(Note: There will be some side stories attached at the end of each volume, mainly to supplement the content of the main line, and the side stories content will be updated from time to time)
After the end of the world, Li Mo awakened the extremely rare five-element power, and this power can continue to evolve and even master the power of yin and yang and the power of chaos!
Originally from the bottom of society, he established his own power in this desperate apocalypse.
Five Elements City, Five Elements Empire, Chaos God Cult, his power continued to expand, and he became the strongest person in the extraordinary history of mankind.
Reader comments
(Upper middle) Blue•Excellent (Level 9)/8.0 Points, marked...
Sense of substitution B, plug-in C, setting B, writing style A, rhythm B, imagination B, character design C, main line B, logic A.
Extra points: none
Personal feelings: Digging into the apocalyptic novel, it is a traditional high-quality book. The reborn person is too smart, smarter than the protagonist. Although it can deepen the background, it also reduces the sense of substitution. He is too far away from the protagonist, and it is a bit off (in the direction of two male protagonists).
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#Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself.
1. Evaluation of the novel
(1) Taking "Four-Star Green - Advanced (Level 0)/7.0 Points" as the dividing line, additional points may be deducted for other items based on the first nine evaluations.
(2) Recommendation grade evaluation criteria: Excellent S (+4), Excellent A (+2), Good B (+1), Average C (0), Poor D (-1), Extremely Poor E (-3), Unknown X (0).
(3) Sense of immersion: interlocking, rapid resonance, and immersion
(4) Plug-in: cheat settings
(5) Setting: World background, training system...
(6) Writing style and detailed description: standardized and smooth, with appropriate style
(7) Rhythm·Overall description: Relaxation and suspense setting
(8) Imagination·Plot expansion: Surprisingly innovative and self-consistent logic
(9) Character design•Main characters: three-dimensional and full, growing and changing
(10) Main line • Close to the center: clear and attractive
(11) Logic: plot logic, detail logic
(12) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge...
2. Rating of the novel
(1) Shangshang (a sacred book that meets the public's taste, unexpectedly excellent)─Five-star red •Super legend (level 24)/10.0 Points+.
(2) Superior (interlocking high-scoring online articles that make people addicted to it) - ① Five-star orange + • Legend (level 22) / 10 points; ② Five-star orange • Legend (level 20) / 9.5 Points +; ③ Five-star orange - • Legend (level 18) / 9.5 Points.
(3) Shangxia (a fine book in the traditional sense, a fine book with a strange style and excellent writing) - ① Five-star purple + • Legend (level 16) / 9 points; ② Five-star purple + legend (level 14) / 8.5 Points +; ③ Five-star purple - • Legend (level 12) / 8.5 Points.
(4) Upper-middle (standard online text with mature subject matter and self-consistent logic) - ① Five-star blue + • Excellent (level 10) / 8.0 Points +; ② Five-star blue • Excellent (level 8) / 8.0 Points; ③ Five-star blue - • Excellent (level 6) / 7.5 Points +; ④ Five-star green + • Standard (level 4) / 7.5 Points.
(5) Middle to lower (standard web articles with average performance and no major problems) - ①Four-star green·Advanced (level 2)/7.0 Points+; ②Four-star green-·Advanced (level 0)/7.0 Points; ③Four-star white+·Standard (-1 level)/6. 5 Points; ④Samsung white·standard (-2 level)/6.0 Points; ⑤Samsung gray+·low level (-3 level)/5.5 Points; ⑥Samsung gray·low level (-4 level)/5.0 Points; ⑦Samsung gray -·qualified (-5 level)/4.5 Points.
(6) Xia Shang (novels with major flaws are missed) - ① Three-star unqualified (-7 levels) / 4 points; ② Three-star poor (-9 levels) / 3 points; ③ One-star poor (-11 levels) / 2 points; ④ One-star extremely poor (-13 levels) / 1 point.
(7) Xiaxia (disagreement in three views, having special hobbies, seriously affecting the reading experience, and making people physically uncomfortable) - ① Discord in three views (-15 levels)/-1 point; ② Special hobbies (-17 levels)/-3 points; ③ Slight malice (-19 levels)/-6 points; ④Malicious (-21 levels)/-7 points; ⑤Significant malice (-23 levels)/-8 points; ⑥Extreme maliciousness (-25 levels)/-9 points; ⑦Unknown (-27 levels)/-10 points.
(8) Medium (standard online article that I have no interest in at all, no evaluation) Three stars unknown/x points.
