All Heavens: Starting from Jackie Chan's Adventures of Black Air Command

(Upper middle) 8 points, mark,,,,,, The first world is well written, but I haven't read it, so I can't comment on it. ─────────────────── Rating of the novel: ①Shangshang (a good book that suits my taste very well, five stars/10 points+) ②Superior (recognized by everyone as a good book, with more than 1,000 updates, five stars/10 points) ③Shang Xia (logically self-consistent & a good book that I don't like, five stars/9 points) ④Above average (a good book in the conventional sense, five stars/8 points) ⑤Medium (cheated, no evaluation, three stars/one point minus) ⑥Mid-to-lower (general, three stars/6 points & four stars/7 points) ⑦Bottom and top (major defects, one star/2 points & three stars/4 points) ⑧Inferior (tasteless, two stars/0 points) ⑨Xiaxia (revenge against society, two stars/negative points)

Ordinary fast-traveling articles, I don't feel any pleasure at all. If the score is high, give it a lower score.

The first "The Adventures of Jackie Chan" was very well written, and I also liked the second "Zombie Brother World", but you can't use the power of the original time to go to other times. What's the point of that kind of early time travel? Every world has to be started from scratch.

OK I've seen the latest updates. First of all, I would like to praise the author for not overpowering the combat ability. It feels good when it should. I have finished writing two worlds so far, there are no major obstacles, and the ideas are pretty good. But I feel like the title of this book is not good, haha. When I first saw it on the recommendation list, I wasn't even interested in joining it. As for the plot, I wrote about the adventures of Jackie Chan and a corpse brother. The plot is very smooth and the pace is fast. There is no grinding feeling at all, which is very satisfying. The plot before and after is also a bit foreshadowed, and the explanation is logical and self-explanatory, which is great. In short, good luck to the author, highly recommended Some people say that changing the world will reduce combat effectiveness. I strongly disagree with this. I don't really like people who suppress their combat power, but why don't they like to suppress their combat power? Isn't it because I feel aggrieved? The author handled this aspect very well. The previous world only existed as a guarantee, and the knowledge gained after experiencing the world will not change. It just needs some development in the early stage and will grow up soon. And if I really don't write it like this, I will become the kind of master who is the close friend of the school beauty, constantly changing the world, constantly changing the world, but the routines and writing methods are exactly the same and the plot is not happy. Come on, author, you write very well like this, just keep your thoughts. However, the armor warrior movie is a bit boring.

The quality of the plot is good, there are not too many surprises, but it is too short, which is a pain for my sister-in-law. I hope there will be more anime fans in the future. I want to see the protagonist go to Egypt and fight with the Dio group to bully Cleopatra! ! ! I want to see the big golden guy and the protagonist passionately slashing the four little mouths in the subspace! ! ! ! I don't know how the author will deal with the main world. This is a huge headache. Usually, the spiritual energy is revived and the monsters are killed, or the monsters are taken over and continued to wander around in other times.

With the name of Zhutian, you can quickly wear it out. If you want to wear it, hurry up. When you return to Xiaoyu's world, you can obviously choose to destroy it. Just push it horizontally. The power is there.

There is nothing terribly toxic about this book, and the plot is very reasonable, but the author has a little bit of obsessive-compulsive disorder... It's a bit overwhelming, but it doesn't have much impact. The protagonist will quickly become stronger every time and then the power will be superimposed.

I always thought that people grow old slowly. Actually no, people grow old in an instant

Worth reading, a rare book. The current world is "The Adventures of Jackie Chan", the current world is "Brother Corpse", and the next world is tentatively "Armor Warrior". Readers who have good ideas can discuss them actively. Let me share something here. I didn't want to talk about it originally, but so many people have brought it up, so I will talk about the setting of this book. That is, every world has world consciousness. If you bring a strong power from the outside world, you will be defined as an intruder by the world consciousness. If you start from scratch on the path of the original world, you will coincide with the favor of the world consciousness. How should I put it? It's not that simple to just go over and kill with strength and then be done with it. So why can you use your power temporarily? This is the ability of the system to temporarily deceive the world's consciousness, but it is only temporary and cannot be deceived forever. You all say that I am suppressed, but I am not suppressed to death. This is the setting. The world is conscious and will not let you play like a game. Everyone is flesh and blood. But it's okay. So many people say I'm a critic, but no one says my writing is bad. That means you think the author's writing is good, and that's enough for me. As for the setting of world consciousness, I will expand on it later, but now is not the time.

