An accident sent me to another world and made me the warden. Werewolves, vampires, succubi... they’re all my prisoners, but now they’re staging a riot. What am I supposed to do? “Ding!” You have acquired Thresh’s complete set of abilities. Haha, talk about a sudden turn of events! You were going to eat me, werewolf? Come on, let me show you what the Black Mist feels like. Vampire? I hear vampires are afraid of the sun. Tie him to a cross and throw him out into the sunlight. Stuff his mouth with garlic. How should we savor this delightful torture?
So far it looks pretty good, the quality is better than most platform novels. The writing style is good. It seems that the author has read many foreign articles, and the translation is quite interesting. For setting the background of the era against the Middle Ages, it is not necessary to reflect the dark side of human nature through the depiction of psychological activities. In this regard, the author's description is multi-dimensional, including language, psychology, action, etc., But it only lacks the environment. Maybe it's my personal habit, I prefer the combination of environment and montage [laughs]. The characterizations are good, mostly typical, flat, and satirical. But sometimes the description is a bit lengthy, and it is indeed a standard translation style. It is slightly repetitive when expressed in Chinese. If you use more metonymy, synaesthesia may be better. After all, not everyone likes the translation style. In addition, I would like to share with the author a personal humble opinion. I have studied most of the popular novels on this platform. Most of their paragraph formats are one sentence and one paragraph, with fewer medium and long paragraphs. Perhaps due to the influence of this generation's fast food culture, most readers have less patience. If they are divided into more paragraphs, the number of readers may increase. Overall, it's really good [laughs], but there's still too little content right now. Let's take another look and change the rating [please update]
It feels pretty good. I mainly saw the Warden and thought it was written about Thresh. I didn't expect it was written about Thresh, but not entirely. Come on, author.