Immortality**********

Overall, it's pretty good. It seems to be pure and simple at the moment. The protagonist also has the flavor of a pseudo-invincible. Those who like pseudo-invincibility can enter boldly. The one-sided marriage in the comment area can be taken away. Isn't it normal for the protagonist to be excellent and some people admire the protagonist? If the protagonist is excellent but no one likes the plot, it would be abnormal, right? As long as the protagonist doesn't go in the direction of getting married, that's fine. Instead of writing that if a man likes the protagonist, he will get married, and if a woman likes the protagonist, she will marry him. The main thing is to see the development of the protagonist.

The story is simple, the writing is excellent, and the writing is a bit casual. There is zero description of women's clothing, women's bodies, and female degeneration. After attaining immortality, I felt a lot of emotions. The heroine grew up step by step. People around her died and changed, and life changed in all kinds of ways. It's a group portrait story. The author's writing skills are pretty good, and the use of poetry is perfect. Not surprisingly, he should be a liberal arts student. The pace is fast, the supporting characters are well portrayed, and the short story is also well written. The battle scenes are well described. It's a pity to say that it is discontinued. This book should be finished. At least explain how the heroine becomes the strongest and the fate of several disciples.

The first thirty chapters are more female-oriented, but the author pulls it back later, and overall it's okay.

It's okay, but the emotional storyline I watched with the protagonist made me a little frustrated and I always felt a little bit angry inside.

First of all, the plot is still okay and good to watch, but the orientation of the protagonist should be clearly stated. Is it without cp? If so, don't engage in ambiguous relationships. If the relationship is not well written, you can slap them all to death. Learn from "It's just a little bit of trouble" [Thinking] [Laughs] The protagonist is not ruthless enough, please develop quickly. After becoming an immortal and destroying the world, who can still be a scumbag in front of you?

Seeking immortality and seeking immortality is a state of progress, but becoming immortal from the beginning is indeed a curse.

The characters are very successfully created, they are all flesh and blood, and the plot is also very exciting, especially the atmosphere in the play. Overall, this book gave me a good feeling, and I recommend reading it.

The content is very good. The author can write a story about the third generation of the golden-armored young man and the protagonist.

It's good to read. I hope to continue writing. I'm used to seeing a lot of people cultivating immortality and transforming their gender. I rarely see such good things. It's very novel.

I'm afraid it will be taken off the shelves and I'll have to wait and see if it's worth it. I've been reading this book for at least 4 years, and I'm very satisfied with this one.

A certified bookworm, it's good-looking, coherent, both exciting and toxic, it can be read with or without brains, girls can watch it and boys can watch it, and the protagonist can be treated as a pure heroine.

When I look at the back, I feel like I'm reading the Immortal Essay [Eating Melon]

Come on, that's good, Chang Sheng Wen. I hope you will continue to work hard in the future.

It looks okay, it's my type anyway

Hurry up and write, the author is really good-looking

The first part is actually average, but it gets better and better, and the level improves quickly in the second part, so it's worth reading.

@ Why does it look more and more like a married woman? Could you please tell me, the author, so that I can avoid the lightning. [Eat melon]

Good, good, good

Nice looking hahaha

Luxurious publication, really luxurious publication!

Big cheers for the author!

Good book, continue to support

Nice! Don't change your marriage!

Red and fiery, in a trance

Maybe it's because my poison resistance is relatively high. In this series, you are actually among the best, although your combat power is a bit messy.

Come on, come on, come on, come on! ! ! ! ! ! !

There are no big problems at the moment. Five stars

It's great, but I don't know why the book reviews are so low

Not bad, not bad. I found this book in the afternoon. It was good at the beginning. It will become more and more exciting after chapter 30.

Very nice, but I don't know why the rating is low?