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This book removes the fat nerd consciousness of the original work and replaces it with another one that is not perverted. Anyway, I think it is better than the fat boy in the original work, at least not so perverted. When he was a child, the fat boy in the original work would look at the maid with a particularly lewd look. Now the protagonist of this book has a kinder personality, but he will still fight and kill when it is time to fight. Summary: The protagonist of this book is not like the protagonist of the original book who grew up childish and wretched, but gradually matured. The protagonist of this book has a very normal character in the early stage, and it is very comfortable to watch. The protagonist's personality is a bit similar to that of the cute king, but not that type. The protagonist is very likable, but not like a crowd of people like the cute king, and the protagonist can handle other characters liking him, but the cute king can't handle the other characters liking him.

It's okay. He reincarnated (or took his body?) Into Rudy and changed certain plots of the original work. The future Rudy line seems to be okay at the moment. It's just that the overall pace is really a bit fast. And it seems that the harem should take in a lot. It seems that there should be Sylphy, Luo Qishi, Alice, Kirenu, Lilia, Qixing (to be determined?) In front of us. The main problem is that the pace is too fast. If there will be other worlds later, then I didn't say it, or the author didn't want to write too much. He has king-level strength at the age of 8, and even when he was younger, he was driving a big car. This is not easy to evaluate. Some people may really like this. The book Jobless Reincarnation is ultimately about the word growth. At present, it seems that this book should be a type of Long Aotian's refreshing novel. The protagonist uses magic to use many abilities in the anime world. It's not that Shuangwen is not good, I just feel that the lack of jobless reincarnation with the theme of growth is a bit lacking. But it's all about fanfics, and the cool ones are quite good, which can make up for the regret that the original Rudy's combat power doesn't reach the ceiling. Summary: The writing is good, the plot is Long Aotian's enjoyable, the harem should be quite popular, and the protagonist's combat power is incredible.

I haven't read the novel, but from the perspective of the anime, the protagonist is really hungry even if he goes to Kiriath slaves.

The new book only has more than 70 chapters, and not many people have read it. I gave it five stars. The protagonist replaced the original Rudy, and then some changes were made according to the plot. Most of them are original plots, which are very good. The original wife is basically accepted, and then the red-haired maid in the family is also accepted. According to current knowledge, she has gone back to the past, and including the orc who also accepted the small horse-drawn cart. Before going back to the past, there was this paragraph ()

I am a time-traveler who has not read the original work. I don't think it is a fan. It should be regarded as a refined original work. The refinement has made up for the various regrets of the original work. Pretty good. . . But I have already traveled through time. If I don't cheat and kill everyone, wouldn't I have traveled in vain? Captain Jia once said, when the imperial army did not come, you bullied me. Now that the imperial army has come, and you still bully me, wouldn't the imperial army come in vain?

So far, there are no major problems, and some uncomfortable points have been changed. So far, it's relatively ideal. After all, I enjoy reading novels online, and it doesn't have to be as uncomfortable as the original novel.

A good no-job reincarnation fanfic. Compared with the original text, it doesn't have the bad taste of the author.

The protagonist has a good character and upright views. The author has made some changes to the original plot and deleted most of the poisonous points, making the overall writing smoother and more comfortable. It is hard to imagine that a jobless reincarnation without poisonous points can be so smooth. It is simply heart-wrenching. Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง

So far, it looks pretty good. The writing is also good. I feel it is very good among jobless fan novels. It's just that I didn't expect to accept Lilia. Come on, keep writing. At least don't be a eunuch [face covering]

Very good, but I want to ask what will happen to my Aisha if she takes over as a maid [smile]

Without saying anything, I have to give it five stars for the character of the protagonist who is completely different from the original work. And judging from this attitude, it will have more harems than the original work, which is very suitable to my liking. As long as the author continues to write at the current pace, five-star praise is guaranteed. But I'm curious, now that Lilia has accepted her, how will Aisha show up? Or can it be collected? [Taste it carefully][Laugh evilly]

Personally I think it's pretty good. Although some changes from the original work are a little unreasonable and the changes are relatively blunt, they will all give their own settings and explanations, so as long as you accept these changes and read on, you will find that the plot is more reasonable. (Generally, most people who read second-generation novels will accept these) Then there is the issue of strength, as a protagonist who is different from the original work. Long Aotian's strength is the most important point of this book, and it can also be seen that the protagonist is not always smooth sailing, and there are reasons for his advancement in strength. Finally, I hope the author writes more of his own stuff.

Author, where is your home? Can I go play with you? By the way, where do you usually keep your manuscripts? I'm just curious, oh, by the way, what time of day are you usually away from home? I'm just more concerned about your work and rest health, so why don't I bring you a gift? Generally, what kind of food would not make you suspicious if you put sleeping pills in it? Don't think too much, I just want to pick some snacks that you can accept

There is a lot of original content. It can be read as another book. The character and outlook of the protagonist are okay, unlike other wretched male protagonists.

Not bad, not bad👌If you also want to have a sweet and happy life in another world, the main plot and emotions are handled very well. There are some stomach-churning plots in the original text. Through the changes made to the root person, the stomach-ache plot has been softened, making the harem open smoothly and naturally, and still being shy [shy]

I like Big Sister. The female characters in the original novel are too small. The author needs to be faster.

It's pretty good, very friendly to people like me who haven't read the original work.

The last time I saw someone so happy was the unemployed fan over at 🦔Cat

It looks good, but the pace is too fast. Let's see what the author writes later. Wow, I really don't want it to crash. Alas, it was well written in the beginning, and the sense of narrative is obviously quite good... Why... Why did it change later on...

Looks good, loves to read, watch more! However, I personally think it can be accelerated. The only drawback is that there are too few, and I finished them in one night [Blow a kiss]

It's good to read and read more. The emotional connection is relatively harmonious. It's much better than those mindless and refreshing articles.

Let me give you some encouragement points. In fact, this fanfic has a lot of problems. After reading it, it is just a refined version of Jobless. In fact, you can refer to the Jobless fanfic next door. The protagonist is a time travel and becomes Cousin Rudy or something like that. The characters and storylines in that article were well written.

It is considered a high-quality jobless product among Tomatoes.

Bigger! Better! A stronger Rudy! And more harems!

A very nice jobless reincarnation. Living in another way shows another characteristic of living. Moreover, the character's personality has not changed much. The protagonist is invincible, which makes up for the regrets of the original Rudeus.

I feel like the writing is pretty good. The idea of ​​hanging up the Dragon God and beating him up is something I haven't seen in other Wuzhi fanfics. But the only thing that makes me feel not very good is that there are too many female protagonists, really too many. [Cover face]

It's still very good, especially the change of Rudy's character.

Okay, but will the protagonist's parents be saved this time?

It sounds very natural and feels like another timeline. Very good, please give me more updates as soon as possible

The writing is very good, not inferior to the original work. I feel very comfortable watching it. I support [adoration][adoration][adoration]