Pokémon: Time Travel with Brothers in the Beginning

It is a very good book that allows me to see the differences and vivid images of the protagonists. I look forward to more future growth of the protagonists. It does not feel like a template. I can feel the author's great efforts on the protagonists and look forward to the future development of the story.

[Eating Melon] It's a pity. The book is still very smooth to read. As a fan, the novel is still very comfortable, and this kind of group portrait is very good. This is my recognition as a tomato eater who has been eating tomatoes for thousands of hours. Although it is not the best, it is definitely much better than those um, cesspits.

Needless to say, it's great. I personally think it's the best Pokémon novel with multiple male protagonists. There are original plots, funny clips, and self-created plots, but I felt that the Mustard Seed Orchid scene was very infuriating and made me want to kill the old woman. This account is new, so the display time is less, but in fact I have read it several times. My new book is inspired by this.

It's very interesting, the plot is very novel, and I'm very excited to read it. I have some suggestions that I hope the author can see. 1. After one main line was divided into three main lines, the plots of the three protagonists exchanged a bit frequently, which made me feel a little bit out of character while reading. 2. The three lines are not handled very well, and there was an obvious sense of fragmentation when I read it. (This is just my personal opinion, please don't comment)

It looks good. Threesome is a must.

Very potential, looking forward to the next plot

Novel subject matter, very interesting

Come on, author. There may not be many people reading it now, but the author must persevere. This book is still very interesting. Sunshine always comes after the storm. If the author writes more chapters and more chapters, people will naturally read it.

Good-looking, but a little lacking

The bromance and comedy among the three are very good

We found a small number of novels among a large number of "memes" [laughing] It is indeed a very happy book

It has great potential, but it feels like the updates are a bit slow and lacking. I also feel like there is a bit too much nonsense. Also, the protagonist is too weak. Also, one Sirona has appeared so far, when will the other two appear?

The author has unique ideas and has taken a different path in Pokémon. Moreover, the author is very active. He has read almost all the commentaries. If you learn with an open mind, you will surely achieve great success in the future!

This book amused me to death [eating melon]

This novel will become popular sooner or later. I feel it is much better than others, but there are too few.

I think it looks pretty good. I hope it won't stop updating. Come on, author.

This is undoubtedly beautiful😋😋😋

Good-looking, good, good

Well written, keep up the good work

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Three male protagonists with ideas

Not bad, it seems okay so far.

It's nice to see

It's beautiful, I like it 🥰

Personally I feel it's okay

The author's writing is really good

I don't know how to write it, but it looks good.

There are three protagonists who are good brothers, and one of the heroines is Sirona!

Looks good, nothing else in particular I want to say

Potential fan fiction