On My Deathbed, I Sat Bolt Upright: The Old Ones Were Me All Along

If I can hope it won't affect your outline, here is my opinion, come on Question: 1. The frame setting is still common (leading to the awareness of "already seen similar and better ones, just look at this and abandon it if it is toxic" after seeing better ones). The degree of frame jumping is too low 2. Opposites are too obvious (the color of the opposition between humans and evil gods is too bright and single, without the essence of gray and chaotic worldview, there should be opposing interests, and the interests should be dealt with in a unified manner, for example, the flesh and soul faction can cooperate, or they can oppose or backstab for the benefit of mankind) 3. The protagonist's combat power training is unclear, which leads to poor judgment of the protagonist's combat power (there is no physical stage judgment, only vague expressions of >><=, which ignores the reader's combat power too much) 3. The evil god's combat power and means are too low and rare, leading to the impression that he is not worthy of the god's name. 4. The combat power of the tiers is too close (a few 6th tiers can kill a 7th tier, making the strength quality of the upper and lower tiers mediocre.) 5. Capacity imagination and development are too low (human beings have too low capacity for unbridled imagination, just like a puppet, just stuff something into it and start performing.) A newcomer whose plot writing is very normal, I hope to make progress, like the reincarnation paradise, the writing will become better and the frame will be larger the more you write.

It's very interesting. I like the protagonist very much. I've seen many people say that the male protagonist is the Holy Father, but there's nothing wrong with helping others when he can. He won't die anyway. Such a protagonist is very charming.

It's a bit like the setting of Mingchao's male protagonist, with a big secret, but he becomes stronger from scratch, but it's also bt. Anyway, it's pretty cool. It seems like a story without a female protagonist. Although I like single female protagonist series, I feel like this one is more annoying xp

It's probably Kepi's urban fantasy. The writing and plot structure are pretty good in Tomato, but they're not too watery. Basically, there are no subplots and it's all about plot advancement. The cool part is Kepi's invincibility, and occasionally I write about the reaction of the supporting characters after the protagonist's characteristics are revealed. Using the reactions of the supporting characters to solve the boring "invincible" feeling is enough for me personally. I think this plot is basically coming to an end. If I don't expand the world view, I guess it will reach the god level. I will describe the process of defeating the evil god and fill in the holes to finish the book.

It's really beautiful, I felt so happy after watching it! The protagonist has just emerged from the fog, feeling a lack of emotion and unable to empathize with the feelings of others, to following his partners to deal with the invasion of various evil gods again and again, gradually breaking away from numbness and regaining emotions, but because of his own "immortality", he has witnessed the death of his companions countless times, but he will not be depressed because of this. The writing of the article is also very true. It is not that the people around the protagonist have a gold medal to avoid death. The protagonist has also died countless times. At the best time, the protagonist died hundreds of times in a few minutes. The author also has a lot of imagination, and the abilities of each evil god are very evil, which also caused Zhu Jun to suffer a lot. However, I feel that the pace of the latter part of the article is too fast, and it is not enough to read! The protagonist's life experience has been mysterious from the beginning of the article, and there is also a big move at the end. At the end of the article, it finally explains why the protagonist can have the ability to be immortal, and the mental pollution degree is always zero. It also explains why the earth is the only one in the entire universe that is not polluted and the origin of the protective shield. In summary, the logic of this book is clear and the rhythm is compact. It is really easy to make me grin while reading. The article also describes that a large number of superpowers do not dominate because of their special abilities. They are always willing to use their lives to exchange for the safety and happiness of more people. It can really be said that everyone in the Fog Bureau is worthy of respect. They can sacrifice their lives just to collect information about an evil god, and they will not feel that they are superior to others, and they will always be the first to rush in when they encounter danger. It can be said that it writes about the fearlessness and unity of mankind in the end of the world.

