Path to Immortality: Upgrade the Evergreen Immortal Art from the Start

I've read the latest chapter, and I feel like there's nothing wrong with it, Liang Cao. Mortal flow, golden finger is not big, the type of growing up step by step. The protagonist's outlook on life is normal, more of a stable character, and the second best is to be content. The plot is compact and progressive, with a bit of group portrait writing. There are plenty of natural reasons to change maps, unlike some books where changing maps is very rigid. I read in the comments section, and many people complained about the protagonist spending his life to distribute poison to the female cultivator of the Yan family. These people simply lack reading skills, are short-sighted, and are stingy and unwilling to invest. 1. The protagonist is forced to save people, otherwise he would be in trouble and might be gone. 2. The protagonist's lifespan can be continuously increased. If he is at the bottom, it is absolutely fine to spend some of his lifespan in exchange for opportunities from the Yan family to improve his class. Of course, you should do less things like consuming your lifespan.

Basically, it's okay. Except for the fact that two foundation-building monks died together (almost) and the Lin family reaped the benefits, there's nothing bad about it. The author's setting is that comprehension is about the same as IQ. Those who can practice breathing there should be all stupid. Why can't I understand this thing (if there is any foreshadowing, pretend I didn't say it). Generally speaking, I can understand it.

Female Z has that flavor. Advantages: The plot is a bit interesting. It slowly clears up the fog of the plot. It is not like some longevity novels that are bland and play with temperament. The disadvantage is...

I think it's okay, why are there so many bad reviews! The setting of other works may have affected the perception Something is wrong when I read it later. There are women around me, all beautiful women [smile]

Not bad, you can also give me a five-star reward [laughs]

I didn't see the stubbornness there.

It's pretty good, but it's a bit overwhelming for the protagonist's state of cultivation, and the label is cautious. I still hope the author can fight less, otherwise it will be a bit left-brained to refute the right-brained.

It's quite good-looking, and the writing is good. There's nothing bad about it so far, but the process is too slow. I suggest the author control it carefully. [Laughs][laughs]

Rarely seen just right

Good, come on, well written