Demon Slayer *********

I really want to see a heroine standing in the villain camp. The novels I have read before are either about villains. In this case, the heroine suddenly rebels and joins the protagonist camp. The image of the heroine is perfectly created [shy]

Author, you are simply my blessing after a long drought! My god! I have been reading for a long time, and I have read a lot of Demon Slayer fans. Most of them are decent. Even if they are villains, they are not bad and are completely uncomfortable. For example, the ones where villains fall in love with humans, or fall in love with Muzan, and then there are the messy time-travelers who bring skills from other worlds. I really had enough, and as expected, it still smells like family. When I saw the cover, I clicked in. Soon... After reading the introduction, I directly liked, followed and added it to the bookshelf. After reading half of it, I felt that I had no regrets. It is really a good read. The heroine is very attentive, very distressing, and very three-dimensional. I hope the author will never stop updating! My spiritual food depends on you! [Almost crying] @ That's great, it's pure evil, I'm saved! No, Gomen, if I remember correctly, there seemed to be only more than 2,000 people reading last night, and when I woke up there were 25,000 people!

The writing is definitely very good. Yuanyi is a chosen one but he also pays great attention to emotions. It is true that I hate ghosts very much, but I will be merciful because they are my relatives. It makes sense for the heroine to turn into a ghost in order to fight the disease. But I guess the ending will not be good. After all, many of the people who were eaten were chivalrous ghost slayers. It would be nice to have a decent death in the end.

It's so good, so good, so good. It's the ghost story that I've been able to read the most in a long time. The rest are either with the Ghost King Jiang Jiang, or betraying the Ghost King and getting together with the Demon Slayer Squad. I like Keiko so much, I'm Keiko's dog! [Adoration]

It is very consistent with the original work. The character of the heroine is also quite cute. She is very loving and respects her brother. She is a very good lady who cherishes her loved ones. If you can hope that she can return to the present world and live an ordinary life with her relatives and friends. Being a ghost is too contrary to conscience. In this book, Wuhan has a little bit of conscience and is good to the heroine.

I tied it in one night. The story is very attractive. It does not jump directly to the main plot. I will probably write other stories about Ghost Moon. The protagonist has a very distinct personality and a good image. In short, it is spicy.

It is very well written. Although the title and introduction of the book are deceptive and are aimed at the so-called extreme evil, we only see the helplessness of ordinary people and their obsession with their families, as well as the complexity of being neither human nor ghosts, the irresistible fate of human beings, and the obsession to live. But he turned into a ghost for various reasons that are understandable, but because of his former human heart, he was unable to turn into a pure flower of evil without any scruples, nor was he able to take advantage of all the advantages to become stronger. In fact, it was a bit disappointing. The protagonist could obviously be more ambitious.

It's really nice to see the explosion. This article is really invincible and beautiful. I also want to ask if Iwakatsu and Sange will die later in this book [I'm almost crying] When I read the comic, the death of Sange has always been my regret [crying] [crying] [crying] And our heroine's baby should not be separated from his brother in the end [crying]

This is the first time in fan fiction that I have seen an author make the protagonist so flesh and blood. The protagonist has his own beliefs, goals, dreams, hobbies, etc. It feels like he is really a living person presented to the readers. The spoiler is a small flaw. I hope it can be optimized and changed into foreshadowing. Also, I am not opposed to knives. Knives will sublimate the work, just like Eri of the Dragon Clan, but I still wish there would be less knives. Why is the setting silt? Then the protagonist uses the breathing method to fight again. The ghost's characteristic should be the blood ghost technique. I hope more words can be used when fighting the boss. This is the most beautiful Demon Slayer fanfic I have ever read. I hope the author will update more frequently [Blow kiss]

Keep it up, it's been taken off the shelves, but it's still okay... I think it's the best among all the fanfic series I've read! I really like this kind of fan fiction written with flesh and blood and own thoughts. Why has it been removed from the shelves [crying][crying][crying]

Really awesome! ! ! It's so beautiful and the author's writing is superb! ! Super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super beautiful! ! ! The kind that makes you feel uncomfortable if you don't watch it for a day! ! !