The author's writing is still okay, but when I read it, there are some places that feel awkward and hard to describe, but overall it's pretty good. It's not really a high-quality game, but it's one of the most effective among high-quality films. This is purely my personal feeling.

Sometimes people don't love things that are good for themselves. Just like I smoke, it's just because I habitually put aside certain things to kill my time. You know, weather is always difficult to predict and forecasts are not always accurate. But I think that people will never lack their own happiness. I can listen to a song and write a poem or short article. I don't have enough tobacco or alcohol. What's the future? The same is true in life, I will look forward to it, looking forward to it with regret

It's good, I definitely can't write it [Chigua] because I have written it before, and I can't even draw it out, and I don't even have an idea for the outline [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Very nice, Wudi Wen Most of them have happy endings. You can go back and see them again when you return to the main world. I haven't seen the heroine so far. Every world is a fresh start, from weak to strong, returning to the main world and gaining powers again. It can be regarded as an old-school Zhutianliu. Generally speaking, it can be regarded as some people's childhood memories [Thoughts]

I came here for "The Adventures of Jackie Chan". It was very well written. I missed the chapter about the corpse brother in the middle. Although I have read and understood the other chapters, I came here for "The Adventures of Jackie Chan". As I expected, it was very well written. I love the later part. When will the author write a book about "The Adventures of Jackie Chan" alone? With your writing style, I will definitely love it.

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The writing is already very good, the writing style is very good, but can it be changed that the ability can only be used in the main world? Then the plug-ins I got from other worlds cannot be used in other worlds, and there are very few descriptions of the main world. It is very uncomfortable to read like this😱 (I hope the author can reply to me [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart])

The full name should be: Quickly Transmigrated: I start from scratch every time, with all kinds of suppression [shy]

It looks good. I wish you better and better. New Year is coming soon. I also wish everyone who reads the book will get better and better. [Blow kiss]

Many people think that the second world is overpowering the combat power. In fact, it is not overpowering at all. It should be said that the combat power is always the highest. Because the protagonist has never been defeated, who do you think is more powerful than the protagonist, and it makes you feel aggrieved to come out to suppress the protagonist? There is no such thing. There is no one who can defeat the protagonist. Not long after Ryu Mata jumped out, he directly surpassed him. Pluto had just been resurrected, and the protagonist surpassed him in just a few shots. Until now, I haven't seen anyone who can live for a long time if he can't resolve conflicts with the protagonist. The protagonist's outlook is correct, his behavior is correct, he doesn't do anything evil, and he doesn't really become the protagonist's enemy. After watching the four worlds, in fact, they are all invincible in essence, and the pace is quite fast, without any delay. Every time you enter a new world, you don't start from scratch. There is no saying that you have become a newbie. There is no need to re-develop something if you can't defeat this or that. Moreover, the protagonist has never been a newbie. Even in the first world, his combat power increases very quickly. If you insist that the protagonist cannot penetrate every world from the beginning, then what am I looking at? It would be boring to seize the origin of the world at the beginning, and it is not a pretentious article. I still enjoyed watching it. The protagonist experiences the differences brought by the new world at the beginning of each world. The protagonist's experience and understanding of the nature of this time travel are gradually increasing, and then the protagonist also has to make up for some regrets. The power of each world is reflected in each new world. If it is not mentioned, you cannot see the power of the spell or anything. I have gone back and looked at all the worlds I have traveled through. The protagonist is not a stallion, nor does he understand romance. I can only say that it does not focus on writing about romance. However, there are still a few female protagonists, at least in every world. I feel quite comfortable now.

