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This book has the ability to make people's hearts soften... After reading it in one breath, I feel like I am completely light-headed. I have been taken into Maka's wild dreamland. Everyone is doing well. Sometimes the character creation is very close to the original work. Maka's character is also very cute. I really like the chemical reaction when everyone gets along. It's just that everyone's reaction is very close to the original work. It's really incredible. It's exactly what the character will do many times. It does not refer to the iconic behaviors of some characters in everyone's eyes, but because the emotional actions that Maka takes place are particularly close to the feeling of the original character. The author is really incredible at this point. In addition, I really want to watch the heartthrob kind. I don't want Maka to feel the sourness of love, because it feels like being locked in a coffin and turning into a withered mummy. There is a big knife behind that nightmare. I was particularly flustered when I read that one. Everyone's reaction to that one felt so warm. Warm... So cute. Zoro pulled her to the bathroom and looked at the mirror. In the reflection of the mirror, she could see the friends who cared about her on the bathroom door. Oh my god, I was really about to shed tears when I was reading this. I felt like all the panic just now disappeared and I felt like I was being caught safely. Let's all continue to help each other and be happy like this. I beg the author on my knees.

It's pretty cool, but I hope the emotional lines can be controlled a little. What I've seen so far is clear about Ace and Bell. Bell knows that there are feelings but there will definitely be no results, but it doesn't matter. Sanji's is different. I feel that Sanji's heartthrob attribute can be reduced if the CP line is written. It's okay to have some feelings for Bell after a life-and-death friendship, but there are too many people who have feelings for their friends in dreams. It's not good when it's confirmed that it's Sanji's line. Although I know Maka is not this character, I still feel like both sides are like Neptune. I suggest that you can be less romantically inclined with Sanji in the early stage, and wait until the first chapter of Ten Kingdoms to warm up the relationship. If it's not Sanji's love line, then keep reducing the substantive emotional interactions, and let Sanji always interact with gentlemen and servants and make it funny.

The style is indeed very similar to the original style of One Piece, but it always emphasizes the appearance of the heroine and how cute it is, which can easily cause discomfort (of course this is my personal feeling, please ignore it if it feels different from me)

It's not OOC at all. The heroine has integrated into the team perfectly. I hope she will be a heartthrob. Don't do 1v1. Although Sanji is very good, I don't think he is the best! !

I really like this book... I was worried at first that it would be too childish, but the more I read it, the more I felt that the character creation was perfect. The quality of this book will definitely become a hit in Green River. To encounter this perfect work at this time is such a sweet torture that I can't get enough of it... [Crying] It's better to say that Princess Maka is really the character in the original work. It's so beautiful. [Crying] Come on Ace, come on Enelu, please win my sister's heart! Oh, it's so cute... I opened the software and saw that there were five chapters updated and I was so happy... My friends all thought that I was lucky enough to catch up with such a diligent book by an author... [Crying] I'm really looking forward to the cute and sweet interaction between Sister Bao and Enilu [Crying]

It's super pretty, not OOC at all (I don't think so), it's super sweet, the writing is good, and the little sister is super cute🥰, I love it so much❤️, I would like to call it the No. 1 Tomato Pirates fanfic! ! ! ! !

This book is worth reading. Whether it is the description of the original characters or the shaping of the character, this book is very good. I also personally like the interaction between Sister and Luffy. Hahaha, Sister does not feel like a marginal character in the plot like other books, or a person who steals all the attention. In this book, it feels like Sister is involved and not separated from the story. [Blowing kiss]

Why is the rating so low😢? It's really beautiful. The points finally came up, but I don't really want Sanji to be the male protagonist. Sanji is very good, but Sanji is good to every girl. Do you want someone who is good to everyone, or someone who is only good to you (personal opinion) Everyone hopes to be special.

It's good-looking, and the characters are all very realistic. Although the protagonist is a princess, she is very innocent and romantic, so I don't hate it. However, some of the descriptions are a bit silly and sweet. Also, I feel that the emotional line of this book is a bit tangled. Although there is no definite line at the moment, I hope no one gets hurt.

It's so good. Oh my god, the part about Maka's nightmare made me cry to death. I already guessed that Maka's brother is Cavendish. The little detail about becoming stronger and protecting Maka in the dream is really too good to cry (╥ω╥`). I hope the author will update it soon and I'll finish reading it every day (๑óò๑)

I feel like I want to buy Sanji stock, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhing in the time being is getting along so cute and makes your heart melt~~~The heroine is so cute and cute, and she is also working hard to become stronger! Very good baby! 🥰🥰🥰🥰 Why, boss, don't leave [crying][crying][crying][crying], I really want to continue watching OMG...

