I Told You to Spend Big on Cultivation, Not to Keep a Female Sword Immortal

This setting is really novel. I have never read a book like this before, but it must have a single female protagonist. I really can't accept multiple female protagonists. I don't know why I can read other books with multiple female protagonists, but when I read this book, I wanted to read Pure Love. The author's writing is really good, but I have a few small suggestions. For example, when writing about reality, you can give the protagonist some sweetness. , Or when writing about the game, you can add more interactions with the heroine, and then you can also write about making money, or the Demon Slayer Division can show off in it. In short, the above are just suggestions. If the author has an outline, just write it according to his own ideas. I will definitely support it more. It is essential to generate electricity for love every day. If you like it, you will be certified as a master.

The setting is quite novel, and the images of the female protagonist and the male protagonist are also very three-dimensional. What happens to the female protagonist at the beginning is a classic female video game. Some people may not like to watch it. I also suggest that the protagonist realize that the game is Goldfinger early, otherwise it will be very uncomfortable to watch later. Cancer cells have spread to the brain

Personally, I don't think the story is very exciting, but I can feel that I am immersed in it as if I were playing a nurturing game. The motivation of the protagonist is still full. He has no family and no dreams, but just grabs a life-saving straw to earn money. If you think about it carefully, it is actually a two-way redemption story. If you didn't meet Li Qingran, maybe the protagonist would not be able to climb a mountain with a broken leg. The only shortcoming is Li Qingran's independence. There are still some shortcomings. I hope that I won't be a giant baby all the time in the later period. Although there are scenes like swearing sermons and giving gifts, these are just feeding things into the mouth and chewing them twice. From the perspective of the protagonist, it may be enough, but I personally feel that it is a bit painful from the perspective of the reader. The update speed is still very gratifying. I don't know if the author is a big shot, but it is indeed worth looking forward to. If any friends who are hesitant to get into the trap read this review, I think the most attractive thing about this book is 1. The heroine herself is quite lovable, she is quite cute without any brains. 2The author's update speed is gratifying 3. The writing style is not gorgeous, but I personally think it is very detailed. It just feels like this when you read it, and there is no confusing description. My suggestion for the following content is that the story can be more complicated, and I hope to see more psychological growth of the heroine. Thank you to the author for your great efforts❤️❤️❤️

Hao Kan, I have followed more than 1,000 chapters of the previous book of Dragon, and I still have it. I highly recommend it. The abstract female channel logic coupled with the deliberately subversive male protagonist, to be honest, it feels boring once the novelty wears off.

Large cup on the upper side Let's talk about the advantages first? The writing is smooth, the logic is clear, and the occasional detailed descriptions can make people's eyes shine. The heroine's emotional line is also very clean and not procrastinating. However, I am still worried about whether she will become a yandere or something like that in the future (there are a lot of eccentrics recommended recently, and even only the illness can be seen but not the charisma) Secondly, there is the world view. The spiritual energy has initially recovered. It is doubtful that the Demon Slayer Division is in urgent need of power. The official organization is a bit too embarrassed. Is it a family that monopolizes information and resources? I hope the answer will be given later in the article. Then let's talk about the flaws. . . I can't find any obvious shortcomings. If I really want to say it, Sister Huang Mao in the latest chapter can die, but it is the first casualty that occurs in front of the protagonist in the article. I hope it will be taken seriously. It has great significance in establishing the protagonist's image and bringing readers' emotions into it. All in all, a great new work, looking forward to the follow-up.

A novel about cultivating immortality in this world, with a single female protagonist. It mainly tells the story of the male protagonist's mobile game connecting to another world of immortality, spending money to upgrade the female protagonist in the world of immortality, and relying on the system to pretend to be a boss in that world. The story is divided into the main line of the fairy cultivator and the male protagonist's real-life growth line that reflects reality. The subject matter is not particularly new, but it is interesting. In particular, the integration of reality and the world of immortality that will appear in the later period is full of expectations. The male protagonist is a terminal cancer patient, which adds legitimacy to the brainless money. The characters of the two protagonists are both reasonably arranged. But there are a few small problems: 1. Although there are various abnormalities in reality, such as dragon groups, monsters, game feedback, etc., The protagonist pretends not to know and has his own understanding. Although there are characters who have learned little without playing games, or who have tried plots without success. But it still feels like a bit of a forced deus ex machina. There is no more reasonable explanation, such as the male protagonist becoming a mental patient due to cancer, etc. It looks very awkward. 2. There are also situations where the author writes something good, for example, there is a small flaw in the middle of actually participating in the plot of a variety show. Although I understand that the purpose is to play Kunkun and introduce the monster dragon group and other plots, the author's writing style cannot support such fun. All the celebrities who appear in the variety show have extremely weak characters, characters and plots, and they only appear for fun. It would be much better if this section was just a live broadcast of climbing a mountain and meeting monsters. In short, although there are some minor problems, they do not affect viewing. I look forward to more updates from the author.

I gave it five stars. The subject matter is good, the ideas are novel, and innovative. It's good. Come on, I support you, the author. If I weren't a little busy and don't have time right now, I would have to write a review of about a thousand words. Anyway, come on, author. There are all the Riddlers in the back, who can say they are capable of death. It's really troublesome to be the Riddler all the time. It's really frustrating to watch.

This is really beautiful, the content is funny, witty and interesting. I almost burst out laughing, there are so many interesting things to watch, the author will update soon. . [Laughing and crying]

Wdf, all five stars? The subject matter is indeed new but not unprecedented. People in the city have become immortals, some women raise boys, and some men raise girls, and Xiaolei is constantly poisonous. Although it is nothing to me, Shennong, and this book is a slow-burn novel, not a cool novel. It can be seen that the female protagonist needs hundreds of people to find the male protagonist. Chapter, and then I found something that either could be finished, or started to pull, and I would send out sweets [eat melon] from time to time, and it turned into a love story about fantasy and the city. Although it is slow, it is not a cool story, but we don't need to torture it from time to time. Anyway, I can't wait. If you like this kind of thing, it's good to read it.

I came across a super powerful system article while fishing at work. It combines apprentice training + urban aura recovery. The writing is as smooth and powerful as a monster. You can't defeat it even if you try your best. 126 Chapters are not enough to read. It is powerful and powerful! Okay, let's talk about it more seriously: There is no doubt that this book is excellent. The system setting is full of ingenuity, and it uses a "game system" to connect the plots of the two worlds. The characters are vivid and full, and the foreshadowing is confusing. The interesting points are clear, dense and reasonable. It is an object that a newbie like me needs to learn fiercely. It is worthy of the [absolutely beautiful] in the introduction. To be honest, I have completely wiped out all my prejudices about system writing. Common criticisms of system writing (system-oriented leading to insufficient character motivation, growth curve that is too extreme, matryoshka dolls, etc.) Are completely invisible in the current chapters of this book. It is really amazing. It's beautiful, come and see it, everyone!