Apocalypse Descends: I Awaken the Five Elements

(Upper middle) Blue • Excellent (level 9) / 8.0 Points, marked... Sense of substitution B, plug-in C, setting B, writing style A, rhythm B, imagination B, character design C, main line B, logic A. Extra points deducted: None Personal feelings: Dig into the doomsday novel, a traditional high-quality book. The reborn person is too smart, smarter than the protagonist. Although it can deepen the background, it also reduces the sense of immersion. He is too far away from the protagonist, and is a bit off (in the direction of two male protagonists). — #Objective evaluation, if you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. 1. Evaluation of the novel (1) Taking "Four Star Green - Advanced (Level 0)/7.0 Points" as the dividing line, based on the first nine evaluations, additional points may be deducted for other items. (2) Recommendation grade evaluation criteria: Excellent S (+4), Excellent A (+2), Good B (+1), Average C (0), Poor D (-1), Extremely Poor E (-3), Unknown X (0). (3) Sense of immersion: interlocking, fast resonance, immersion (4) Plug-in: Goldfinger setting (5) Setting: world background, training system... (6) Writing style • Detailed description: standardized and smooth, style adaptation (7) Rhythm • Overall description: relaxation and suspense setting (8) Brainstorming • Plot expansion: surprisingly innovative, logically self-consistent (9) Character design • Main characters: three-dimensional and full, growth and change (10) Main line • Close to the center: clear and attractive (11) Logic: plot logic, detail logic (12) Additional deductions: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... 2. Rating of the novel (1) Shangshang (a sacred book that meets the public's taste, unexpectedly excellent)─Five-star red •Super legend (level 24)/10.0 Points+. (2) Superior (interlocking high-scoring online articles that make people addicted to it) - ① Five-star orange + • Legend (level 22) / 10 points; ② Five-star orange • Legend (level 20) / 9.5 Points +; ③ Five-star orange - • Legend (level 18) / 9.5 Points. (3) Shang Xia (a fine book in the traditional sense, a fine book with a strange style and excellent writing) - ① Five-star purple + • Legend (level 16) / 9 points; ② Five-star purple + legend (level 14) / 8.5 Points +; ③ Five-star purple - • Legend (level 12) / 8.5 Points. (4) Upper-middle (standard online text with mature subject matter and self-consistent logic) - ① Five-star blue + • Excellent (level 10) / 8.0 Points +; ② Five-star blue • Excellent (level 8) / 8.0 Points; ③ Five-star blue - • Excellent (level 6) / 7.5 Points +; ④ Five-star green + • Standard (level 4) / 7.5 Points. (5) Middle to lower (standard web articles with average performance and no major problems) - ①Four-star green·Advanced (level 2)/7.0 Points+; ②Four-star green-·Advanced (level 0)/7.0 Points; ③Four-star white+·Standard (-1 level)/6. 5 Points; ④Three-star white·Standard (-2 level)/6.0 Points; ⑤Three-star gray+·Low level (-3 level)/5.5 Points; ⑥Three-star gray·Low level (-4 level)/5.0 Points; ⑦Three-star gray-•Qualified (-5 level)/4.5 Points. (6) Xia Shang (novels with major flaws are missed) - ① three-star unqualified (-7 levels) / 4 points; ② three-star poor (-9 levels) / 3 points; ③ one-star poor (-11 levels) / 2 points; ④ one-star extremely poor (-13 levels) / 1 point. (7) Xiaxia (disagreement in three views, having special hobbies, seriously affecting the reading experience, and causing physical discomfort) - ① Discord in three views (-15 levels)/-1 point; ② Special hobbies (-17 levels)/-3 points; ③ Slight malice (-19 levels)/-6 points; ④Malicious (-21 levels)/-7 points; ⑤ Major malice (-23 levels)/-8 points; ⑥ Extremely malicious (-25 levels)/-9 points; ⑦Unknown (-27 levels)/-10 points. (8) Medium (standard online article that I have no interest in at all, no evaluation) Three stars unknown/x points. (9) Inferior (female videos mixed in, non-standard online writing) 2 stars unknown/0 points. ──Sixth edition revised evaluation, 1200 words

It may be because of the first few pictures that this book has such a low score. To be honest, it is at least a 9.0. The author fully describes the only true realization of ordinary people becoming powerful individuals and captures the thoughts of most people.

Nice. The plot doesn't drag on. Not Holy Mother. The Chosen One. The reborn. There are three supporting characters in the Corpse King. I thought he was the king. Only when I looked at the back did I realize that all three were bronze. Very good and unlike other books. A supporting character is just unkillable

It's okay, there's some humanity, but not much, and it's more self-interested. However, the protagonist's title of King of Five Elements feels a bit short and not very nice. Has the author considered giving it a name, King of Five Elements? [Sneaky smile] [I understand]

It's very beautiful. The author wrote more about the plot and it's not laggy at all. It's not too decisive. The plot is okay. The fighting scenes can also be systematic. The progression of the plot is also very well written and reasonable. Send more gifts to the author and hope there will be more ( ˃̶̤́ ꒳ ˂̶̤̀ )

The protagonist has a ruthless character. To achieve the goal, any means are necessary, and the author has written many extras to make the characters more fleshed out. The first 100 pictures of this novel can be read as a post-apocalyptic scene, and the rest can be regarded as a fantasy interstellar group portrait novel.

It's okay, but the skills are a bit flashy 🤦

It's very interesting. An ordinary person shows a violent side after gaining power, and has a heroic attitude. The chapters I have read so far are not poisonous at all. I hope it can continue to maintain this level.

The sofa definitely deserves a five-star rating

It's okay, but the protagonist's strength is not very real (five elements ability). I feel that the development potential of the Zombie King will be much greater.