Develop a Sickly Heroine! but She Always Wants to Be Her Teacher

It seems to be a novice's writing, but the plot is well developed. At least it is to my liking. I hope the author will continue to practice his writing to bring me a better experience. I love you. [Blowing kiss] I was poisoned later. I have never seen anything like this. It was so uncomfortable.

Saw the latest chapter in one day. The most talked about poisonous point is that the male protagonist will be controlled by the system to force his body to carry out the plot, slap the female protagonist, say rude words, dig out spiritual roots, etc. However, the article does not make it disgusting because of this (it will not make people uncomfortable all the time). The male protagonist is too controlled by the system, but I guess To test how the heroine can affect the system, the heroine is set to be very powerful and has the ability of Crusu's tentacles (exceeding the standard), and the heroine is so thoughtful that she can see through the male protagonist. She will not stop loving the male protagonist because of his behavior being controlled by the system, but will love him to death even more (in line with the yandere character). There is no emotional line now. The male protagonist only looks at the system panel to do things and has no needs of his own (this is true, the male protagonist does not seem to have any desires). I hope that the plot of the male protagonist falling in love with the female protagonist will be written in the next update. Finally, I hope the author writes seriously and does not want to abandon the book and end it hastily. I'll try it out for you at the front line. My resistance is really high. I'll wait and see when I see it and come back to comment later. (Has finished eating) December 25, 2024 Regarding the system issues, the truth will be revealed after reading Chapter 84. If you are interested in this game but feel that the system is too poisonous, you can consider enduring it until Chapter 84----Part 1 The book will be finished on December 30, 2024. The author has given up on this book. Maybe he can't continue writing, maybe he has to work on more important things, and it's time to let go----Editor 2 The final assessment was that this book was neither a sentimental nor a love story, and it was stopped at a certain point. The ending is a reasonable one. Eat with caution. Postscript 1, January 2, 2025: I want to slap the author back to Bai Li. 20251112：，，，，，

I read the comment section, and most of them were complaining about the man-machine male protagonist being manipulated by the system. Although he clearly wanted to change, he did nothing. In my opinion, this is also the case, but I would also like to say that the protagonist has no choice but to be forcibly controlled if he does not follow the plot. If he wants to destroy his character, he will be wiped out by the system. Even the world will collapse and the apprentice will die. In this article, I only see the helplessness of an ordinary person. I can only rely on myself to let the apprentice live a better life. I can't stand it anymore and I am very tired, but I still have to go on. This article is not brainless. If it is like other articles, it is probably the protagonist who is extremely powerful and then the beautiful redeeming heroine. If you want to read this kind of cool article, you can go, I believe Those who have read 486 will understand. I feel very emotional. This is the fate of ordinary people. If you want to do something, you can only be careful. If you don't want to do something, you have to be forced to do it. It's the same as my state these days, so I like this article very much. There is nothing refreshing. There is only an ordinary person who wants to save a little girl, but he is still forced to do things that hurt the girl. Let's talk a little bit about the article First of all, according to the current situation, the protagonist's realm should be the top existence in the world, but below his apprentice The protagonist's apprentice is like the incarnation of Cthulhu, and his system is like the incarnation of heaven. I would make a bold guess that the invasion of this world by Cthulhu was due to the invasion of the heroine. In order to counter the invasion of the heroine, who is the protagonist's apprentice, Tiandao found the protagonist to forcefully correct the plot. The protagonist of this article is an ordinary person, dealing with Cthulhu and Tiandao. This also explains why the system sometimes fails, the protagonist is involved in dreams, and why Cthulhu always appears around him. I am dissatisfied with the protagonist because the system failed several times and he encountered Cthulhu events several times. He should have been aware of it, but he was still manipulated by the system and pretended not to know anything. Of course, it does not rule out that the perception has been corrected, or that there is nothing you can do no matter what, and you can only do your best to take care of your apprentice. Finally, I hope that people who read this book can realize one thing. The protagonist is just an ordinary person who is forced by the general trend. He has no ability to change. This is not a hero, a powerful one, or some invincible novel about an immortal emperor slapping him in the face. He is just an ordinary person who wants to help his apprentice under the general trend.

Give me one more chapter, I'm dying. Please, brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I feel like I'm shaking all over and I can't breathe. Please, brother, just give me one more chapter, just one more chapter, I will never touch it again, please, brother, really, just one chapter, I swear I will never touch this thing again in the future, I really can't bear it anymore, I'm tossing and turning now and can't sleep, brother, I beg you!

To me, I feel that the system seems to be from the heroine's side, or for the heroine's incarnation, but it is not a serious system. The plot is very good. As for the protagonist, it is a little bit like the Virgin, but not the real Virgin, and there are realms inside. I finished watching it, but I didn't look at the realm divisions. What realm has the protagonist reached? After all, there is something wrong with your reward. The reward for breaking through the spirit realm gives me the feeling that the combat power fluctuates, but it's pretty cool. Not bad, it's done. Come on (ง˙o˙)ว

You can withdraw after Chapter 29. I can't take the poison alone.