(9) Inferior (female videos mixed in, non-standard online writing) 2 stars unknown/0 points.
──Sixth edition revised evaluation, 1200 words
It may be because of the first few pictures that this book has such a low score. To be honest, it is at least a 9.0. The author fully describes the only true realization of ordinary people becoming powerful individuals and captures the thoughts of most people.
Nice. The plot doesn't drag on. Not Holy Mother. The Chosen One. The reborn. There are three supporting characters in the Corpse King. I thought he was the king. Only when I looked at the back did I realize that all three were bronze. Very good and unlike other books. A supporting character is just unkillable
It's okay, there's some humanity, but not much, and it's more self-interested. However, the protagonist's title of King of Five Elements feels a bit short and not very nice. Has the author considered giving it a name, King of Five Elements? [Sneaky smile] [I understand]
It's very beautiful. The author wrote more about the plot and it's not laggy at all. It's not too decisive. The plot is okay. The fighting scenes can also be systematic. The progression of the plot is also very well written and reasonable.
Send more gifts to the author and hope there will be more ( ˃̶̤́ ꒳ ˂̶̤̀ )
The sofa definitely deserves a five-star rating
It's okay, but the skills are a bit flashy [face covering]
The protagonist has a ruthless character. To achieve the goal, any means are necessary, and the author has written many extras to make the characters more fleshed out. The first 100 pictures of this novel can be read as a post-apocalyptic scene, and the rest can be regarded as a fantasy interstellar group portrait novel.
It's very interesting. An ordinary person shows a violent side after gaining power, and has a heroic attitude. The chapters I have read so far are not poisonous at all. I hope it can continue to maintain this level.
Very novel model, beautiful!
It's okay, but the protagonist's strength is not very real (five elements ability). I feel that the development potential of the Zombie King will be much greater.
Okay, at least there are no poisonous spots, less than 60 chapters
It's nothing, I just heard two words, very good, the characters are very distinctive, there is no emotional drama
Beautiful, I like it very much
Can be very innovative
Not bad. So far, it looks okay.
The decisiveness of killing is better than most novels.
The writing is good, not like Tomato's writing
This is really cool to write. The Kyoto base was destroyed in just one chapter.
The structure is clear, the content is substantial, there is no verbosity, and everything flows smoothly!
It is ruthless and decisive in killing. I wanted to give it a five-star review when I saw the second picture. But in the fourth picture, a reborn person appeared and was crushed by the protagonist in all directions. It was even more enjoyable to watch.
If there are so few, we should take a break in the morning and evening. It is recommended to update more frequently and continuously.
Was the author influenced by the comments? [Facepalm] The previous ones were pretty good, but the latest two pictures completely gave off a feeling of venting. It felt like I was no longer not eating beef, but that I was going crazy.
The reason why I don't eat beef is not because I think people who are weaker than me are hot chickens, but because it is a metaphor for being soft on the outside and strong on the inside, which is superficially polite (such as using a statement of dietary preferences), but in fact it implies a strong rejection or threatening stance, reflecting implicit aggression? This character often avoids direct conflict but conveys an uncompromising attitude through symbolic expressions (such as references to violent scenes in movies).
I think the protagonist needs a bottom line at present, and that bottom line can be designed as the Five Elements City. In the follow-up, I don't think it should be all about how the protagonist becomes stronger. The bond between the protagonist and Wu should be strengthened, because people who don't eat beef cannot make the weak attached, but let them become people who can help themselves. After all, you let the time traveler appear, which shows that you originally wanted the time traveler to reveal to the readers how awesome the protagonist will be in the future. Then you should not make the Five Elements City a mere vassal. I should write more about the Five Elements City. Otherwise, I might as well write about Lone Wolf. After all, from the first chapter, the protagonist has always been acting alone. It is not feasible to write a story about hegemony in a lone wolf way. Up to now, my impression of Five Elements City is just a force established by the protagonist and their operating methods and rules. As for what is inside I don't know what it is like (´இωஇ｀). There are only a few characters in the city, and there is no plot. It is like a box with only painted surface and nothing inside. It is a complete drag. Just like some current novels with female protagonists, they have completely become a vase to set off the protagonist.
So I think we should write less about what resources the protagonist gets when he goes out and how powerful he becomes! Because the protagonist is currently the strongest in the world. If you continue to write, you will only be like numerical expansion, and you can only keep enemies coming from outside. I should divert my attention to the target, and the best target at present is the Five Elements City, and the zombies are there after all. The zombies you describe are not traditional zombies, but have turned into another species. So I think you can continue the concept of the first generation of zombie kings and sublimate the theme. But originally, the theme of just getting stronger, getting stronger, and getting stronger has turned into a war for racial survival.
