I Am Not the First Person to Travel Through the Red Mansions

(Bottom middle) White +•Standard (-1 level)/6.5 Points, marked... Sense of substitution D, plug-in C, setting D, writing style B, rhythm D, imagination B, character design C, main line D, logic B. Extra points: none Personal feeling: It's too dry. Your worldview in Jie Honglou also sets up a world changed by a bunch of time travellers. The worldview settings are repetitive. The highest point I can only give is this point. Although I am not good at evaluating historical articles, what you wrote... ─────────────────── #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. 1. Evaluation of the novel (1) Taking "Four-Star Green - Advanced (Level 0)/7.0 Points" as the dividing line, additional points may be deducted for other items based on the first nine evaluations. (2) Recommendation grade evaluation criteria: Excellent S (+4), Excellent A (+2), Good B (+1), Average C (0), Poor D (-1), Extremely Poor E (-3), Unknown X (0). (3) Sense of immersion: interlocking, rapid resonance, and immersion (4) Plug-in: cheat settings (5) Setting: World background, training system... (6) Writing style and detailed description: standardized and smooth, with appropriate style (7) Rhythm·Overall description: Relaxation and suspense setting (8) Imagination·Plot expansion: Surprisingly innovative and self-consistent logic (9) Character design•Main characters: three-dimensional and full, growing and changing (10) Main line • Close to the center: clear and attractive (11) Logic: plot logic, detail logic (12) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... 2. Rating of the novel (1) Shangshang (a sacred book that meets the public's taste, unexpectedly excellent)─Five-star red •Super legend (level 24)/10.0 Points+. (2) Superior (interlocking high-scoring online articles that make people addicted to it) - ① Five-star orange + • Legend (level 22) / 10 points; ② Five-star orange • Legend (level 20) / 9.5 Points +; ③ Five-star orange - • Legend (level 18) / 9.5 Points. (3) Shangxia (a fine book in the traditional sense, a fine book with a strange style and excellent writing) - ① Five-star purple + • Legend (level 16) / 9 points; ② Five-star purple + legend (level 14) / 8.5 Points +; ③ Five-star purple - • Legend (level 12) / 8.5 Points. (4) Upper-middle (standard online text with mature subject matter and self-consistent logic) - ① Five-star blue + • Excellent (level 10) / 8.0 Points +; ② Five-star blue • Excellent (level 8) / 8.0 Points; ③ Five-star blue - • Excellent (level 6) / 7.5 Points +; ④ Five-star green + • Standard (level 4) / 7.5 Points. (5) Middle to lower (standard web articles with average performance and no major problems) - ①Four-star green·Advanced (level 2)/7.0 Points+; ②Four-star green-·Advanced (level 0)/7.0 Points; ③Four-star white+·Standard (-1 level)/6. 5 Points; ④Samsung white·standard (-2 level)/6.0 Points; ⑤Samsung gray+·low level (-3 level)/5.5 Points; ⑥Samsung gray·low level (-4 level)/5.0 Points; ⑦Samsung gray -·qualified (-5 level)/4.5 Points. (6) Xia Shang (novels with major flaws are missed) - ① Three-star unqualified (-7 levels) / 4 points; ② Three-star poor (-9 levels) / 3 points; ③ One-star poor (-11 levels) / 2 points; ④ One-star extremely poor (-13 levels) / 1 point. (7) Xiaxia (disagreement in three views, having special hobbies, seriously affecting the reading experience, and making people physically uncomfortable) - ① Discord in three views (-15 levels)/-1 point; ② Special hobbies (-17 levels)/-3 points; ③ Slight malice (-19 levels)/-6 points; ④Malicious (-21 levels)/-7 points; ⑤Significant malice (-23 levels)/-8 points; ⑥Extreme maliciousness (-25 levels)/-9 points; ⑦Unknown (-27 levels)/-10 points. (8) Medium (standard online article that I have no interest in at all, no evaluation) Three stars unknown/x points. (9) Inferior (female videos mixed in, non-standard online writing) 2 stars unknown/0 points. ──Sixth edition revised evaluation, 1200 words

For every thousand readings, there is one Hamlet. A different kind of red building has a different kind of excitement. Why give one less star? Because I feel that the people in the Red Mansion remain on the surface. People are on the stage, but their hearts are not there. There are more articles about farming in the Imperial Examination, Red Mansion, etc., Too light, too light!

It's a very good book. I read it in one sitting and I still have more to say. The writing is fluent, not cliché, and the words and sentences are also very good. Personally, I feel that this kind of novel should not be too vernacular, but should have a bit of ancient style and charm.

Very good. It's rare that it follows the plot, not the third way.

The plot is going well and the writing is really good. The author should also pay attention to paragraphing [face covering]. It's not good if one paragraph is too long.

Looking forward to cleaning up the Lai family

This book is very good and novel

Good-looking, but not too popular

Although the setting is different from ordinary Red Mansion novels, the plot is quite good.

The writing is quite interesting and the whole logic is very smooth.

So pretty! The author's writing style and accumulation are so good [laughing]

The writing is delicate and not cliché.

Damn it, give me more. You really know how to stop updating, give me more The book I read happily today makes me naturally happy too Hmm, but it feels pretty good (≧∇≦*)

The angle is novel (the background of the story and the angle of entry) and the idea is unique. It continues the story of the Red Mansions from another angle and is highly readable.

Very good book, keep up the good work

A very thoughtful author

It's pretty good, come on

Clear structure and rich content

Good luck, but I just don't want to take the exam. When will Brother Jia end up? I really don't understand these articles about "Turning to the King of Huai". To the Prince of Tong, you think he is too stable, but to the King of Jin to refute his personal opinions in public for the first time you meet him. Are you taking refuge in him? Don't you just insist on surrendering to Prince Huai? [Smile] Besides, the Emperor is in his prime, a family like yours will die faster if they surrender to the Prince.

Five-star praise, okay, direct praise

Rarely seen, the private setting is also very interesting

This book is very good, the characters are portrayed peacefully, and if the subsequent plot is up and down, this book should be the best Red Mansion fan fiction I have read so far. The story line of this book is as interesting as the Yongzheng Dynasty, which is good

Very well written. The logic is smooth. Don't know why the score is so low. Come on

Much better than the guy next door who sells dog meat with a sheep's head [punch]

This fanfic is very, very good. No magic reform, no demonization, just peaceful change

A good-looking and interesting book called The Red Mansion