Girl Band: A Promise Between a Natural-Born Talent and Me for Life

It's very comfortable to write. But when the protagonist's gravity unfolds, at this moment, I just want to see Ai Yin go to jail. The thought of adding a new member to Ai Yin's cell is like stuffing a winter snowball into a summer T-shirt, and my whole body is full of energy! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

The heroine is dull, innocent and cute. In terms of personality, she is more like a combination of Muhe Maomao and Soyo. She has Mu's quietness, Soyo's fear of loneliness, and Maomao's innocence and simplicity. She always treats people around her with direct attacks, and even makes friends with serious invitations. It's really As for the plot of Lovely Pinch [Blowing Kiss], although the heroine's concept of making friends changed a bit quickly in the early stage and there was a lack of transformation process (mainly the process of "redemption" of the heroine by Ai Yin and others and the sublimation of the heroine's emotions towards them), but overall this novel is still good. Come on, author!

This book is really heart-warming. This is what a girl band should be like. Oh my God, there is also a plot of Ten Thousand Queens of Women. Good reviews! It's so warm, the body is warm, it's great (●°u°●) "[][][][]

Great, needless to say, trust me, I am not a human being. This is the best Mygo fanfic I have ever seen on Tomato. In terms of language, plot, etc., It is very smooth and I like it. (If you can update ten times a day, I will take you to the top of the Tomato rankings [please update]) Did the author add too much material into the text? I feel so bad if I don't read it for an hour, ahhhhhh! Update it soon, in the next section, oh inner cover! ! ! Just a paragraph

I couldn't sleep in the middle of the night, so let me briefly comment on my feelings about this book: 1. First of all, the gentleness of the heroine Cai Yuexun comes to my face. This feeling is not a very stereotyped two-dimensional character. Her image can be said to be very three-dimensional. Every detail shows the reader the richness and simplicity of her heart, brave and sensitive, wandering but firm. The seemingly contradictory words are vividly displayed in Yuexun. 2. Let's talk about the writing style. I personally think that the author has a good understanding of the theme of mygo. At least it is very consistent with the mygo in my mind. Find yourself in confusion, show the truest me, and accommodate every fragile and sensitive "similar" with a tolerant heart. If I were to understand the whole mygo, I might use some lyrics to summarize it: (counting the strands of love, confirming the hot heartbeat - Haruhi Shadow, all of this is all me, hesitant, timid and weeping) Because it's me, let me accept all my true self happily - Shi, although I am often in a hurry, it is not easy to say, even if I am hesitant and confused, I will try to move forward with you - Bi Tianbanzao) When I really read this book, I found that some plot themes can easily correspond to the lyrics of Mygo. For example, the "ritual sense" of the heroine in making friends, I feel it is very consistent with Kasuga Yingzhong (the more precious it is) The more timid you are) this sentence, and when Yue Xun went to school to scare away Soyo, reminded me of Mi Xing Ye (I'm not used to overly lively scenes, so I ignored my heart), etc. What surprised me the most was the plot about Hen Card. The protagonist actually had the same idea as the screenwriter of Hen Card. It matches (I remember that the author published it earlier than the plot), but it also had the original C group singing. What I read in the author's writing was relief. Due to the length of the story, Hen Ka made the whole story seem very crowded and confusing. The author still did a good job in this regard. 3. Since there are so many advantages, it is impossible not to have disadvantages, otherwise it will be too slanderous. Regarding the disadvantages, I think there are some in the previous chapters. The plot is still too immature. For example, a few clips were inserted to portray the fragile characteristics of the protagonist. I feel that the scene between Hina and Natsumi seems to be okay, but it has a sense of violation. There are many things that I can't remember (I haven't watched Mao Ermei for a while). There is also the ritual of making friends, which many people say is inconsistent, but I feel that this is also a major selling point of this book. Also, the light novel flavor of this book will make some readers who like fast pace feel bored, because there are really many details and various descriptions interspersed 4. Regarding the insertion of other series: Because it is set as a comprehensive comic, it has intersection with many other series. I personally think it is very good, the connection is smooth, there is no sense of fragmentation, and the characters are also very rich and full. 5. The author's overall writing style is soft, and the spontaneous light novel flavor makes this book more suitable to read when you have time. It will have a deeper charm when you think about it while reading. I can feel the author's writing ideas in this book (maybe it is too good to guess?) 6. The bonding part of this book is definitely a big purchase point. It is a very serious bonding. In the author's writing, the girls' bonding is very pure (especially the heroine). This feeling reminds me of the feeling when I watched K-on (but later on it seems to be a bit like a real love OMO! The motivation is a little impure!) 7. Growth: This is definitely what I can clearly feel after reading this book. This growth is psychological, mainly the changes in some details. It really makes people feel like raising a daughter, and the daughter is still silly and sweet, which is really enough for old mothers and fathers to worry about. 6. I have been thinking about it for almost an hour, and I feel sleepy. I just want to go to sleep. If an idea suddenly pops up, I will add it below. At the same time, all book friends and book reviewers are welcome to leave comments below to exchange opinions~

Please let me read the latest chapter, I can't do anything

The setting is good, the writing is okay, and I personally think the content is quite good. I really like the succubus character of the protagonist [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

First of all, since this is my first time writing fan fiction, there may be some problems with the first few chapters, but it doesn't matter. I will get back to them later. [Working on draft] I wanted to write it because I like these dramas. I didn't expect how long it would take to write, but it took a long time before I knew it. I'm very happy too. [Love] I hope you enjoy watching it too.

While retaining the soul of the original characters, the author created a brand new story line that is both familiar and full of surprises. The interactions are naturally tense, especially the unspoken emotions between the characters are portrayed delicately and movingly.

It's very interesting. Thank you to the author for persisting and allowing me to find the book I like when I was originally short of books. I give my heart to you, the author! ! ! ! !