He Was Originally a Good Senior Brother, but He Was Tricked by His Master and Junior Sister.

Dear Xuan, it's like seeing the words before: You must understand that most of the readers of this book are readers who like harems, sexual orientation, jockeys defy their ancestors, brothers and sisters, and masters and apprentices. Knotted wings are like a cuckold. I really can't accept such a point. The harem party dislikes Lily, and the Lily party doesn't like having a male protagonist. They really hate each other. Brother Wangxuan, don't let down your younger brother's expectations [shy][shy][shy]

The emotional actions and detailed descriptions are very good. It can be said to be a science fiction film. There is no knife yet. The more worthy point to complain about is: it gives me a feeling of insisting on writing Shura Field. After all, the background is a fantasy novel of cultivation. There can be multiple women. There is no need to choose more than one. Moreover, the relationship between the junior sister and the master is very good. I think the junior sister should not be opposed to the master, nor should they be jealous of each other or the junior sister should be the loser. The two of them should have the same relationship as sisters and are compatible. The witch is understandable. Secondly, there is no need for the male protagonist to coax this and that. He feels like a scumbag, and there may even be multiple-choice questions (it's okay if it's less, the key is all multiple-choice questions). You can choose fraternity. After all, it's a fairy tale. Finally, I just hope that there will be no more female protagonists. Three or more Wen will be enough, and adding it will be boring. Everyone has their own heroine in their mind. If there are more scenes, there will be less scenes. I'm not sure if I can continue to watch it. If I add 150 chapters, the ending will be perfect. If there are more chapters, it will be a bit watery. Finally, I don't like tragedies. There are no tragedies at the moment. I just don't know whether the heroine will accept them all or choose. At present, it seems that I will accept them all. Summary: The best choice for sweet stories for men, not embarrassing, the heroine is sweet and soft, there is no ambiguous and disgusting plot, there is no family recall and the bloody plot of having to say goodbye and then climb the tower to become stronger (currently), there is no tragedy in the whole process, there are many emotional dramas, the heroine is very clear, there is no ambiguous partner (meaning only flirting but not accepting), the male protagonist is pseudo-invincible, goes in both directions, the plot is not draggy, it starts to become sweet in chapter 20, and it is not greasy, it is worth watching. Children's Gate, don't worry, read it, no knife, pure and refreshing, the worries of the three heroines above should be basically gone, I won't say more, the author will update soon @[smile]

It's pretty good. The master and junior sister are portrayed very vividly. The master is cute and the junior sister is arrogant. The rating should be deliberately lowered. However, the author has a shortcoming that it is too everyday. After all, it is a fairy tale and does not give readers the general environment of the whole world (the author talks about nine heavens and ten places). It may be good in the short term, but in the long run, it may follow the vicious cycle of writing one novel after another. Try not to focus on a few people, otherwise it may lead to boredom and withdrawal. , I suggest the author read the book "Senior Sister Never Has a Scandal". Only that kind of comprehensive writing method can become popular (don't criticize if you don't like it) (you are right if you ask)

This book is really good, especially when it describes Lu Bu's battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Noah's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes are so immersive, and the character descriptions are spot on!

To sum up, in the early stage, it seemed that the relationship line of the little junior sister might be very fast, which made people confused. But when the master came out, it suddenly became clear. It turned out that the little junior sister was used to flirt with the master and the protagonist. In front of the master, the little junior sister was like the clown meeting Batman, the devil. The female protagonist and the junior sister together are not the master's enemy, but the protagonist's rank is too high. Being sandwiched between several girls is like an old man playing with a naughty boy [angry]. When the female protagonists are still struggling, it feels that the male protagonist has already decided who the first wife, the second wife, and the third wife are [thinking] [what] [awkward laugh]

So far, the viewing experience is quite good. The heroine is vividly portrayed, with a naturally silly master who contrasts with cuteness, a cool and arrogant junior sister who brings lily at the beginning, and the witch senior sister who breaks out halfway [learned]. There are also some interesting supporting characters that add to the atmosphere. Generally speaking, the master's scenes are the sweetest and the best to watch [laughter]. Secondly, in my opinion, the senior sisters are more likable than the junior sister. The author writes that the junior sister's emotional description of the protagonist is vague. The most important part is that when the protagonist is going through the tribulation, the little junior sister's incredible actions are really difficult to break [facepalm], and I guess some of the audience will have to be dissuaded. Generally speaking, the author's book writing style is more female-oriented. Most of the plots are more emotional and daily, and the main plot probably accounts for less than one-fifth of the book. Let's take a look at the author's subsequent treatment of the little junior sister's darkening. Those who like to watch more heroines and daily romances can watch it. Those who like to watch more about cultivating immortals can already quit [learned]

The few girls in Tomato are vividly described. It is no longer the kind of text that ends with a plain text description, but the heroine's language, actions, and expressions are all in line with her character description, which is good.

It's very interesting. Currently, the junior sister has an unrequited love for the master, and the master is stupidly in love with the protagonist. The single female lead, Master, is good-looking. It would have been nice to have a Song Dynasty, but then there was Qi... I couldn't stand it anymore. It's enough to have a Master in the setting. I had to forcefully add two of them. No wonder the rating is low.

How shameless! What we want is to take it all. How do you choose, Master, Senior Sister, and Junior Sister? Come on, only children make choices, of course we want them all! The story is smooth, the emotional scenes are quite good, the rhythm is well controlled, and basically every character has his or her own characteristics. The writing style is mainly relaxed and joyful, mixed with some delicate descriptions, which really attracted me. As for the plot, in terms of emotional scenes, the protagonist does not disappear when he should appear, and he does not pretend to be deaf or dumb when he should speak, nor is he pretentious. As for the main plot, I felt it was quite smooth, not sluggish, and didn't have any bad points. Anyway, I like it, so I won't say more, and I give you five stars [I learned it]

Believe me, it's really sweet and good-looking. If you don't look good, come to me and I'll scold you. To be more serious, the psychology and personality of the characters are well described, and the setting is also good. It is not the kind of rigid control of the story line, but a very natural description, as if it is a real world running on its own.