Very natural! I hope there will be more interactions with other male guests besides Sanji

It is a perfect fusion with the original work, nonsensical, inexplicable dreams, plus the dream fruit, and the super invincible cute beauty Maka, woohoo, I cried to death, except that the updates are not enough, there are no shortcomings

It's very beautiful, and the daily descriptions are very detailed. It feels like watching the different Straw Hat Crew again. The heroine's character is also very cute. Although I love to dream about being a princess, I really can't refuse her because she is too cute (bushi). I secretly hope that the hero is Sanji. A prince and a princess are the best match! ! !

The heroine wants to be a princess and Sanji is a prince, so is the CP Sanji? Please reply from the author.

It's really beautiful! ! ! ! The heroine has completely integrated into the Straw Hats! ! ! ! It really feels like watching the original plot! ! ! ! The author wrote so well! ! ! Invincible explosion recommendation! ! ! ! ! 🔥🔥🔥

Is it okay to not have the official cp, or let book friends complain about it [I'm about to cry]

Wow wow wow, it looks good. Teacher, can you give us Ace's plot in the future? Let's interact more. If it's unrequited love, it will be too painful.

It's super, super good-looking. The heroine is exactly like the original character. There is no sense of inconsistency. The ability of the Dream Fruit is also very well written. The heartthrob is not embarrassed. The writing is very good. She gets along well with the Straw Hat Pirates. It's like One Piece [Blow kiss]

It's a good book, I love reading it, it follows the plot but is not boring. Through warm and funny daily life, some different perspectives, and a detailed and appropriate way, the familiar plot becomes more innovative and not boring at all. For example, it will be developed through the branch plot of Desert Bird Bell, which is very subtle.

Super pretty! ! ! It has the style of the original manga, the heroine has the character of the anime, the super dreamy princess, the heroine really fits the pirate style! ! ! ! And adding the protagonist is not at all out of the ordinary! ! ! I hope to update a thousand chapters every day! ! !

It's very interesting. Every character has a successful character in it. One of them is watching an episode of One Piece. However, my suggestion is to reduce the amount of love. One Piece itself is more suitable for passionate people. It would be better to have less love. It can be interspersed, but not too much. Also, don't look at the low score now, it's just that there are fewer people who rate it.

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I have read Chapter 147, and it seems that he is a favorite of the group and a favorite of the heartthrob. I hope the author will add a tag in the introduction. I don't like watching this kind of thing, but people who like watching this kind of thing will probably like it. I initially watched it for the setting, hidden identity, and group portraits of Dream Fruit (I thought). The plot is okay. I don't know what to say. After all, I don't watch this kind of thing, but at least it seems reasonable to me.

Why is the score so low! ! It's rising quickly. It's really rare to see a One Piece fanfic that doesn't have broken character designs and isn't some time travel or something like that. It's just a completely new character. Highly recommended! ! !

It's so cute. It's like a dream-like opening. I believe most babies have fantasized about it before going to bed. Lying and sleeping among flowers, hahaha. The character interaction is also very good. Two friends in the dream have already appeared. Where are the remaining 100? Hehehehe

I think it's one of the best One Piece fanfics I've ever seen. The character of the heroine is actually difficult to grasp. If you are not careful, she will be written as a childish and squeamish little girl, but the author writes it very well! Maka's image is full and arc-shaped, and the author has a good grasp of the original character, so it is natural for Maka to integrate into the world of pirates, just like the original character! I found this book on Tomato which is also my little onepiece. I read it happily and I hope the author will keep writing ❤️

Wow, such a cute and adorable heroine (*/∇＼*). Maka is so cute. She is like a little angel. The interaction with the characters is so interesting. I feel like I have a good relationship with everyone. The author is also super hard-working and updates very fast. He even updated five chapters every day. I am really satisfied with reading this book (//∇//). I like it so much. I like it so much. It is my favorite pirate fanfic of the year [Adoration]

It's not too much to give yourself a five-star review [laughing][laughing][laughing] No kiss, Tomato won't let me update anymore. Goodbye in the world

The writing style is very close to the original work, and it feels like it was written by an old thief. The heroine's dream is also very interesting, and her abilities are also very interesting. She is the fruit of dreams. The male protagonist now seems to be Sanji. Is it really not possible to do it all?