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Looks good! Very unique fan fiction! It feels like a second drama! It feels very relaxing in the front. I also like the heroine very much. She looks good [laughs][laughs] Support and support [laughs][laughs]

I feel that the description is quite different. The front part may be hard to pick, and some problems can be picked out, but the back part is well written, and Saya's Ultra spirit is unmatched. The back part of this book is really different, a bit depressing, which makes me feel that the protagonist is not that easy to be, and the main reason is that the cb line is also delicious, and the second generation of the protagonist is not a love brain or a career brain. The family line is delicious. I like it, I look forward to finishing it as soon as possible, and I am very curious about the sequel!

The writing is quite good. In some places, it is not suitable to add the word slowly. It would be better to replace the word slowly with other words. Moreover, the word slowly is added in a lot of places. The content is quite interesting, but the word slowly is a bit too much [face covering]

Dear author, your book is really great. I am so lucky to have discovered this treasure. The bond you described between Alya and Zero is really touching, and the flowing emotion makes people very immersed in it. Also, the author's character is not broken at all, it feels like it should be. It's really great, come on!

It's very interesting, good luck to the author! More updates! [Sending Hearts][Please update] This book is quite good, why has no one reviewed this book?

The heroine is beautiful and strong, and the plot is unique! Recommend

The setting is so exciting to me. The heroine travels through the Kingdom of Light and starts a wonderful love story with Zero. There should be many surprise appearances of Ultra characters and the story line is rich!

The relationship line progresses naturally without any delay. I love it.

The character creation is novel and interesting, I like it

The interaction between the stuffed rabbit and the heroine was so sweet, it made my aunt laugh the whole time.

The heroine is strong and upright, and has no love brain at all. She is awesome.

The story line of the deputy CP is also very interesting, I really liked it

Nice! Very well written

Gave Zero a strong and beautiful heroine who is also pure love [like]

The whole process was so sweet that I was rolling around, the pure love setting was so exciting, and the sub-line was also very interesting!

It's nice to read and recommended. I couldn't understand some parts. The author explained it in detail [shy][shy]

I like this kind of emotional line. I'm really not romantic at all and it suits my taste! Love it, love it

Although I don't understand many points, the plot of the story is very reasonable.

Multi-dimensional description, exciting plot, this is a novel worth recommending

Fantasy and imagination are wide open.

A masterpiece among children's books.

Recommended for children to watch, very passionate.

There are many adventures in the universe! Stimulate!

The character story line is rich, I love it! !

Isn't this every child's childhood dream?

How many ideas are there in the universe waiting for us to explore?

After reading this book, I feel like I can write it too.

When writing is given wings of fantasy, it becomes invincible.

The hidden line of the deputy CP is so delicious! Little Dream Hikari!

I have to say that the author has a lot of imagination.