The emotions are very delicate and real. When I read Chapter 182, it was obviously a whole chapter of monologue, but it didn't feel boring. It was like I was watching Keiko talk from the side. She was like a living creature of flesh and blood. Every sentence she said was very suitable for herself. The author must have carefully shaped her. At the same time, I have some opinions that I don't know are appropriate. I can't help but want to express them. There is no right or wrong between you or me. I hope the author will not pay too much attention to them. After Butterfly died, Keiko was depressed, and so was the plot. The entire plot of Flower Street has spent a lot of time writing about characters like child molesters and fallen concubines, but Keiko seems to have lost her charm, and the plot has become a bit boring. Please write more about Keiko, she is the protagonist, she is the core, and readers have always cared about her. I personally don't want too many characters in the original novel. After all, those who read this novel are probably already familiar with them. Finally, I wish the author to be full of ideas and never get stuck. I will stay up late every night to catch up on updates! Please come on!

Brothers, I really can't stand it when I see Xiao Huazi. I read online and saw that including this one, there are only three books that can make me cry. The first 60 chapters alone have already crushed 99% of Tomato's brainless system cool books. The pace is slow and intense, but there are actually some interesting points in the early stages that are worth watching, such as the heroine's desire for life and the psychological interaction with her two brothers. The writing is quite good. The most important point is that the heroine does not know the plot. She did not change some plots of the original work. Instead, it seems to have inserted a new character based on the original story, but it does not coincide with the theme of the original work. I even think that the original anime directly wrote the plot of this book into it, and even those who weren't the original author wouldn't be able to spot it. And I see that various works, including anime, have a standard for evaluating quality. "If you truly feel the sadness or joy a character experiences and are moved, then this work must not be a bad work."

It's very interesting. I hope Keiko can get rid of her shackles and find her true self in the end (I don't want Keiko to go offline at the end). As for ghosts and people, I personally hate the so-called feeling that justice will eventually defeat evil. Just like what is expressed in the book, the world is complex and not black and white. It does not mean that people must be good and ghosts must be bad and deserve to die. This is also a point where the protagonist, as a modern person, travels to the past and has a disagreement with Yuanyi. It's always been like this, right? Maybe this is what I was thinking, I didn't want this book to have a fatalistic ending. In the end, the author gave me a lot of encouragement, and the writing is very good.

It's rare for a novel to be able to write about immortality and the gradual wear and tear of human nature. Although it is a fan story, no matter how it is, it has the factor of being covered by the original work. However, as a fan novel, it does not allow the original characters to be OOC, but also has its own original stories and thoughts. And this part of it is equally excellent, at least it can be ranked among the top among fans.

This is a good healing book. It's very sweet and I highly recommend it. I'm just not sure if it's 100 at the moment, but you can rest assured that the protagonist won't get married. I just happened to read the chapter where the heroine confesses her ghost identity. What a pity, the author will update it as soon as possible There are currently no major pitfalls, and it is recommended to enter them.

A complete villain camp, and one who won't betray Wu Mei. I like the ecstasy of the villain's subordinates. The heroine is neither emotionless nor emotionless and longs for love. The writing is quite good and the plot logic is flawless [Adoration]

Keiko and Hanako, I can't calm down. They're going to kill me. This is definitely the best Demon Slayer fanfic I've ever read! ! !