The book is good. The heroine writes about the current junior sister. It kind of reminds me of how my girlfriend and I fell in love. I haven't read a few chapters yet, but I can actually tell that the heroine has begun to change her mind. It's a bit. After all, you start liking someone by taking care of their daily little things. My girlfriend and I were like this at the time, and then a lot of people didn't understand. I guess it should be, eh, how should I say it? Either single or fast food love? But I can guarantee that the author definitely has someone in mind, otherwise he wouldn't be able to write this article.

Brothers, it's definitely worth watching. Some people may think that the junior sister shouldn't treat the protagonist like that at first, but it doesn't matter. Looking back slowly, the master is really super cute. For now, it's more daily life, but it's fun to watch. The sweet love in the world of immortality, and the friendly sect [shy]

It is beautiful, the writing style is delicate and fresh, and some scenes that may make people feel embarrassed in some works of the same type are handled very well. It is considered a leader in this type of novels. The emotional scenes are great, and the writing style is extremely delicate. The emotional changes of the master and the junior sister are very clear, and it does not feel obscure when reading. In addition, the writing style is excellent, and it is very comfortable to read. In terms of character setting, I think Master is very interesting. It is a very simple human-machine setting. He cannot sense emotions. He is pulled ashore by the male protagonist. He likes the male protagonist but cannot express it clearly. He can only show possessiveness. Although the setting is simple, it is also the sweetest. The identity between Master and apprentice The contrast between the high and low setting and the innocent, childlike personality of the master who is ignorant of the world brings a great contrast. The key is that this dead author is also very good at using this to create a plot where the master is naturally stupid and a succubus seduces his disciples. It works every time! Damn it (gritting teeth)

It's so good. It's nearly two hundred chapters and I haven't read a single one yet.

To be honest, overall it is very interesting. The relationship between the two characters, Master and Junior Sister, and the male protagonist are very well written. The only thing I don't like very much is the emotional line of the Demonic Senior Sister. Every time I read the provocative chapter, it feels really boring. I know the author doesn't want to write about the male protagonist and the Demonic Senior Sister's decisive relationship, but of course she provoked the three of them in front of each other. You can show some expression [smile]. Of course, this is just something I don't like very much. Overall, it's a very good book, and I recommend everyone to read it. [Eat melon][eat melon]

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It's pretty good. It's a bit similar to another book about Senior Sisters and Junior Sisters. It's nice to read.

When I read a book, I pay close attention to the writing style. This author's writing style is obviously better, the distance between people is just right, and the writing style is also very humorous. The protagonist's "plug-in" is not that strong, it only plays a supporting role. The author writes more around the characters instead of writing around the "system" like other books (this article has no system), so there is no feeling of putting the cart before the horse. I haven't seen a lot so far, but it is very comfortable to read. The last book that was so comfortable was Rogue Emperor Master. It is quite difficult to find a book on Tomato that is not awkward in writing. There is a problem. The frequency of the author's "talking in the ear" is too high [laughing and crying]

The master is really well created, but it's a pity that it doesn't have a single female protagonist. If it started from the protagonist's childhood, I think it would be very sweet. I think the author is obviously very good at writing a single female protagonist, but it's a pity that this book doesn't have a single female protagonist.

After reading the beginning, I felt very comfortable, and it made me feel like I was back in the past when there were not so many online articles that I couldn't fill them up. The scenery description and artistic conception in the book are very good, and the ambiguous atmosphere between the love between men and women is even more exciting. I liked it very much at the beginning. I hope the author can maintain his standard in the future and basically hope to become the best in the field of tomato sweet articles.

It's okay, but what I want to see is the emotional line of the protagonist, and I don't want to see the person from the Demon Sect teaming up with the senior sister for cp. The rest is okay, but it just lowers my evaluation @

It looks pretty good, the sweetness is very high, and it's easier to feel fresh if there are multiple female protagonists. Good reviews Seeing this, I feel like bullying Qingruo. Why should I stick to Master every day but not Qingruo? It's unfair. I hope I can improve my relationship with Qingruo more in the future.

The characters are very full-bodied, one lacks love, the other is naturally stupid, and they are all confirming their feelings for the male protagonist step by step [I learned]

There are no pitfalls or bad endings. It is a relatively good book. There is no pressure on the whole process. It is basically a good book. After going to the upper realm, the concept of realm is a bit vague, but basically there is no big poisonous point. All the pitfalls that need to be filled are filled in. It is quite satisfactory.

It's so good. I read two books on time every day, one for this one, one for my senior fellow students, and the rest as I see fit.

I read it and found out that the author is a single girl. Seeing as your first attempt at multiple girls, I think the writing was okay. I look forward to your emotional drama.

It's good-looking, it's my favorite love triangle plot [Adoration]

The articles written by the author are very beautiful, and the emotional lines are very delicate. I have been writing about single women before, and this time I am writing about multiple women. I guess I am trying a new style. I think the writing is also very good. The three female protagonists all have unique personalities, but at present, it seems that the roles of the junior sister and senior sister are a little less. I hope the author will be more generous [laugh][laugh][laugh]

It's okay, the writing is average, the plot is average, the two female protagonists are very likable, there is no brainless pretentious plot in the past, overall, it is above average

This book, to be honest, is really good in all aspects, but many, many, many parts have been deleted. I really can't stand it anymore, so I can't help it. 4 Stars. This book by the author is really good.