Under One Person: in Order to Become Stronger, I Have to Be Funny

This is what I feel is normal, the normal operation of an ordinary person who has just awakened his innate abilities in the world under one person, rather than the fantasy system before death and knowing the plot to cheat everything.

The author knows that the early stage is a bit boring. After all, the first part is just a joke, and the second part is the real plot of one person and the real fan. Let's take a look at it later. If you have any shortcomings, please leave a comment. As a young author, I will change it. If you insist on squirting, I can't help it. After all, you have the mouth. Moreover, the purpose of reading novels is to make you happy. If you are not happy, just leave. I wish everyone who reads my book will be happy every day [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Give me some encouragement. After reading the first three chapters, I really think that the author has a lot of imagination and wants to write about the drunkard. The first three chapters are the golden chapters. The protagonist has not yet appeared. It is true that the writing consciousness is not very good. I've read Chapter 7. Although I know that the protagonist is just an ordinary person, I'm not used to this slightly colloquial writing style. The character really doesn't fit well. I think adding facial expressions and movements when the character speaks may make it more realistic. The protagonist's special ability is quite rare. I have persisted in writing for two years now, which is really rare. Because I am a book lover, and I usually give up after writing something for a long time. This kind of tenacity and perseverance are really rare. I admit that my writing may not be very good, and I don't even have the heart to persevere, but I want to tell you all the things that I think are not good. At present, there is really nothing funny about it, but since the book contract is signed, it seems that there is really no way to change the name again, so please continue to work hard. Now that things have happened, I feel that my writing has indeed improved. I will revise the previous revisions. After all, if the previous revisions are not accepted, no matter how much progress I make later, they will not be seen.

The protagonist is well portrayed, but the young master uncle doesn't have the Yin Wulei anymore. You've ruined the setting of the little master uncle. If he doesn't have the Yin Wulei later on, how can he fight Zhang Chulan?

Wow, it's really pretty. You can consider it.

I didn't see anything funny at all.

There seems to be nothing wrong with the protagonist in these chapters [face covering]

It looks good, I feel

It's okay so far, but why is there a movie plot but it's okay? I want to know which chapter the main movie is in.

This is all confusing to me. Is the protagonist Zhang San or Hu Xing?

Fortunately, it feels pretty good in my opinion, but there is still room for improvement.

As for the protagonist [laughing awkwardly] I thought it was Zhang Chulan