Hilde: A Tale of Two Cities

Unfortunately, it's in the first person.

It's very beautiful. I hope you, the author, can give this sad story a perfect ending!

I am so proud and so lovely that I will comment first [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

The writing is very good, there are many places where you use your own imagination without destroying the original plot. It is a very flavorful fanfic.

It looks great, good luck to the author.

It's pretty good. Come on, keep going.

It feels good, come on, author!

It looks great. I love reading it. It's so well written.

It looks good (I can't say anything good, so I can only post this, but it really looks good!)

I fully support you writing it down