(Upper middle) Blue•Excellent (Level 9)/8.0 Points, marked... Sense of substitution B, plug-in C, setting B, writing style A, rhythm B, imagination B, character design C, main line B, logic A. Extra points: none Personal feelings: Digging into the apocalyptic novel, it is a traditional high-quality book. The reborn person is too smart, smarter than the protagonist. Although it can deepen the background, it also reduces the sense of substitution. He is too far away from the protagonist, and it is a bit off (in the direction of two male protagonists). ─────────────────── #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. 1. Evaluation of the novel (1) Taking "Four-Star Green - Advanced (Level 0)/7.0 Points" as the dividing line, additional points may be deducted for other items based on the first nine evaluations. (2) Recommendation grade evaluation criteria: Excellent S (+4), Excellent A (+2), Good B (+1), Average C (0), Poor D (-1), Extremely Poor E (-3), Unknown X (0). (3) Sense of immersion: interlocking, rapid resonance, and immersion (4) Plug-in: cheat settings (5) Setting: World background, training system... (6) Writing style and detailed description: standardized and smooth, with appropriate style (7) Rhythm·Overall description: Relaxation and suspense setting (8) Imagination·Plot expansion: Surprisingly innovative and self-consistent logic (9) Character design•Main characters: three-dimensional and full, growing and changing (10) Main line • Close to the center: clear and attractive (11) Logic: plot logic, detail logic (12) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... 2. Rating of the novel (1) Shangshang (a sacred book that meets the public's taste, unexpectedly excellent)─Five-star red •Super legend (level 24)/10.0 Points+. (2) Superior (interlocking high-scoring online articles that make people addicted to it) - ① Five-star orange + • Legend (level 22) / 10 points; ② Five-star orange • Legend (level 20) / 9.5 Points +; ③ Five-star orange - • Legend (level 18) / 9.5 Points. (3) Shangxia (a fine book in the traditional sense, a fine book with a strange style and excellent writing) - ① Five-star purple + • Legend (level 16) / 9 points; ② Five-star purple + legend (level 14) / 8.5 Points +; ③ Five-star purple - • Legend (level 12) / 8.5 Points. (4) Upper-middle (standard online text with mature subject matter and self-consistent logic) - ① Five-star blue + • Excellent (level 10) / 8.0 Points +; ② Five-star blue • Excellent (level 8) / 8.0 Points; ③ Five-star blue - • Excellent (level 6) / 7.5 Points +; ④ Five-star green + • Standard (level 4) / 7.5 Points. (5) Middle to lower (standard web articles with average performance and no major problems) - ①Four-star green·Advanced (level 2)/7.0 Points+; ②Four-star green-·Advanced (level 0)/7.0 Points; ③Four-star white+·Standard (-1 level)/6. 5 Points; ④Samsung white·standard (-2 level)/6.0 Points; ⑤Samsung gray+·low level (-3 level)/5.5 Points; ⑥Samsung gray·low level (-4 level)/5.0 Points; ⑦Samsung gray -·qualified (-5 level)/4.5 Points. (6) Xia Shang (novels with major flaws are missed) - ① Three-star unqualified (-7 levels) / 4 points; ② Three-star poor (-9 levels) / 3 points; ③ One-star poor (-11 levels) / 2 points; ④ One-star extremely poor (-13 levels) / 1 point. (7) Xiaxia (disagreement in three views, having special hobbies, seriously affecting the reading experience, and making people physically uncomfortable) - ① Discord in three views (-15 levels)/-1 point; ② Special hobbies (-17 levels)/-3 points; ③ Slight malice (-19 levels)/-6 points; ④Malicious (-21 levels)/-7 points; ⑤Significant malice (-23 levels)/-8 points; ⑥Extreme maliciousness (-25 levels)/-9 points; ⑦Unknown (-27 levels)/-10 points. (8) Medium (standard online article that I have no interest in at all, no evaluation) Three stars unknown/x points. (9) Inferior (female videos mixed in, non-standard online writing) 2 stars unknown/0 points. ──Sixth edition revised evaluation, 1200 words
It may be because of the first few pictures that this book has such a low score. To be honest, it is at least a 9.0. The author fully describes the only true realization of ordinary people becoming powerful individuals and captures the thoughts of most people.
