. This one is very good. I just need to update it quickly. I will go and give you gifts later. Happy New Year to everyone.

It's rare! The first person I can watch!

The writing is very close to the original work, and the characters are well created.

Narrated from a first-person perspective, it is very immersive. Hermione's reset is good, she has clear love and hate and is lively and cheerful. She is good friends with Harry and Ron, but she also has her own bottom line. The CP line with Draco is also very good. The most depressing moments were when Voldemort showed up, and when Draco "broke up".

Strongly recommend, this score will definitely be improved in the future, but I don't know if the author needs low score protection.

It's great, but the scenes where Ron and Harry misunderstood the protagonist made me want to step in and slap them twice.

Anyway, I saw that the writing is very good now, I'm waiting to gain weight [eat melon] What the author writes in big letters is really great ah ah ah ah [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

One of the few first-person novels that I can read and hope that the author will update more. Sometimes it even makes people forget about the perspective problem and has a strong sense of immersion.

Show me! Especially the dance part! Beginning: Hermione and Draco, are these compatible? Now: What a perfect match! I don't have full marks because many fan fiction comments say so. I don't understand, but I just follow the big army.

Beautiful, very beautiful. Well, a lot of the plot happened very naturally and wasn't awkward at all. Draco is also very charming in this book, and I didn't feel that the OC rating was incomprehensible. I think he looks better than many 9.2 And 9.3 Hp fans.

Nice! Hermione is really great! This Dehe is so addictive [shy]

Finally, finished reading! Really, if you keep raising books, you'll be done with it. Fortunately, you won't miss a long time [eating melon]