It's also a typical case of a game that doesn't start well but becomes more exciting later on. The supporting characters are pretty good. The presence of dead people everywhere is one of the highlights of the book in my opinion. Death is inevitable, and just because you are anyone does not give you any privileges, especially in this pollution-ridden worldview. I don't think this is a relatively more deliberate and quirky "hair knife", I think it is an important part of building a worldview. Of course, it doesn't mean that I'm not sad for everyone's departure. I just believe in the protagonist more and believe that he will be able to create a world with everyone () Let me add, in fact, people will basically die in the later stages of this kind of book, but the best thing about this book is that people die very plainly and ordinary. No matter who they are, whether they are intentional or unavoidable, they all just flow away like this. I really hate the deliberate sensationalism when someone dies, especially the kind that is not well-prepared. It doesn't ignite, and there is not much sadness. It's just awkward. Book fans also like to make fun of it all over the place. This work can be said to be truly in line with the worldview. Death is more rare and common. Everyone is the same when they die, and everyone is used to it. Although there will be sadness and reluctance, that's it. Good, very good. I like to read more if the author writes more

A very good book about evil gods. Although the protagonist is a bit too cold, it fits the character very well.

Personally, I think it's a little over 3 points, and I'd give it 4 points for a little bit of emotion. The advantage of this book is that the story is well designed and the plot and main line are quite clear and stable. It can be seen that there is a well-structured outline. Many novels of the same type are a bit messy. This one still makes people want to continue reading. However, it is obvious that the author's writing skills are lacking. After reading the plots one by one, I really feel that it can be written more excitingly. Both the plot and character creation are not deep enough. Of course, I cannot be too demanding on web articles, but I still want to be specific. Let me talk about a few shortcomings. First of all, I think the most important thing to improve is the portrayal of the protagonist. The cold personality does not mean the lack of inner activities and profiling of the protagonist. Although the protagonist of this book is Lu Ning, the writing perspective is a bit too third-person. Although Lu Ning has the most roles, my overall feeling after reading is still from the perspective of an observer, lacking a sense of substitution. There is a feeling that he is a supporting role with a very high role. The portrayal of the protagonist is quite lacking in flesh and blood. This is either a divinity or a cold and indifferent character that can be dealt with perfunctorily, or it lacks the protagonist's own mental journey and thinking and the sense of alienation brought about by the profile that should be there. I hope the author can make up for this flaw. In addition, the closest friends are a bit too much as foils. This is not to say that their roles are insufficient. In fact, in many scenes, it can be seen that the author wants to create more supporting characters, but their importance and influence on the protagonist are too low. No indispensable characters have appeared so far. Although the protagonist has contacted so many people and done so many things, he seems to have a poor sense of integration because of this problem, which seriously affects the readers' desire to explore the world. In short, there is still considerable room for improvement in terms of writing and characterization, and I currently buy into the plot. Unfortunately, many problems can only be compensated by reshaping the previous text, which is a heavy workload and not very promising. If these defects can be corrected later or in the next book, the quality of the book will be higher.

God knows how much I like the plot of this kind of mysterious protagonist joining the official to fight for mankind. The pace of the story is very suitable, fast-paced, one event follows another, and you can't stop after watching it. I also like the character of the protagonist very much. The descriptions of the fight scenes are detailed but not procrastinating, and the descriptions of the group portraits are very passionate. The next few hundred chapters felt a bit rushed, and some of the content about the protagonist becoming stronger was quite repetitive and a bit cumbersome (when I was following the update, I was quite anxious to see these contents that basically did not promote the main plot, hahaha). In addition, the progress of the protagonist becoming stronger in the later period was a bit too fast, and the ending was too abrupt. But I personally feel that the ideas are pretty good, and I hope the author will continue to bring good works (๑´ㅂ`๑)

It's a good read, a good read, and the important things are mentioned three times. It's one of the few books that can make me breathe from the beginning to the last page. The plot is smooth, the transitions are very reasonable, the characters are very distinct, and most importantly, it is very innovative. Except for the occasional sword, everything else is very nice. Please keep updating the author.