I Look Up at the Moon, and the Moon Is So Lovely

First of all, you told me that this is primary school student writing? 😭😭😭This is not a primary school student. This is something good that I couldn't write even when I was at the peak of my senior year in liberal arts. Why do you think the words in front of me have turned into pictures? 😭😭😭Then the article looks like a micro-group portrait. Although the black crow has a dead face, it is a bit gossipy, and the white oriole is carefree. Although Old Liao has no regrets and so on🤤🤤🤤But the most important thing is the two heroines, passionate, smart, cute, strong, proud, responsible Little Phoenix × gentle, indulgent, slow-warming, slow to feelings but she will respond to them one by one🥰🥰🥰You may not understand what Little Phoenix is if you only read the first few chapters. Why would you pay so much for the moon? After reading the chapters about first meeting and treatment, you will understand that the two are an ideal love relationship that gives to each other and takes care of each other. When he first met the sick but still sharp little Phoenix, the moon was silent and just went over the mountains and ridges to collect medicine, just for her safety and recovery. Finally, Little Phoenix always protects the moon in his arms, holding it in his hand for fear of falling, and holding it in his mouth for fear of melting. The description is vivid and vivid🤤🤤🤤The emotional transition will not make people feel abrupt, maybe because of Little Phoenix's character🥰In terms of dealing with feelings, looking at Little Phoenix's cautiousness, you will not feel Humble, because her moon will respond to her one by one, and her doting on the little Phoenix is beyond words. The proud little Phoenix will humble herself for her moon, because she is the bottom line🥰🥰🥰But what makes me feel wrong is the little Phoenix's thoughts on the impact of the contract. She should not be so proud and strong She is afraid of the eyes of the world and wants to clearly prove her love to her beloved, but maybe it is because of her strong sense of responsibility and strength that she cannot give her a heavy oath to the moon when she is not at the top. I hope that when they form a contract in the future, they will be witnessed by the whole world, the dazzling phoenix and the bright moon. It should have been in the eyes of the whole world🤤🤤🤤The last thing is this, even though it's only chapter 40, the knife keeps coming, it hurts me so much😭😭😭And why does it feel like there are so many knives buried😭😭😭I remember the moon made a deal, using an item in exchange for soul replenishment, but I think her last good medicine It must be the little phoenix, who complements her love, her pain, her happiness, her sadness, slowly fills the moon's body and mind, and finally picks up the beautiful moon and holds it tightly in her arms🥰🥰🥰This is only chapter 40 and it really gives me a lot of feelings. I hope the author can keep writing. I want to witness and bless their love. Actually, I thought it was a long one, because it was the first book, so I didn't plan to write a long one. I felt a little rushed in the second half. When I think about it, I discovered this book at about forty chapters. When I read it, my eyes really lit up. The writing style, the characterization, and the emotional lines. The combination of these made me feel a lot about Chu Jiao and Yue Rong. I really like their story, the mountain cabin, the arrogance and pampering, the enthusiasm and slowness, in short, I like it, and I wish you all the best. If the author still has plans to open a book, I hope he can be more confident. Anyway, I like it very much [sending my heart]

I approve of this writing style!!! I'm usually very discerning and never see the novels I want to read. It's been a long time since I read a novel that allowed me to finish it calmly and without being impetuous. [Working on draft]

Usually the purpose of reading immortality articles is to become an immortal. I didn't expect that the protagonist could not become an immortal in the end. It's quite original and a bit regretful, but it is still an excellent article. I must give it a five-star review to support it.

Because the author and teacher are too busy, I haven't updated the new book so I came to read this one. The teacher's writing style is really good, and the plot, rhythm, character description, and narrative techniques are flawless. The rendering is very, very good, and the characters are very three-dimensional... The lack of emotion, the faint color that is like a layer of film but cannot be touched, and the unintentional but helpless description are particularly suitable. The rising sun opens the eyes of the full moon with its fiery and direct, strong love, longing, turbulent but gentleness, so that the round becomes extremely bright. "Imperfect" women are the most perfect women... I've finished reading it, and I can't get enough. Too short and heartbroken, but supporting the teacher! Please keep writing😭, I wish the teacher all the best in real life

The writing is quite good, and there are no problems with the characters and plot. However, after reading it, I always felt that something was wrong. I don't know, maybe it's because the transition to a new environment is too fast every time, and the background environment is a bit lacking. Then the relationship between the two heroines is very good. The setting of Qing Leng Shou is really delicious all the time. In the end, the plot is complete and smooth.

Why is there so few people reading such a beautiful book? Did I come too early?

I like the two protagonists very much [Admiration] The plot is interesting so far, but not boring. I feel it will be better in the future 👍

The author is so cruel, and the ending is like this😭😭

Not bad, a very high-quality book in Tomato

Very nice and sweet, but not too long. It would be better if there were more words.