I like to watch this kind of abuse of female protagonists, and I like such a cold and heartless male protagonist. Others don't like it, but I like it. I have to keep it up. Others say that the male protagonist is a puppet of the system. I think the system operation is very good. He has a cold and ruthless character. The request is reasonable. Wouldn't it be better to stab the female protagonist more times? The female protagonist can also see the male protagonist's indifference. This setting is good [Thoughts]

This book is much better than other yandere or master-disciple romance books! What's more important is that it's not brainless! Not brainless! Not brainless! Clear layers! Clear structure! Say important things three times!

Alas, I finished reading it and now I understand this book. There are two female protagonists in the world, one female protagonist was raised by the male protagonist, and the other female protagonist was raised by the original owner. The one raised by the original owner saw himself being raised by the male protagonist while browsing the world, and then fell in love with the male protagonist. He pretended to be a system to make the male protagonist treat him like the original owner, so as to monopolize the male protagonist. But the male protagonist discovered that he was not true, and then the female protagonists of the two worlds merged.

The author's shaping of the plot is very immersive, and you will unconsciously fall into it every time. This made me feel a sense of inner fear towards the heroine from a third-person perspective, and I just felt a little butterflies in my heart. (Currently watching Chapter 16)

It's pretty good-looking. I want to see the blackened mouth and teeth. But the update is so slow, urgent, urgent, urgent Some people criticize the male protagonist as being a bit poisonous and being forced to do it. I prefer twists. The main thing is to see the black female protagonist imprisoning the male protagonist. The rest is just to add to the gimmick. I feel that the system is not a good thing? But the more you are imprisoned, the more you update. As for the low rating, it should be because the progress is too slow. I can accept it, but some people may not be able to accept it? It depends on your preferences No, it sucks. I want to give it a low score. It can probably be seen that the author wants to delay time, which results in the timeline being stretched all the time, but this will make the readers tired, because the reasons are all the same. They will continue only when they can't drag it on anymore. In the end, they will not be rounded out, and they may not continue writing, and the ending is scrawled.

The idea is quite good, a good novella, two stories about Bai Li and her master. Yandere is quite yandere, but she doesn't take it any further. I hope it will be a little extra and more descriptive, and the story can also write about life in modern society. It will end beautifully but quickly, as short-lived as fireworks.

It's so beautiful, brothers are all reporting it, it makes me feel hot and go straight to the sky.

Children can't be the only ones who have read this book [laugh][laugh] I actually already guessed how old this book is when I saw the introduction, but I just wanted to try it [laugh][laugh]

I'm currently looking for a book about a male master and a female apprentice, where the male protagonist travels through time and the female protagonist is the protagonist. I'm not picky, and I don't care about some of the obstacles. The Cthulhu elements are really too messy. Maybe it's because the author didn't write it well, but I really like this book.

The most terrifying yandere heroine, the male protagonist's system must have been turned into a puppet by the heroine

Don't read it if you don't have anti-toxicity. Although it's a bit toxic, I personally don't think it's a big deal. The first forty or so chapters are pretty good. I don't know how it will develop in the future.

After reading dozens of chapters, I found that many people are complaining about this system [face covering]. I have seen a lot of systems with flying flows or systems that give options. I feel good about having a different system. Except for the writing, which still needs to be polished, everything else looks good. This book is already worthy of my follow-up, so I'll continue to read it first, and if it's toxic, I'll review it later [shy]

The author paid me 10 yuan for a good review

Who said this book is bad? This book is so good.

I think it's okay, but 4 of the 5 points are for the heroine, and 1 point is for the CS system. This Dog Dior system is pure Slom.

I have only read two or three months of novels. There are hundreds of books stacked on the bookshelf, both high and low. I read this book in a day and it is the only book I have finished so far. I hope the author will continue to work hard and bring better works.

It is a relatively good book among yandere novels. The puzzle rate has become very perfect in the early and middle stages. The plot is a long and relatively perfect one. We can't get along with each other. It ends in this way. How can I put it? I didn't expect it. It feels like a bad ending but not like a bad ending at the same time. I think the ending is good at the beginning, but I don't think it is very good when it comes to the transition to the resolution. But it is still ok. Recommended

Yes, please don't underestimate the low score. In fact, there are explanations for the system behind it. It's rare for a yandere novel of the genre [face covering] to be really good.

It's okay, but the transition is a bit too fast. In the first paragraph, the persona of the cold Master is clearly maintained, but in the next paragraph, the persona seems to have collapsed. Summary: Don't read it with your brain, it's still a light-weight Sulu cultivator who can be read. But it's still a bit poisonous. I won't go into details. You can read the long review. My resistance may be relatively high, so I can continue reading, but if you want to watch it, it is recommended to read the comments first and then decide whether to watch it or not.

It's very interesting, but I'm possessive. I don't want to give high scores, but I'm still afraid that the author will hate me. I hope the author will update it soon.

I have regrets, but I still thank the author for giving it an ending.

You can read the first 38 chapters Those who haven't seen the stone behind can take a look.

It's okay, but it's a bit toxic because of the system's forced control.

Give it to Bai Li, I can only say zero for the system that feeds horses.