I Asked You to Spend Money to Cultivate Immortality, but I Didn't Ask You to Keep a Female Swordsman

This setting is really novel. I have never read a book like this before, but it must have a single female protagonist. I really can't accept multiple female protagonists. I don't know why I can read other books with multiple female protagonists, but when I read this book, I wanted to read Pure Love. The author's writing is really good, but I have a few small suggestions. For example, when writing about reality, you can give the protagonist some sweetness. , Or when writing about the game, you can add more interactions with the heroine, and then you can also write about making money, or the Demon Slayer Division can show off in it. In short, the above are just suggestions. If the author has an outline, just write it according to his own ideas. I will definitely support it more. It is essential to generate electricity for love every day. If you like it, you will be certified as a master.

The setting is quite novel, and the images of the female protagonist and the male protagonist are also very three-dimensional. What happens to the female protagonist at the beginning is a classic female video game. Some people may not like to watch it. I also suggest that the protagonist realize that the game is Goldfinger early, otherwise it will be very uncomfortable to watch later. Cancer cells have spread to the brain

Personally, I don't think the story is very exciting, but I can feel that I am immersed in it as if I were playing a nurturing game. The motivation of the protagonist is still full. He has no family and no dreams, but just grabs a life-saving straw to earn money. If you think about it carefully, it is actually a two-way redemption story. If you didn't meet Li Qingran, maybe the protagonist would not be able to climb a mountain with a broken leg. The only shortcoming is Li Qingran's independence. There are still some shortcomings. I hope that I won't be a giant baby all the time in the later period. Although there are scenes like swearing sermons and giving gifts, these are just feeding things into the mouth and chewing them twice. From the perspective of the protagonist, it may be enough, but I personally feel that it is a bit painful from the perspective of the reader. The update speed is still very gratifying. I don't know if the author is a big shot, but it is indeed worth looking forward to. If any friends who are hesitant to get into the trap read this review, I think the most attractive thing about this book is 1. The heroine herself is quite lovable, she is quite cute without any brains. 2The author's update speed is gratifying 3. The writing style is not gorgeous, but I personally think it is very detailed. It just feels like this when you read it, and there is no confusing description. My suggestion for the following content is that the story can be more complicated, and I hope to see more psychological growth of the heroine. Thank you to the author for your great efforts❤️❤️❤️

Hao Kan, I have followed more than 1,000 chapters of the previous book of Dragon, and I still have it. I highly recommend it. The abstract female channel logic coupled with the deliberately subversive male protagonist, to be honest, it feels boring once the novelty wears off.

Large cup on the upper side Let's talk about the advantages first? The writing is smooth, the logic is clear, and the occasional detailed descriptions can make people's eyes shine. The heroine's emotional line is also very clean and not procrastinating. However, I am still worried about whether she will become a yandere or something like that in the future (there are a lot of eccentrics recommended recently, and even only the illness can be seen but not the charisma) Secondly, there is the world view. The spiritual energy has initially recovered. It is doubtful that the Demon Slayer Division is in urgent need of power. The official organization is a bit too embarrassed. Is it a family that monopolizes information and resources? I hope the answer will be given later in the article. Then let's talk about the flaws. . . I can't find any obvious shortcomings. If I really want to say it, Sister Huang Mao in the latest chapter can die, but it is the first casualty that occurs in front of the protagonist in the article. I hope it will be taken seriously. It has great significance in establishing the protagonist's image and bringing readers' emotions into it. All in all, a great new work, looking forward to the follow-up.

A novel about cultivating immortality in this world, with a single female protagonist. It mainly tells the story of the male protagonist's mobile game connecting to another world of immortality, spending money to upgrade the female protagonist in the world of immortality, and relying on the system to pretend to be a boss in that world. The story is divided into the main line of the fairy cultivator and the male protagonist's real-life growth line that reflects reality. The subject matter is not particularly new, but it is interesting. In particular, the integration of reality and the world of immortality that will appear in the later period is full of expectations. The male protagonist is a terminal cancer patient, which adds legitimacy to the brainless money. The characters of the two protagonists are both reasonably arranged. But there are a few small problems: 1. Although there are various abnormalities in reality, such as dragon groups, monsters, game feedback, etc., The protagonist pretends not to know and has his own understanding. Although there are characters who have learned little without playing games, or who have tried plots without success. But it still feels like a bit of a forced deus ex machina. There is no more reasonable explanation, such as the male protagonist becoming a mental patient due to cancer, etc. It looks very awkward. 2. There are also situations where the author writes something good, for example, there is a small flaw in the middle of actually participating in the plot of a variety show. Although I understand that the purpose is to play Kunkun and introduce the monster dragon group and other plots, the author's writing style cannot support such fun. All the celebrities who appear in the variety show have extremely weak characters, characters and plots, and they only appear for fun. It would be much better if this section was just a live broadcast of climbing a mountain and meeting monsters. In short, although there are some minor problems, they do not affect viewing. I look forward to more updates from the author.

I gave it five stars. The subject matter is good, the ideas are novel, and innovative. It's good. Come on, I support you, the author. If I weren't a little busy and don't have time right now, I would have to write a review of about a thousand words. Anyway, come on, author. There are all the Riddlers in the back, who can say they are capable of death. It's really troublesome to be the Riddler all the time. It's really frustrating to watch.

This is really beautiful, the content is funny, witty and interesting. I almost burst out laughing, there are so many interesting things to watch, the author will update soon. . [Laughing and crying]

Wdf, all five stars? The subject matter is indeed new but not unprecedented. People in the city have become immortals, some women raise boys, and some men raise girls, and Xiaolei is constantly poisonous. Although it is nothing to me, Shennong, and this book is a slow-burn novel, not a cool novel. It can be seen that the female protagonist needs hundreds of people to find the male protagonist. Chapter, and then I found something that either could be finished, or started to pull, and I would send out sweets [eat melon] from time to time, and it turned into a love story about fantasy and the city. Although it is slow, it is not a cool story, but we don't need to torture it from time to time. Anyway, I can't wait. If you like this kind of thing, it's good to read it.

I came across a super powerful system article while fishing at work. It combines apprentice training + urban aura recovery. The writing is as smooth and powerful as a monster. You can't defeat it even if you try your best. 126 Chapters are not enough to read. It is powerful and powerful! Okay, let's talk about it more seriously: There is no doubt that this book is excellent. The system setting is full of ingenuity, and it uses a "game system" to connect the plots of the two worlds. The characters are vivid and full, and the foreshadowing is confusing. The interesting points are clear, dense and reasonable. It is an object that a newbie like me needs to learn fiercely. It is worthy of the [absolutely beautiful] in the introduction. To be honest, I have completely wiped out all my prejudices about system writing. Common criticisms of system writing (system-oriented leading to insufficient character motivation, growth curve that is too extreme, matryoshka dolls, etc.) Are completely invisible in the current chapters of this book. It is really amazing. It's beautiful, come and see it, everyone!

My dear, hungry mother, the writing is beautiful and true to the point!

Good article, the author's writing is unexpected [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] and it's very funny.

This is a refreshing game character development novel. It is not as boring as other similar novels. The author has a good grasp of the rhythm of the novel and the readers' pleasure. The plot does not make people uncomfortable or uncomfortable. More updates!

Already read, please update soon. The devil from outside the territory must look like the devil from outside the territory. Who can watch three pictures in one day? Let the Tomato people know and think we look down on it.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh on the plot in which the male and female protagonists heal each other have a double redemption. I can't take my eyes away every time I see a novel with this theme. I just discovered this book this afternoon and finished it in one afternoon. It's not enough. Please keep updating [Love]

It's okay. If it doesn't explode in the middle and late stages and doesn't end well, it's still a relatively good novel. The subject matter is relatively new, but the setting at the beginning is not very good. The most important thing in retracting the original evaluation is to remember to lose your mind. The protagonist in the back is suffering from bone cancer, the most serious form of cancer, and he is still angry and spends tens of thousands of krypton on his cyber girlfriend. Maybe according to your words, it is because the system has subtly influenced his emotions and personality. The first dozens or hundreds were okay, and later it even rose to more than 9,000. The protagonist is not a rich person. To put it bluntly, I really can't play this game without some money [face covering]

I really enjoyed reading it. I picked up this book yesterday and started reading it, and I finished it today. There's not much to say. Everyone who has seen it says it's awesome. Those who don't say it's awesome are definitely not normal people [please take a closer look] Before Chapter 150, it was quite interesting, and the subject matter was very good. After that, I started to use poison to lower my intelligence.

A novel work based on the collision between Xianxia and technology. "No, How Did My Electronic Girlfriend Become a Sword Immortal?" Is an imaginative novel that wonderfully combines the modern technological element "Electronic Girlfriend" with traditional immortal cultivation. The opening setting is eye-catching. The male protagonist and his girlfriend created by a virtual program have a warm and funny daily life. Later, the girlfriend accidentally gets involved in the world of immortals and starts practicing, and the plot goes beyond the norm. In terms of character creation, the transformation of the electronic girlfriend from ignorant data to a determined swordsman is exquisite. The hero's courage to follow his girlfriend into a strange world of cultivation is commendable. The development and adventure of the two's emotional lines are intertwined. The writing style is relaxed and humorous, and the world of immortals is depicted without losing the ancient charm. It uses modern thinking to deconstruct the problems of cultivation and brings readers a different reading experience. It is an innovative online article that breaks the stereotypes and is both interesting and warm.

Poison points: The heroine is too weak and the good-natured man can be said to have been at her peak in about 40 chapters (after that, this problem seems to have disappeared) The protagonist also prefers to believe in genetic locks rather than think about the problem with the game (actually, it's okay, the relevant article is not long and there is a very interesting joke) But everything went smoothly after that, the quality gradually improved, and it is certain that the male protagonist is devoted to Qingran's baby (if you think there may be more female protagonists, look down, at least there is no problem so far, she has expressed no interest in others) The official organization made a mistake in estimating the strength of the second boss in the world who can really bring crisis to the protagonist (but the impact is not big, the quantum poison is a good reflection of the arrogance of the superiors) Don't quit just because you saw that this book is for a female channel. The plot of the female channel only reaches the peak of persuading people to quit (the heroine solves her inner demons), and there is not much to follow. Cool points: The thunder and fire talisman is invincible in the world, the eye of the sky unlocks all the demons in the map, the heroine's survival rate when facing the secret realm is regarded as 0 except 99.99%, Until it rises to 99.99%, The demon sects that can be found are all the stronger ones that can be killed, and they will be dealt with personally to avoid future troubles, the plot of pretending to be the ancestor of a certain sect is not embarrassing at all and can be "realized" easily, the new heroine The sect is very down-to-earth and all members are of the same mind. People who are corrupt in this world are dead. When you encounter an aristocratic family, you can directly confront them without ambiguity. Apart from the poisonous part (mentioned above), most of the daily plots are very interesting. In addition, the author has a complete outline, so don't worry. There are more that I won't mention. The above are the ones that impressed me the most. In addition, in addition to Tomato Starting Point, I have also read more than a dozen books with millions of words. There are also 6-7 long-form novels such as Jasmine's Monster and Dawn that I have not finished. The amount of reading is still very reliable, and the author was forced to reincarnate and re-read, so he is trustworthy. When are you going to read the book with Su Lao Mo and the extra chapter about the evil dragon? I really can't keep up with the group. When I read it today, I thought of Su Lao Mo and I missed it (if there is any, because I basically don't pay attention to related things, so I don't know the details)

The subject matter is quite novel. The only drawback is that the heroine's design is not novel enough. She is one of those heroines mass-produced with standard templates. She is too authentic [face covering] It would be nice if her character was more distinct. Keep up the good work!

I just read Chapter 14. It's very interesting, but the author made a mistake in saying that it can't be considered a new theme. Female channels have already had this kind of theme, and even comics have come out. One is about raising a prince and the other is about raising a sword fairy. They are both good-looking and interesting.

The new theme is really good-looking, but the male protagonist's IQ seems a bit low in the early stage, which makes it not very comfortable to watch! Also, there are too few updates [making faces] Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

In terms of content, it is quite interesting and a bit funny. The main character is a bit crazy. In terms of character, I personally think it is quite good. The subject matter of the novel is quite novel. You can read it. It is not a scam. It would be better if the author updates it sooner.

The single female protagonist is very interesting, and the male and female protagonists are redeemed in both directions. Part of the plot is weak in logic, but it's really fun. This work reverses Yao Lao and Xiao Yan. The female protagonist is Xiao Yan, and the male protagonist is similar to Yao Lao. Really recommend! ! ! (Who would refuse a female version of Xiao Yan?)

Not bad. I was completely attracted by the setting of the electronic girlfriend Sword Fairy, and later I found out that she was an old friend [laughing evilly]. But maybe it's because new books are coming out in a hurry, and there are indeed obvious shortcomings [grievances]. For example, the protagonist is a bit too... Silly, and the pace is a little draggy. Then there is the black cat, well... I don't feel that its appearance adds anything interesting to this book. You can then make appropriate modifications and improve it [Note]. Because I am an old friend, I have very high expectations for this book. Five stars is the expected value, and I also hope that the author can make this book a masterpiece [heartfelt]. I really, really like the setting of this bookʕ•ᴥ•ʔ. Come on, author, the great pass and the long road are really like iron, now we are crossing over from the beginning. Come on! [Please update]

The setting is very interesting. At the same time, the plot is not bloody, the logic is online, and some parts are really funny. The key point is that there are pictures at the end of each chapter. It can be seen that the author is very careful. What I am looking forward to most now is that the male protagonist and the female protagonist can really see each other's physical appearance. I hope there will be more and more explosive ones.

The subject matter is novel, the content is interesting and humorous, the author's writing is good, and the characters' actions and demeanor are well described.

The ratings are rising so fast. It's true that you can't hide a good book [Note]

Unexpectedly, the writing is pretty good, it can be considered a light novel type. When you are in love, you can become an immortal and torture monsters, giving the natives of the two worlds a boost of strength and giving them a little shock to the gold-earning players. So far, I haven't broken down much after reading one hundred chapters. The female protagonist is in the realm of establishing a foundation, and the male protagonist is in the realm of Schrödinger. The worldview is not bad, it's a standard white text. However, I don't expect the two of them to actually meet until the later stages, or even the finale. Updated on a daily basis, starting with a three-year term. But for the sake of readers' enjoyment, he made a decision today that went against his ancestors! Guaranteed to update five times a day! Let all readers have a great time watching it! Otherwise, live broadcast of women's frog bellyband! [Sinister smile]

It's a good book. I won't say much. The author is a fan of Ying Penguin (the one from "World Class Machine Girl"). So far, the characters of the male and female protagonists are solid, and the plot can't be faulted. It's enjoyable to read.