This book is well written and the characters are vivid and vivid. I feel that the heroine's character is that of a calm big sister, who is not good at expressing her emotions, but values ​​​​family and friendship very much. She doesn't care much about love, and it can be said that she doesn't feel much (maybe related to the experience in her previous life), so it seems that there is no cp at the moment. Baozi who doesn't like cp can start chasing it. It's a book with excellent writing. The rating is not high because not many people rated it. However, the characters are really described in detail! I highly recommend this book, so what are you waiting for? [Sending Hearts]

Really nice to look at! ! The plot is well described, and the transition of time is also very good. Especially the section that begins with writing a letter and then switches to another time period is particularly good. Especially when the protagonist adopts a child, I strongly recommend you to watch that part, it's really good! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration][Admiration] If that paragraph is not good-looking, you can come over and question me. I will accept your question and will never refute it! [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] The character of the protagonist is also well described, and there is no OOC. Overall, the plot will not be as cliched as previous plots. Although it is relatively bland overall, the plot will definitely not be bad emotionally. This is finally a man-eating ghost! [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry] I really fucking love this book [Cry][Cry][Cry] Especially the part about adopting a child is super beautiful [Adore][Ador][Ador]

The writing is so good, especially the protagonist's emotional transition, which is so smooth, and there is no disgusting part such as forced washing. I changed my mind. The plot with Hanako later was really uncomfortable to watch. Forcibly cutting the knife is not such a method. Especially when the apprentice commits suicide and the lyricism is left there, I wonder if the protagonist is an incompetent ordinary person. If you want to keep the apprentice alive, you can forcefully inject blood. If you want to respect the apprentice's wishes and let her die, why do you need to cry and confess at the end? It can be seen that the author wanted to use a knife to express emotions, but to be honest, I was not moved at all when I watched it. I just thought that this kind of poisonous point unique to female videos was stupid. The protagonist is Shang Xianyi, not a waste. It's not at the same level as the previous plot level in Yuanyi. Later, Sister Butterfly asked me to give her five stars back. She is worthy of being an author, and her writing is so good.

Although I don't know why the rating is only over 8 points, it is indeed the best Demon Slayer doujin I have ever seen. Great author, come on! 😘😘😘❤ (ɔˆз(ˆ⌣ˆC)

I have never watched Demon Slayer, but I still rate it very highly. First of all, the author is very good at writing the story. It is rare to be able to master the plot so well over such a long period of time. It is so important that the story is well written and wonderfully written. It is even more rare to have a coherent story. It is the most important aspect and bonus of any novel. The heroine wrote this 👍, and I have already carved a complete character image in my mind. The author describes his inner changes in a very detailed and unobtrusive way, making the characters very three-dimensional. The whole novel so far seems to be well-written. Especially for this kind of two-dimensional novel, there are no special words that embarrass many passers-by, such as inexplicable rsq, strange oral habits, second grade speech, and stereotyped characters. I must give you a thumbs up. Overall, I admire the author's profound writing skills. But there is a problem, that is, the fundamental contradiction is still the contradiction between man and ghost, and the contradiction between good and evil is actually a minor contradiction. Although the author tried hard to portray the latter, it doesn't make sense when you think about it carefully. After all, in the world view of Demon Slayer, ghosts want to eat people. This is the underlying logic. Why do people come to kill you, why are they afraid of you, why don't they believe you? It's not because you can eat people and deceive people. Past cases have produced countless lessons, and no one should bet on you. You said that a lot of people died when the Demon Slayer Team was selecting people, but that wasn't because there were ghosts. If there were no ghosts, whoever would select and send them to death would definitely live well. You can guarantee yourself, but what about other ghosts? So at present, this contradiction is actually irreconcilable. Human civilization has always been passed down from generation to generation. In the face of this big contradiction, the contradiction between good and evil has directly become a small contradiction. What is good and what is evil is of course important, but it is not important here. To put it in one sentence, to evade the internal situation, we must first stabilize the external situation. This is a problem caused by the worldview and has nothing to do with how the author writes. So when Keiko chose to become a ghost, the outcome was already doomed. But it is also possible that the author used foreshadowing to break this contradiction, such as the blue flower of the other side.

