Jackie Chan Adventures: I Am Uncle's Apprentice

(Bottom middle) White + • Standard (-1 level) / 6.5 Points, marked... Sense of substitution C, plug-in B, setting C, writing style C, rhythm C, imagination D, character design D, main line C, logic C. Extra points: none Personal feelings: Follow the plot, no innovation, no big problems, just standard fan fiction. #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. 1. Evaluation of the novel (1) Taking "Four-Star Green - Advanced (Level 0)/7.0 Points" as the dividing line, additional points may be deducted for other items based on the first nine evaluations. (2) Recommendation grade evaluation criteria: Excellent S (+4), Excellent A (+2), Good B (+1), Average C (0), Poor D (-1), Extremely Poor E (-3), Unknown X (0). (3) Sense of immersion: interlocking, rapid resonance, and immersion (4) Plug-in: cheat settings (5) Setting: World background, training system... (6) Writing style and detailed description: standardized and smooth, with appropriate style (7) Rhythm·Overall description: Relaxation and suspense setting (8) Imagination·Plot expansion: Surprisingly innovative and self-consistent logic (9) Character design•Main characters: three-dimensional and full, growing and changing (10) Main line • Close to the center: clear and attractive (11) Logic: plot logic, detail logic (12) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... 2. Rating of the novel (1) Shangshang (a sacred book that meets the public's taste, unexpectedly excellent)─Five-star red •Super legend (level 24)/10.0 Points+. (2) Superior (interlocking high-scoring online articles that make people addicted to it) - ① Five-star orange + • Legend (level 22) / 10 points; ② Five-star orange • Legend (level 20) / 9.5 Points +; ③ Five-star orange - • Legend (level 18) / 9.5 Points. (3) Shangxia (a fine book in the traditional sense, a fine book with a strange style and excellent writing) - ① Five-star purple + • Legend (level 16) / 9 points; ② Five-star purple + legend (level 14) / 8.5 Points +; ③ Five-star purple - • Legend (level 12) / 8.5 Points. (4) Upper-middle (standard online text with mature subject matter and self-consistent logic) - ① Five-star blue + • Excellent (level 10) / 8.0 Points +; ② Five-star blue • Excellent (level 8) / 8.0 Points; ③ Five-star blue - • Excellent (level 6) / 7.5 Points +; ④ Five-star green + • Standard (level 4) / 7.5 Points. (5) Middle to lower (standard web articles with average performance and no major problems) - ①Four-star green·Advanced (level 2)/7.0 Points+; ②Four-star green-·Advanced (level 0)/7.0 Points; ③Four-star white+·Standard (-1 level)/6. 5 Points; ④Samsung white·standard (-2 level)/6.0 Points; ⑤Samsung gray+·low level (-3 level)/5.5 Points; ⑥Samsung gray·low level (-4 level)/5.0 Points; ⑦Samsung gray -·qualified (-5 level)/4.5 Points. (6) Xia Shang (novels with major flaws are missed) - ① Three-star unqualified (-7 levels) / 4 points; ② Three-star poor (-9 levels) / 3 points; ③ One-star poor (-11 levels) / 2 points; ④ One-star extremely poor (-13 levels) / 1 point. (7) Xiaxia (disagreement in three views, having special hobbies, seriously affecting the reading experience, and making people physically uncomfortable) - ① Discord in three views (-15 levels)/-1 point; ② Special hobbies (-17 levels)/-3 points; ③ Slight malice (-19 levels)/-6 points; ④Malicious (-21 levels)/-7 points; ⑤Significant malice (-23 levels)/-8 points; ⑥Extreme maliciousness (-25 levels)/-9 points; ⑦Unknown (-27 levels)/-10 points. (8) Medium (standard online article that I have no interest in at all, no evaluation) Three stars unknown/x points. (9) Inferior (female videos mixed in, non-standard online writing) 2 stars unknown/0 points. ──Sixth edition revised evaluation, 1200 words

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Worth a look, The order of Jackie Chan's adventures, the Spell Chapter - The Devil - The History of Time Chapter - The Sword Dragon Chapter - The Demonic Qi Chapter - The Mask Chapter

It's okay. For those who learn Rubik's Cube, it follows the plot but not completely. It's just that some things are not written out. The talent is also good, and the progress in writing can be seen, and there is no such thing as a weak plot [thoughts]

Each transition is a little sloppy, but the whole plot is rewritten well.

It's pretty good to watch, and the plot advances reasonably, but I feel like it would be more exciting and better-looking with more fighting descriptions. But I'm still a little worried. After all, your protagonist is a replica of the immortal. Will there be an emotional line like the female protagonist that destroys the original protagonist's career ambitions? I hope the heroine doesn't have a little emotional line. I'd love to see the interaction between Xiao She and Uncle Long, but I don't know why I might not want to watch it if the main character has an emotional line.

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Overall, it's okay. I don't know if the protagonist will travel to other worlds later. If he does, he can actually copy the original energy of the eight demons, and these eight original energy are combined with the origins of the history books to create a small world. In this way, the things to be copied can be analyzed from the origin of the world, so that they can be copied better and faster, and the abilities the protagonist has mastered will not be restricted in other worlds. After all, the rules of each world are inconsistent.

Summary: Xiaobai's article needs to be strengthened, but it can be encouraged.

If you like it, come on, the author has written it well and will give you a good reward.