This book has been discontinued, so I give it four stars. It's really a pity. I originally wanted to read what was written next. After all, the Saint Lord's twelve spells have a very high starting point at the beginning. The twelve talismans are not actually talismans in the original work, and their origins are very awesome. The Holy Lord is a great black energy magician, the top one in the Jackie Chan Adventures world. He himself is a fire demon selected by the black energy and possesses the power of the world's origin fire. The essence of the twelve talismans is the twelve blessings given to him by the Holy Lord after he became a great black magician and understood the rules of the world and transcended the rules of the world. Why do we say understanding and detachment? Because in the anime, the Holy Lord has been weakened to the extreme, and he has even forgotten his real name (his real name is Shendu) The first reason why Shendu (Holy Lord) is weakened is that the immortal god who represents the righteousness of the world has disappeared (left that world), so the black energy will weaken the power of the fire demon. The immortal god suppresses the demons, causing the demons' memory and strength to be greatly reduced. Click here The Holy Lord, as a black magician who is at the top of his time and even on the verge of transcendence, has almost forgotten how to use magic. You rarely see him using magic. The only way to use magic is to spit fire from his mouth. Although it is shown in the anime, his fire magic is not so rubbish in the setting. The Twelve Talismans are invincible compared to others because the Twelve Talisman is a power independent of black energy and righteousness. Anyone can use it. It is essentially the protection of the twelve rules. The most powerful first talisman is actually the tiger. The balance of yin and yang of the tiger is the underlying rule of Jackie Chan's Adventures (the world of righteousness and blackness is upgraded with the left foot and the right foot) The Dragon Talisman controls energy wireless energy and is also very powerful in setting.

It's well written, no problems. As for the Scorpion King who is armed with super beasts, I think the protagonist was rushing towards people from the beginning. He insisted on collecting his subordinates, but he couldn't use them. As a result, the Scorpion King was tempted, and the protagonist installed it again.

The Twelve Talisman is indeed of little use in a higher-level world, but in a world of similar level, it is simply invincible. Author, can the Shadow Legion be upgraded to the Shadow Lord Legion? The Shadow Legion is really nb. It has the power of shadow and undead, and can become stronger without dying. Anyone defeated by the Shadow King can be extracted and become his subordinates.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the writing style of green Astringency will be criticized. When you watch twice, a little patience is born, and the plot of progress Exhibition is paid more attention to When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the dead end number Volume begins to decline. When you update five times, readers' support will spontaneously form and praise you sound The sound became louder and louder. When you are ten o'clock, the great Confucian's management is deafening and tolerant. State The degree is implemented internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will be a part of the bookworm's memories land, that is Even in your long life, your name will leave a trace of brilliance ocular traces. Updates may not solve all problems, but 90% of them on The problem all comes from insufficient updates.

Well written, with emotions and descriptions of the characters. I felt a bit melancholy when I saw the author's ending of Brother Corpse. And every character written is written with flesh and blood. But maybe the process is a bit fast, but everything else is written very well. By the way, why are there so many low scores? I feel like the writing is pretty good.

When you are confused, when you cannot see the light, when you are wandering on the crossroads of life and don't know where to go, please remember . . . . . . Don't block the way of people behind you

My ability to write while sitting began to decline significantly from Tushan. The original expectations and patience have been worn away. I hope that my writing skills can return to 90% of the previous level. Seriously, this rating is two points too high. He only has a little over 6 points, and he writes a lot about daily life, and doesn't feel too aggressive.

Come, the author, read with me I solemnly swear: Starting today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the darkness, a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words, day by day, and night by night.

I haven't read it later, but you can read it yourself. I've seen 35 pictures so far. The first world is pretty good. For my own reasons, I'm tired of having to practice the power system all over again every time I go to a world. To be honest, you can weaken it instead of changing it from permanent to experience card.

It's okay, it's pretty good, but I like it to be longer, so I'm good at reading. I just finished reading the new chapter. Personally, I feel it's better to have the main character alone. After all, I've seen too many authors collapse because of writing emotional dramas. I was also attracted to the protagonist in the beginning by going to different worlds to collect power and strengthen himself. I'll just wait and see for now (PS: I'm not opposed to having emotional dramas, but don't forget what the point of this book is)

Not bad! How can I put it, it's not enough to be cool. It's hard to have the desire to watch and read. You can still read it when you don't have any novels to read.