Super healthy, it satisfies the imagination of a perfect woman who is elegant, powerful, beautiful under the moon, neither cold-blooded nor a virgin. Keiko has lost part of her humanity, but she is not full of violent ghost nature like Mu Ke and Hei Shimo, but is infinitely close to divinity, giving people a feeling of being untainted in the world, ethereal and pure. Keiko is like the fragrant sweet-scented osmanthus brew, which has been brewing for endless years, making people fascinated. Constantly traveling and comprehending in the world, gradually fill the void in the heart, and slowly transform into a truly perfect individual!

The author has a very thorough view of human nature. There is no good or evil in human nature. Good and evil are defined by the society of "people". I like the character of the protagonist very much, and I can feel like it most of the time. I caught up with Tanjiro a few months ago and started to keep books. Recently, I came in and saw that they have been removed from the shelves! Tonic, I really want to finish this book, I want to see the protagonist deal with his own demons and move on to live a good life. Lao Tomato is not the son of a man. This book is not like the original, so how can it be removed from the shelves? Or is it that the author's writing style has surpassed the original in some aspects and made some people break their guard? If unfortunately we don't see the end of this book, we can't blame the author. We have to make up our own minds. After all, the outline of the follow-up is already clear. However, I really want to see the author personally draw a happy ending to every character in the book. I don't want to leave any regrets!

The protagonist is generally chaotic and good, and just keeps doing what he thinks is right. From childhood to adulthood, I have lived a happy life, my family is healthy, I live a long life, I have a friendly relationship with my boss, and I have a harmonious relationship with my subordinates. As of the latest chapter, the heroine's life is a sweet story from beginning to end. Book lovers who are afraid of knifes can feel free to read [smile][smile][smile]

A very good novel, I like the emotional description very much. I actually really don't like watching tragedies. But for now, this book makes me really want to read it. Hanako[cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