Nice. The plot doesn't drag on. Not Holy Mother. The Chosen One. The reborn. There are three supporting characters in the Corpse King. I thought he was the king. Only when I looked at the back did I realize that all three were bronze. Very good and unlike other books. A supporting character is just unkillable
It's okay, there's some humanity, but not much, and it's more self-interested. However, the protagonist's title of King of Five Elements feels a bit short and not very nice. Has the author considered giving it a name, King of Five Elements? [Sneaky smile] [I understand]
It's very beautiful. The author wrote more about the plot and it's not laggy at all. It's not too decisive. The plot is okay. The fighting scenes can also be systematic. The progression of the plot is also very well written and reasonable. Send more gifts to the author and hope there will be more ( ˃̶̤́ ꒳ ˂̶̤̀ )
The sofa definitely deserves a five-star rating
It's okay, but the skills are a bit flashy [face covering]
The protagonist has a ruthless character. To achieve the goal, any means are necessary, and the author has written many extras to make the characters more fleshed out. The first 100 pictures of this novel can be read as a post-apocalyptic scene, and the rest can be regarded as a fantasy interstellar group portrait novel.
It's very interesting. An ordinary person shows a violent side after gaining power, and has a heroic attitude. The chapters I have read so far are not poisonous at all. I hope it can continue to maintain this level.
Very novel model, beautiful!
It's okay, but the protagonist's strength is not very real (five elements ability). I feel that the development potential of the Zombie King will be much greater.
Okay, at least there are no poisonous spots, less than 60 chapters
It's nothing, I just heard two words, very good, the characters are very distinctive, there is no emotional drama
Beautiful, I like it very much
Can be very innovative
Not bad. So far, it looks okay.
The decisiveness of killing is better than most novels.
The writing is good, not like Tomato's writing
This is really cool to write. The Kyoto base was destroyed in just one chapter.
The structure is clear, the content is substantial, there is no verbosity, and everything flows smoothly!
It is ruthless and decisive in killing. I wanted to give it a five-star review when I saw the second picture. But in the fourth picture, a reborn person appeared and was crushed by the protagonist in all directions. It was even more enjoyable to watch.
If there are so few, we should take a break in the morning and evening. It is recommended to update more frequently and continuously.
Was the author influenced by the comments? [Facepalm] The previous ones were pretty good, but the latest two pictures completely gave off a feeling of venting. It felt like I was no longer not eating beef, but that I was going crazy. The reason why I don't eat beef is not because I think people who are weaker than me are hot chickens, but because it is a metaphor for being soft on the outside and strong on the inside, which is superficially polite (such as using a statement of dietary preferences), but in fact it implies a strong rejection or threatening stance, reflecting implicit aggression? This character often avoids direct conflict but conveys an uncompromising attitude through symbolic expressions (such as references to violent scenes in movies). I think the protagonist needs a bottom line at present, and that bottom line can be designed as the Five Elements City. In the follow-up, I don't think it should be all about how the protagonist becomes stronger. The bond between the protagonist and Wu should be strengthened, because people who don't eat beef cannot make the weak attached, but let them become people who can help themselves. After all, you let the time traveler appear, which shows that you originally wanted the time traveler to reveal to the readers how awesome the protagonist will be in the future. Then you should not make the Five Elements City a mere vassal. I should write more about the Five Elements City. Otherwise, I might as well write about Lone Wolf. After all, from the first chapter, the protagonist has always been acting alone. It is not feasible to write a story about hegemony in a lone wolf way. Up to now, my impression of Five Elements City is just a force established by the protagonist and their operating methods and rules. As for what is inside I don't know what it is like (´இωஇ｀). There are only a few characters in the city, and there is no plot. It is like a box with only painted surface and nothing inside. It is a complete drag. Just like some current novels with female protagonists, they have completely become a vase to set off the protagonist. So I think we should write less about what resources the protagonist gets when he goes out and how powerful he becomes! Because the protagonist is currently the strongest in the world. If you continue to write, you will only be like numerical expansion, and you can only keep enemies coming from outside. I should divert my attention to the target, and the best target at present is the Five Elements City, and the zombies are there after all. The zombies you describe are not traditional zombies, but have turned into another species. So I think you can continue the concept of the first generation of zombie kings and sublimate the theme. But originally, the theme of just getting stronger, getting stronger, and getting stronger has turned into a war for racial survival.
Dark enough, not holy lady, I like it
Okay. Finished reading.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Well written, five stars
Beautiful, five-star praise
Good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking