Deeply flawed, abandoned midway, clickbait title. Enter at your own risk.
[An Ordinary Almost-College Guy's Extraordinary Summer Vacation + Daily Tornadoes + Strange Tales, Yet It Turns Out I'm the Strange One + No Pocket-Dimension System, But I Do Have a Sleeve That Holds the World]
The summer after Bian Chen finished the college entrance exams, he was at home, carefree as he waited for his results and filled out his college applications. He was about to become a college student. Then a typhoon swept in with torrential rain, and his life was swept up in the storm, too, turning into a roller coaster.
He thought he was just a little unlucky when it came to family, with a somewhat complicated home life. He expected life after the exams to be the same as before: go to college, graduate, then find a nine-to-five job and work around the clock. Little did he know that a strange cookbook would hit him square in the face. From then on, his daily life was like a runaway horse charging straight for the surface of the moon, riddled with pitfalls.
And the biggest pitfall in Bian Chen's life was the most complicated part of his already complicated family…
I personally think this story is quite good... The interaction between children and old monsters who are dozens or hundreds of years old... It's quite cute. I originally thought it might be more of an everyday style? (The first few chapters are indeed true.) However, the following chapters do seem a bit messy and lengthy in terms of time and narrative (?) Maybe I read them all at once and swallowed them all. By the way, Bian Chen is so miserable. He has encountered so many things in the past month, and he has been pushed (almost) away. Background and so on, after all, there is a gap of hundreds of years from the oldest one. These things cannot be explained at once. . . It would be a very, very long article to clarify the background, and it would be difficult for everyone to agree on. I can only say that as a reader, there is indeed room for improvement... (Whisper) All in all! My evaluation of this novel is pretty good... I hope it can be written better - big cheers, author!
What a pity it's not a transformation story This book is really good \(//∇//)\ *▽* It's a bit messy indeed From the previous article to the section of Dream Bone Broken Flowers, I feel like I skipped the next paragraph, which is a bit confusing, but I can still barely understand it. Good looking*▽* Come on (⁃ᴗ⁃͈)ᓂ- - -♡
Very nice to watch, it's an interesting story with an interesting protagonist Author, please update!
It's pretty good. The front part is filled with some daily heartwarming and funny things. Those who kidnap and traffick children are all dead!
Very nice, very detailed description. I feel like the world view is also very vast, and I look forward to the follow-up expansion. It's just that some chapters are not very coherent. I don't know if it's because of the revision.
A very interesting story Come on, author!
Um! I've finished reading it, but in short, I personally think it's very good! I wish the author can continue to make progress!