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I have some points in revamping the destiny and plot. I have an idea, let Gazi and Griffith turn around, Gazi becomes the hand of God [laughing evilly], and the survivors should do the same. Gazi kills all the members of the Eagle Group in front of Griffith, except Casca. [Laughing evilly], and then Griffith protects the psychologically injured members while killing the apostles. Jiedu: Captain, the carriage is ready; Griffith: It is the leader's responsibility to protect the members!

The most important thing about natural devil fruits is elementalization, and this elementalization is not a staged ability at all, but an instinct that exists from the beginning. With elementalization, it is considered a natural fruit, rather than controlling fire, electricity, or other things. Even if your settings say that the element duration cannot be too long, or that automatic elementization is not possible, you must take the initiative yourself. Well, not at all. This is not a sparkling fruit at all. At most, it is the ability to control light. It is suspected of tricking people into it. Even if you are afraid that this ability will bring too many bugs, there are at least three places where you can limit it. The first one is the duration of the element. It lasts very short time at first, maybe only one or two seconds. The second is the range of elementalization, which can be set completely. At the beginning, the whole body cannot be elementalized, only a part of it can be elementalized. The third one is elementalization, which consumes physical strength and energy and does not last long, or it cannot automatically elementalize, which has the disadvantage that it may be attacked by others, and it can also be restricted. Speaking of which, this novel is about traveling through different worlds in the real world. It is mainly based on the world of Jianfeng, with a little bit of other worlds.

To be honest, I was quite surprised when I saw the new Jianfeng novel on Tomato. This book was so dark that I had finally forgotten it. One night when it was dark and windy, a thread of a machine broke when I was working the night shift. I was too lazy to do it, so I just checked my phone there. Anyway, it was piecework. Then I saw the Legend of Jianfeng, which I had read many years ago, but I didn't care at the time. I was bored at night, so I took a closer look and the nightmare began. Is this the price of not going to work? Every time I read it, I always have a feeling of heartache, and every time I think of the content in it, I feel heartbroken. This was the first time since I was a child. Half a year later, I still haven't recovered. I only think about it in stages, and now my not-so-good memories have been evoked again.

The writing is quite good, very good, indeed in Jianfeng. Without some extraordinary strength, I will really die.

A slow-burning novel with excellent writing! It can also be seen that the part where he calls himself Count Tanggula does not follow the so-called novel formula at all, and he is also very sure of the world view setting and plot process! Among the tomatoes filled with novels that are comparable to Changshu Arnold's Ruozhi brainless fast-food novels, this is really a fine novel!

Okay, it's pretty good, but it's too short. Will the protagonist rely on the Shining Fruit to disguise himself as a god later? I remember that there seems to be a setting that if the world is too desperate, the Hand of God will be stronger. If the protagonist disguises himself as God to prevent the war, it may be able to weaken the Hand of God.

This article is like a storm sweeping through the Fresh Little Tomato area. The character descriptions are excellent. The original characters are deep and not stereotyped, but it is not very friendly to people who have never seen Sword Style. I can't remember many of the people in it who they are. What have you done? Where did he die? [Facepalm] It is necessary for the protagonist to lose contact. Both he and Gus need to grow. There is no trial more important than life.

The protagonist can only deal with religion by religion. He can build a team of temple knights to judge the archbishop and destroy him. He can also recruit hunters with hunting dogs to track the archbishop and kill him. Later, the Demon Hunter Association, a branch of the Temple Knights Council, was established (the so-called demons are the apostles of the Hand of the Demon God, and the demon hunters, in addition to giant swords and heavy armor weapons, are light-given elf balls)

Very well written! I really like the relationship between the protagonist and Gus. They are comrades in arms, marching forward and wielding swords for dreams and ideals. At the same time, they may also face the hand of God together in the future. I hope this book can continue.

The plot is smooth, but there are too few developmental plots, and winning is like luck. There is almost no space for the application and development of abilities. The stamina and strength bonus brought by the Super Soldier Serum combined with the Shining Fruit is about the level of Colonel Ye You in One Piece. The lack of elementalization and the inability to avoid damage can be made up for by speed or knowledge.

Currently, I can only read 51 chapters, but these dozens of chapters are pretty good. Old bookworms with weak poison resistance can read it. There is nothing annoying and stupid (at least for now)

It is a good novel in Tomato, but the update speed is really hard to describe [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] The update speed of maybe one or two chapters a week is really too slow [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]

It's well written, not to mention how wonderful it is, but it's very good because I didn't feel poisoned while reading it. The writing is very smooth and the rhythm is well controlled. However, sometimes the narrative is a bit confusing, but the flaws are not concealed. Come on, this is the only one among Jianfeng fanfics that I can read [face covering]

One of the rare Sword Legend fanfics, the writing is quite good. I look forward to the protagonist beating the hand of God later [punch]. The disadvantage is that there are more typos in the later part, and it feels like voice input [Thinking] Speaking of which, as the author, you travel through thousands of worlds. Is each world one-time or will you come back? If it is that kind of road novel, I think it is a bit strange_(:з∠)_And will the protagonist have CP? Harem or single? Hey, I will probably never forget you in my life. Forget it, I am quite satisfied to see that Legend of Sword and Wind has been changed. Maybe the author has something going on in reality, and I hope to be resurrected, well, although it is unlikely

Although the name is very tomatoey, which makes people not want to read it, it is very interesting. I urge you to update it.

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To be honest, there are very few fans of Jianfeng. I also like the protagonist in the book very much. Who says this book is not good? This book is great! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I have never dared to watch anime because the clips were so miserable. It won't be blocked, right?

Come on, don't stop updating. Damn it, I finally found your book. I think you wrote it very well.

Good novels make my brain spin

The book is quite good, but the number of words is small. One chapter per day. More than 1,000 words per book is too few and not enough to read [face covering]

The protagonist is very interesting, and it's true that there are not many Legend of Sword and Legend fandoms out there, and this is one of the rare gems.

Very good, very good, looking forward to development

It's very beautiful. I feel so happy watching it.

Not bad, a bit interesting

After reading it, I rated it as edible

I always miss my old master

Gua! I still want to look at my mouth and teeth!

Rare sword style legend

Although I haven't read Legend of Jianfeng, your writing is good. I haven't read Legend of Jianfeng before, so I'm not very interested, so I'll stick with it.