Naruto************

Much better than reading those fanfics before If I change the title and picture, it should be more attractive.

I really recommend it. At least in my opinion, the rating of 5.6 Is a bit low.

It's too long even if it's not broken. It looks a bit flowery. I suggest you divide it into larger sections.

Good-looking, good-looking, very good-looking

It looks great, please give it a thumbs up to the author

Very nice. Support the author.

Red and fiery, in a trance

Okay, good, good

Good, good, good

Very well written, keep it up