I'm About to Die, and Only Now Does the Heart of Technology Awaken

The beginning is quite good, but there are also flaws. The connection from low dimension to high dimension is not good, the sense of hierarchy is not clear enough, the characters' language and dialogue are too stiff and not rich enough. The writing style improves a little bit later, but overall it is okay. Authors with ideas are still worthy of encouragement [Learned]

It's well written. It's actually a novel in another system, but the plot is too slow. If the plot were faster, the author, I can't wait to watch the war between different civilizations!