I rarely write book reviews, and I was surprised to see such a delicate book on Tomato. Now that I have read the Hanako chapter, I have some feelings that I want to express. The author's emotional descriptions are quite delicate, and his portrayal of characters, especially his psychological shaping, is quite full. I really like the early creation of the heroine. The author uses a lot of foreshadowing, profiling, and a slow pace to construct the character, making the heroine's image vivid and three-dimensional. In this regard, it surpasses the portrayal of the protagonist in many Tomato books. In addition, the author's portrayal of supporting characters is not perfunctory, which is rare, because for most books, the purpose of supporting characters is to promote the plot or better shape the protagonist, so many authors who are not strong enough in writing have very thin and empty creations of supporting characters. However, the supporting characters written by the author, such as Enichi Tsukuni, although overall have many flaws, at the end of his life, the conflict and confrontation between his sister and his own mission, the struggle and reconciliation are quite exciting, and it can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into it. It is worth mentioning that the author seems to have a special liking for hair knife, and wants to use the form of hair knife to vividly support the supporting characters and flesh out the protagonist. This is actually a very good form of expression, but at present, the author's control of this description form is not mature enough. The Yuan chapter is relatively successful, while the Hanako chapter is slightly less successful. The author obviously realized that simply killing the characters would not resonate with readers, so he added a lot of foreshadowing and characterization, and also vigorously described the characters' psychology, such as Keiko's performance during Kasumi's interrogation, her grief and reflection on Hanako's death, etc. But it is a pity that it is just superficial, and there is no deeper depiction and thinking, so the expressiveness is still relatively poor, and it is not easy to touch people. From the current point of view, the author's plot arrangement is for character creation, which can be seen from Keiko's two conflicts with relatives (Enichi and Hanako). If the author can arrange a plot with more profound and dramatic conflicts during the shaping process, which is not limited to simple conflicts of opposition, right and wrong, life and death, but also describes deeper spiritual, ideal, will, stance, and family conflicts, the expressiveness and appeal will surely be even higher. This is one of the reasons why I think the Enichi chapter is better shaped than the Hanako chapter, but this does not mean that the Hanako chapter is inferior. In fact, I think the Hanako chapter is a pity. The author failed to extend the deep characterization of the Enichi chapter to the Hanako chapter. When Keiko and Kasumi confront each other, I am looking forward to the subsequent plot and description, because this is essentially a mental torture of Keiko, a questioning and explanation of whether Keiko still maintains pure humanity despite being a ghost, and it will undoubtedly have a considerable impact on Keiko's shaping. But it's a pity that Keiko was shaken just because of Kasumi's superficial, black-and-white understanding of emotions and human nature. This is quite a pity, because from a world perspective (the cognition of a teenage girl and the cognition of Keiko who is over a hundred years old) is not very reasonable. From a spiritual point of view, it also means that Keiko has difficulty in answering this torture, and it is also detrimental to the shaping of Keiko herself. So unsurprisingly, the subsequent plot actually became the trial of Keiko by the Demon Slayer Squad and Hanako, and then Hanako committed suicide. The author wanted to make all of this a tragedy, but the conflict and emotion were not enough, which resulted in a lack of appeal. Instead, it felt like it should be. In fact, when Keiko and Kasumi were confronting each other, Hanako's arrival was a wonderful touch, because Keiko's actions at this time were undoubtedly her answer. I believe many readers had expectations when they read this. Unfortunately, Keiko directly swallowed Kasumi and then maintained the superficial peace. I was quite shocked when I saw this paragraph. I even thought Keiko simply hid Kasumi (in fact, she ate it), and Keiko later confronted Hanako. So in this way, Keiko is already at a disadvantage, both morally and spiritually. Keiko himself makes mistakes, and no matter how much struggle and thinking he puts into it, he will not be able to reflect it well. If Keiko hadn't swallowed it, but just let Hanako encounter this scene, she might have been more looking forward to it. Because at this time, Hanako needs to face the choice between Keiko and Kasumi, face the conflict between humans and ghosts, the conflict between family affection and family feud, the conflict between kindness and will. The creature that raises her is the creature that she hates, and the Demon Slayer Squad she cultivates is incompatible with her mother. Among them, Hanako's thinking and choice, struggle and consciousness will undoubtedly greatly enrich Hanako's shaping. On the contrary, Keiko had a lot of room for performance in this, and even in the later confrontation with the Demon Slayer Squad. The Demon Slayer's firm will meets pure and kind ghosts, the trade-off and struggle between ghost nature and human nature, the weighing of the weight of life, the discussion of the darkness of human nature, and even the confrontation between maternal love and hatred, the contrast between family affection and friendship, the choice between love and ideals, and many more, which can better reflect the mixed nature of human nature, the conflict of positions and a life full of regrets. In the end, Hanako's suicide was "I can't wield the Nichirin Sword against my mother, but I can't let go of my hatred of ghosts. I don't want to become a ghost, and it's too difficult to be a human. I hope that with my death, my mother and the Demon Slayer Squad will let each other go." Such a death caused Keiko and the Demon Slayer Squad to rethink the definition and thinking of humans and ghosts, which may be even more exciting. This is not only what this book lacks, but also what Demon Slayer and even most Japanese comics lack. But no matter what, the author's performance is excellent enough. I really like the story written by the author and I am looking forward to the subsequent plot.

A+, your work is well-deserved A+. It is unparalleled both in terms of tension and audio-visual aspects. It stands out among many works. I believe that the masters of the Ring will also give high evaluations. I hope you will continue to work hard.

There are very few Demon Slayer fan novels that don't break down the plot. You can wait for updates slowly, but don't be anxious. If we continue to develop at the current momentum, there will be absolutely no problem. After all, it is a new book, so there is a lot of space and less than a hundred chapters. Are you a Demon Slayer fan? Many people know the original text and anime, so there will definitely be a lot of unfair comments. I hope the author can work hard.