I Have Seven More Substitutes Like This!

To give a rough evaluation, this is an urban novel with JOJO elements. This is my first impression after reading Chapter 35. But after reading it, there are some shining points that make me want to continue reading, so I am very confused. (The following content contains spoilers up to Chapter 35, please read at your discretion) My position in writing this review is to suggest what I think could be better and briefly introduce the corresponding content. And I hope this book will get better and better, so that I won't be so confused about it. Let me brag first. It has a very good framework and an attractive worldview, and it undoubtedly has considerable potential. And the use and abilities of the stand-in are quite good, and there are even some ways to use them that exceed the character. Next is what I personally think is lacking. This is purely a personal opinion, only suggestions and no guidance. First of all, there is a lack of courage. Whether it is the feeling of a hero or the courage of a villain's savior, it does not feel enough. There is only a person who is pursuing power or the so-called protagonist of a traditional urban novel. Secondly, there are the so-called tribute characters, whether they are the heroine or the roommate, they can only be said to be elements from the original work without any special features. In particular, even if his gender is changed, it is difficult to imagine that the female version of Jotaro is not decisive enough to act like a daughter. The most critical thing is the avatar system. At present, it conflicts with the traditional urban growth flow to a certain extent. The strength of most avatars is determined from the time of awakening. At present, I see that there are some similar exercises that are used to make up for it. However, this kind of physical improvement currently deviates from the original combat power system that relies on spirit and awareness as well as wits affected by the environment to a certain extent. And I think the latter can describe the so-called JO flavor. The other is the division and reconciliation of the proportions of elements transferred from the original work and the original proportions. Judging from the protagonist's stand-in and the stand-in who controls the butler later, the author has the ambition to create an original stand-in, but he mixes it with the stand-in from the original work. It can only be said that there is some confusion between the original work based on the original work and the fan work, and it is difficult to determine the position. Above, I hope the author will write better and better, and the characters will become more and more like real people.

It's pretty good and has its own style. It just feels a bit weird, like the villain of the Zhang family seeks a marriage with the heroine, and then the protagonist assassinates her, and finally the villain goes offline, as if he has never appeared before.

Come on, I want to see Varudo smashed [laughing evilly]

What is the scope of pure evildoers? I think they are people who do not act for material gain, but act purely for spiritual satisfaction and malicious desires. If a pure evil person means to achieve oneself at the expense of others, then he only needs to kill indiscriminately.

It's so well written, why doesn't anyone read it? [Cover face]

It's great. I really want to see Crazy Diamond repairing air conditioners and being asked what he does for a living [Chigua]

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It's a very good book. As long as I don't make any mistakes later, I should be able to get an 8.4 Or above.

The writing style is comfortable, the protagonist is deeply portrayed, the heroine has a distinctive personality, Golden Finger is invincible and powerful, and the villain screams not to...

Very nice [blowing kiss] Among all the Jojo stories I have read, it is considered the best [Love]

Not bad, very enjoyable to watch Keep it up, keep it up Raised to death? This ending is hard to describe in one word

It's very interesting, absolutely enjoyable, and the logic is relatively clear.

Haokang Haokang Haokang

The emperor is me, Diavolo! ! !

Why is Qiao Liqiao so angry when the heroine talks to her family members [face covering]

Okay, not bad

I still have a feeling in comics that cannot be expressed in novels.

Whether it's good or bad, maybe that's why I'm all praising the book in the reviews. Maybe my expectations were too high, and it didn't reach the heights I expected. You can take a look at it when you're short of books.

It's quite good-looking, and I quite like the parts that have nothing to do with the heroine. Although the part about the heroine is pretty good, it feels a bit strange. Can't it be a separate book?

Good looking, good luck.

It's ok, to your taste

It's really good.

It's okay, but I haven't used the other substitutes much.