After Gaining the Power of a Knight, I Work as a Train Support Person

The plot is good, but the weak point is: changing into a woman.

It can be seen that I am indeed a newcomer. I have written fan fiction before and was educated by a big boss. The mainstay of the novel is to create the character image, and the story is to serve the character image. The biggest feature of the fan fiction is that the plot is highly solidified, which will cause the plot to change when the protagonist joins. However, before writing, you must clearly understand what the main character's personality is to be, and then adapt it according to the plot. Don't force an individual into it, and don't deliberately change some things for the sake of shaping the protagonist. For example, Yanqing's youthful spirit is written very recklessly, and don't be too deliberate about some redemption, such as Cocolia. The redemption should be better laid out before and after, the erosion of the star core, the sins of many years, when you make a decision to change the ending of others, the trouble will be better. There are many blunt parts in this book. I hope the author will work hard. I support every Mihuyou fan author.

Hurry up! Come on, author, I believe you can stay up all night to finish the manuscript.

Come on, author! I hope I can keep writing!

It's okay, just don't need to join CP

I hope this trip will eventually reach the stars, a very nice book\(//∇//)\

Author, you have to hold on.