An accident brought me to a different world, and I became a warden, a werewolf, a vampire, a succubus... They were all my prisoners, but now they are going to riot? "Ding", you have obtained all the abilities of Thresh. Haha, twists and turns, byd, don't you want to eat me, werewolf? Come, let you taste the black mist, vampire? I heard that vampires are afraid of the sun? Tie me to a cross and throw me into the sun, stuff my mouth with plans, how should we taste this pleasant torture?
Reader comments
So far it looks pretty good, the quality is better than most platform novels. The writing style is good. It seems that the author has read many foreign articles, and the translation is quite interesting. For setting the background of the era against the Middle Ages, it is not necessary to reflect the dark side of human nature through the depiction of psychological activities. In this regard, the author's description is multi-dimensional, including language, psychology, action, etc., But it only lacks the environment. Maybe it's my personal habit, I prefer the combination of environment and montage [laughs]. The characterizations are good, mostly typical, flat, and satirical. But sometimes the description is a bit lengthy, and it is indeed a standard translation style. It is slightly repetitive when expressed in Chinese. If you use more metonymy, synaesthesia may be better. After all, not everyone likes the translation style. In addition, I would like to share with the author a personal humble opinion. I have studied most of the popular novels on this platform. Most of their paragraph formats are one sentence and one paragraph, with fewer medium and long paragraphs. Perhaps due to the influence of this generation's fast food culture, most readers have less patience. If they are divided into more paragraphs, the number of readers may increase. Overall, it's really good [laughs], but there's still too little content right now. Let's take another look and change the rating [please update]
It feels pretty good. I mainly saw the Warden and thought it was written about Thresh. I didn't expect it was written about Thresh, but not entirely. Come on, author.
So far it looks pretty good, the quality is better than most platform novels. The writing style is good. It seems that the author has read many foreign articles, and the translation is quite interesting. For setting the background of the era against the Middle Ages, it is not necessary to reflect the dark side of human nature through the depiction of psychological activities. In this regard, the author's description is multi-dimensional, including language, psychology, action, etc., But it only lacks the environment. Maybe it's my personal habit, I prefer the combination of environment and montage [laughs]. The characterizations are good, mostly typical, flat, and satirical. But sometimes the description is a bit lengthy, and it is indeed a standard translation style. It is slightly repetitive when expressed in Chinese. If you use more metonymy, synaesthesia may be better. After all, not everyone likes the translation style. In addition, I would like to share with the author a personal humble opinion. I have studied most of the popular novels on this platform. Most of their paragraph formats are one sentence and one paragraph, with fewer medium and long paragraphs. Perhaps due to the influence of this generation's fast food culture, most readers have less patience. If they are divided into more paragraphs, the number of readers may increase. Overall, it's really good [laughs], but there's still too little content right now. Let's take another look and change the rating [please update]
It feels pretty good. I mainly saw the Warden and thought it was written about Thresh. I didn't expect it was written about Thresh, but not entirely. Come on, author.