100 Years after human civilization experienced a cataclysm, the former "New Era Federation" in the American region was divided into residential areas with multiple levels of resource allocation. The cataclysm caused some humans to acquire special abilities, known as "superpowers". Those in power controlled core resources such as energy and purified water to establish a strict hierarchical new order. The environment in the underlying areas was harsh, and residents were exposed to radiation and Struggling to survive in the pollution, there are also legends of the "Pure Land", but it is difficult to tell the truth from the false. In such a wasteland world, the protagonist uses his special abilities, through careful layout and forbearance, to gradually penetrate and disintegrate the ruling system, uncover the truth of the disaster, find the truth of the "Pure Land", and finally overthrow the ruler, while revealing the ruler's true identity and the unexpected truth about the disaster
Reader comments
The problem is obvious. It has no beginning or end. It feels like a small slice. The way of inserting narratives is okay. The background is not explained clearly enough. The introduction of the protagonist is also a bit inexplicable. There is not enough foreshadowing visible to the naked eye, or the foreshadowing is not subtle enough. It feels like it is a short film. It will be gone for three to four hundred thousand. The various hidden lines and foreshadowing are not explained clearly enough, and the timing of the reveal is a bit wrong.
The problem is obvious. It has no beginning or end. It feels like a small slice. The way of inserting narratives is okay. The background is not explained clearly enough. The introduction of the protagonist is also a bit inexplicable. There is not enough foreshadowing visible to the naked eye, or the foreshadowing is not subtle enough. It feels like it is a short film. It will be gone for three to four hundred thousand. The various hidden lines and foreshadowing are not explained clearly enough, and the timing of the reveal is a bit wrong.