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I feel pretty good. The plot is exciting and interesting, the logic is tight, and every word of the article is useful. I feel that the overall pace of the article is a bit too fast. I hope the author can slow down a bit. Everything the guy above said is bullshit! ! ! I was so angry that I waited for you for two weeks to see you update me with more than 20 photos. Damn, I'm still chirping to Tony. Well, Five Stars just got off work. Now we are on duty with two stars.

It's a good setting, but after so many chapters, I think we should remind the author that we workers are generally considered to get off work half an hour in advance. There is no such thing as getting off work on time. It is correct to go to work on time.

Although I have to get off work at a certain time, I still insist on following the original plot. Shui, when you get off work, you answer the phone from your boss to talk about work. Is it good to work as a lawyer? It's not like someone with an IQ of 4.

Nowadays, fans all feel that they write in the same way. For example, let's just talk about a topic—— "The traveler in the Three Kingdoms does not work overtime", This way of writing can be used to write in sets. First open the Romance of the Three Kingdoms, While translating in vernacular, add some of your own ideas. While the theme remains the same, the content can be processed by yourself. For example, the plot of Cao Cao assassinating Dong, Add a fan, Various changes in the middle, humorous, funny, As long as the plot remains the same in the ending because of no overtime work, that's fine. It's not troublesome to write like this, The original outline has been written. Just summarize it yourself! But the author's writing style is okay!

Let's eat stones together [laughing and crying] I can't eat it alone

A novel must at least be interesting, right?

It can't be just me, Akaashi

The first part was okay, but in the later parts, when faced with hatred, it would have been fine to just sneak away, so I don't know why I had to act it.

I can't be the only one eating it [smile] What a mess, showing off those 8 hours a day

I heard the echo of betting on dogs, I saw false hope, I knew that courage is not recklessness, I thought it was the ugly woman who created the beauty, I thought it was the fool who brought out the wise man, I thought it was the coward who highlighted the hero, but the reality is that I highlighted the European emperor!

Children, I can hold on and run away. Don't look back, I will protect you, kids, run. Yes, some brothers. In addition to this book, there is a better one, Fast Running for Children with Low Poison Resistance. Even a slow man will protect you. I wish you good luck, Man!

So far, so good. The alternative ideas in Marvel's novels are in line with the idea of ​​​​contemporary workers who are unwilling to work as cows and horses. They can work part-time, but refuse to work overtime. It's worth reading and it's worth adding to your bookshelf…

Before reading this book, I saw that it had such a low rating but there were many good reviews. I was still talking about making money together, and then I clicked on it and watched it all afternoon. After watching it for so long, I retract my previous words. The language is humorous and the logic is smooth. It's not stupid, it's a good book.

It's okay, but if you can't accept that the rescue plot is a little long, you can back off [Thinking]

The setting is very, very interesting, and the author is also very good at making jokes, and the writing is super interesting. The disadvantage is that it is not very good at grasping the rhythm. The plot advances very slowly, and it does not feel like the word count is deliberately high. It seems that the author got excited while writing and started to go off topic. It's still too short. To be honest, I only wrote about two small events. I can't judge clearly. I always feel that the author is stuck between "the structure is not tight enough to let myself go, and the plot is too scattered and off-topic" and "the writing is not crazy enough, and I care too much about the Marvel plot line, which is always a bit stumbling." But it must be said that this creative setting is so fun, so you must stick to it. Among the Marvel fanfics I have read, the previous one about checking the egg tax at the beginning is comparable to this idea, but it's a pity that that one was a scam.

Who doesn't like to leave work on time, right?

The author's mental state is too stable and urgently needs to be changed [laughing and crying]

Although the writing is average, it is acceptable. This score feels suppressed.

Just read it, it's very well written, and I won't say a word after reading it.

So far, it seems very interesting that there is no poisonous point

I don't know why the score is so low. I find it quite funny, but the updates are extremely slow.

The best Marvel fanfic Tomato has ever seen so far

How much is the protagonist's monthly salary?

Good looking, Shen Jingbing is so cool

The plot is funny and appetizing. This kind of movie is very long at first glance. I'm looking forward to it.

The setting is interesting and the plot isn't too bad.

Not too brainless

It looks great, good luck to the author!

Good-looking, I like to watch it. I like to watch it.

Fun person hahaha