**

It has changed a lot (it hasn't changed yet), the writing is excellent, and there is almost no description of women wearing women's clothes and subverting their bodies. The emotional lines are silky smooth, the emotions are pulled in place, and the ambiguous descriptions are full. The supporting characters are well-cast, especially the two of them, Lao Huang, who are very funny and abstract. Basically, it's a story where the protagonist takes his sister through a different world and gets a mission to save the world, but the beginning is miserable, and he becomes stronger step by step, and then by the way, the protagonist falls in love with a god, and then becomes a girl again, tsk tsk.

It's not bad. It's mature and a little jerky. Although a lot of settings made me a little confused at first, but then the plot unfolded very well. I hope the author will continue to work hard ↖(^ω^)↗

The writing style feels very good, the pace is relatively slow (I personally think it is okay), and the character portrayal is also good, but why is the score so low and there are so few reminders? Isn't it going to end someday... [Crying] [crying] [crying]

So far, it's still worthy of five stars. It's interesting and doesn't have any bad points, and I've deliberately avoided them. If you insist on giving the protagonist such a high status and talent, don't force yourself to lose. In other words, if you must have cg to defeat, it is best to rely on external moves.

Just a passerby, I hope the author of this book is happy every day

I read the last book just a few chapters ago, so I'm already a veteran, okay?

I've finished reading it and I think it's very good. I've read a lot of books and I've lost my appetite, but the settings of this book are very novel and the characters are well drawn.

Very pretty, but I haven't changed into a girl yet. I feel like I need to change the title of the book. This title will give people the feeling that this book is about a man and a woman.

The setting is good, mainly because not many people read the new book, but when the rating is high, people will naturally come.

Come on, sister who writes books (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ*, her writing is really interesting [Like]

It's very interesting. The plots are interlocking. The foreshadowing echoes before and after. The characters are well portrayed. The plot is unexpected and different from Fan Fan.

Interesting, good-looking, love to watch, watch more

Let me give you five stars first [eating melon]

Come on, you can do it 👍

Come on, author, work hard

There are a lot of jokes and it's quite relaxing to read. Good book.

It's quite beautiful, I feel like I'm getting more and more addicted the more I look at it [laughs]

The author works hard

I rely on the writing to be in line with what I want to see. When will the protagonist completely become a woman? Come on, author, update w

It looks good, good luck to the author