Zhanshen: Nine to Five, Hongying, Don't Expect Me to Work Overtime

Now that I have seen War of Gods, let me comment first. It is well written, and it feels a bit silly. At least I can understand it. There are also problems. The quality of God Wars has dropped a lot compared to the previous ones. It feels like I want to write big scenes, highlight the character of the supporting characters, and want the protagonist to passively strategize. However, it is obvious that the writing power cannot support it. The writing of the big scenes is a bit messy, and the protagonist also feels a bit forced. To be honest, every time I see something reversed, I get goosebumps. With Li Jing's skills, facing a one-armed man, and knowing that he would be harassed if he used Shiva's Resent, under these three conditions, he actually had to use Shiva's Resent because of some reverse scale. To be honest, it made me dizzy. The character is established, but the protagonist cannot serve the character, but makes the character more three-dimensional through the character. I know I want to emphasize that I don't want to work overtime, but on the one hand I want to fight, and on the other hand I want to get off work after overtime. Deliberately highlighting the character is embarrassing, which really affects the perception. When it comes to business, be serious, be frivolous and have a bottom line, be lazy but have a sense of justice. Only in this way can you build the soul of the character and make people serve the character instead of the character matching the character. So far, it looks okay. I haven't read many God-Decapitating fandoms yet. I'm homophobic. One of them is this one and one of Big Gray Wolf. They were all outstanding in the early stage. In the middle stage, my inspiration dried up and I started to let myself go. I hope I can write more in the future. I really like this subject matter.

Didn't we talk about Sichuan Jing earlier? Chapter 26: Is this a pool again?

Under a miracle, the entire Cangnan disappeared, and Lin Qiye knelt on the ground in a daze. Su Bai seemed to be unable to bear it, pointed at Cangnan and said: "You guys are fine." After saying that, he vomited out a mouthful of blood and fell into coma.

I remember that before the term dog licking came out, it was called "affectionate" I remember before the word love brain came out, it was called "pure love" I remember that before the word volume appeared, it was called "hard work" I remember that before the word abstraction came out, it was called "humor" I remember that before the word funny girl came out, it was called "pistachio" I remember it was called "Pu Xin" before the word "dead pretending" appeared. I remember that before the word red temperature came out, it was called "blush" I remember that before the word affectation came out, it was called "weakness" I remember before the word embarrassment came out, it was called "shy" I remember that before the word narcissism existed, it was called "confidence" I remember before the word "show off" came out, it was called "sharing" I remember before the word backtalk came out, it was called "explanation" I remember that before the word clip sound came out, it was called "baby sound" I remember that before the word aloof existed, it was called "quiet" So...

This is a very beautiful novel that I can't put down. From the moment I turned the first page, I was deeply attracted. The fantasy world constructed in the book is grand and delicate, and every scenery and character is vivid. The protagonist is tenacious and full of wisdom, never flinching in the face of many difficulties, and his growth process is gripping. The plot is full of ups and downs, with twists and turns one after another. One moment I was so nervous that my heartbeat was racing, and the next second I was pleasantly surprised by the unexpected twist. The author has a profound writing skills, describes the battle scenes with excitement, and depicts the emotions with exquisite detail. I was completely immersed in it, laughing and crying along with the story. All in all, this novel is really great and I highly recommend it to everyone!

I laughed so hard "Amitabha, we have to poach people faster"

[Laughing evilly] The best fanfic of God-Slayer, bar none! ! ! It's pretty cool, why are the ratings so low? It looks 10,000 times better than the one next door that starts with the Supreme God. . Don't scold, everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables. After all, they are all supreme gods. One attack of the same level is equal to A, and I can't resist even my ultimate move [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's okay, it's pretty good to watch, don't worry about it while watching it. This looks pretty cool

Hahahahahaha

Good! Quite funny! Quite humorous! Quite cheap! Very naughty! Quite relaxing! It's chapter 20 and I haven't seen any serious violence! I hope the author will be as humorous and funny in the future! Five stars for you! Come on! Awesome!

So far, it looks pretty good. I haven't seen the plot yet.

Very good, very pretty

Oops, this is the best God-Decapitating fanfic I've ever read. I especially like the attitude of showing off. It suits me so well.

It was okay in the early stage. Almost halfway through, the author opened a water plant. Good guy, that water... Got it, 💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦 💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦 💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦 💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦 💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦 💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦

Super Invincible Thunderbolt is great to watch. I like the character design of the male protagonist.

Nice, very nice

Li Yifei is the real concept god, right? I don't know how many God-killing fanfics I have read. Li Yifei: "No matter who you are here, what if you know the plot? As long as I don't come to report the crime, you can't touch me."

It's a very good book. 9 Points is definitely enough. It's a low rating. It's funny and fun. It's worth reading.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

Don't be infatuated with me, my heart is solid

Brothers, brothers, may I ask, is there a female protagonist in this book? If so, who? Can you tell me?

Write one more chapter, I want to read and think about tea but not food, darkness creeps

@☝🤓I thought of the strange usage of the Arrow of Destiny. Why can't the protagonist launch it as an arrow? In this way, wouldn't the protagonist's fist be sure to hit? And you can't attack the protagonist during the launch process. You can also launch teammates, or launch the enemy to the enemy's enemy after hitting the enemy [laughing]

I suddenly thought of a very sao operation. Doesn't the protagonist have a skill that must be successful? What if the thing thrown is not a lethal weapon, but a daddy? [Sneaky smile] It will definitely hit the face, and the taunting effect will definitely be full.

Good, good, good, good, look good Look, look, look Shuangshuangshuang Madam, madam, you are interested in me push

I'm not an expert on this, but I'd like to express my opinion anyway. After I carefully read your question and thought about it for a long time, I finally decided not to describe my point of view because I don't know how to answer it. Like I said at the beginning, I'm not an expert on this either.

So far, it's still OK. I can give it five stars.

There are a lot of typos, but overall it's fine.

Good

I laughed so hard that my stomach hurt from laughing in the middle of the night and I couldn't stop [laughs]