The Comic Book World Is Getting More and More Complicated

Update!!! When you update, the subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be magnified. Astringency will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the plot progresses Exhibition is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise starts to sound, and the dead numbers are collected. Volume begins to decline. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voice of praise will The sound became louder and louder. When you were at the tenth watch, the scholar's debate was deafening, and his tolerant attitude was deafening. The degree is implemented internally and externally. When you are twenty, the bookworm's memories have a place for you, that is Even in a long life, your name will leave a dazzling mark traces. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of them The problem all comes from insufficient updates.

When Wa Lung jumps off a building, he has more drama in his heart than the protagonist.

It's okay, but the dungeon world is written a bit casually. Although this is a common problem of unlimited flow, I still hope that the author can be detailed and appropriate.

It's pretty good, with great ideas and vivid descriptions of characters, blah blah... No, there are too many details. I can only write one or two chapters about combat, which seems too watery and boring. Write more about daily life to relieve boredom. Don't drag too many chapters into one world...

When will you return to your daily routine? It's been too long since I've been to another world.

It's okay. I suggest you write more about daily life and just intersperse battles with it. This book list still has many female protagonists

The logic is clear, there are no big problems in daily life and the first world. Recommendation index 🌟🌟🌟🌟. There are too few chapters to say much. I would also like to add that the author's book is unlimited or mainly unlimited. If you don't like it, I suggest you just return it, or just follow the daily routine like me. Although as a novice author, the writing style is still good, but there may be some problems with some characters and images, but it is not a big problem. In addition, it is recommended not to write too plainly in daily life, as it will be boring if you read too much.

The first world is The Adventures of Jackie Chan, which is pretty good.

It's a complete return. Although it is an infinite stream, the author can't catch the world of Jackie Chan's Adventures. The daily part is very good, but I waste too much time on traveling through the world to introduce the setting. It feels very watery in large sections, and it starts very slowly in the early stage. In the later stage, the progress is very fast, and I skip it all at once. This is very bad. Five stars for encouragement.

In fact, it's not bad, but there are too many competing products, so I've just picked a few now. There are basically few that score 9 points in the comprehensive comic category, and the ones that do are very old. It's so far north, why is it so unfinished again? Can't Yang Persimmon produce a few books that are finished normally? [Crazy]

A good comprehensive comic, if the author could reduce the length of the protagonist's training.

When will the twelve talismans be completed?

So far so good.

[Thinking][Laughing evilly] Delicious, this book tastes so delicious.

Very good, not bad, not bad

Not bad, but I want to ask if the characters in the character world can appear again.

Good score? It shouldn't be! Still pretty good-looking! ! !

It's not bad. I haven't seen any bad spots yet. It's a good seedling.

It's really good

Not bad, enough to pass the time

Not bad, you can take a look

It can still be scored

Looks good, good content

The hole in the Lord God Space has not been filled yet, it is over, and where did the Chosen One come from?

It was okay, but it ended too quickly.

It's pretty good, but I don't know why the rating is so low.

Our poor protagonist is still Xiao Chunan. He finally showed signs of success but was ended by the ruthless author.

Well, I can watch it. I look forward to it.

Although it's not bad, I always feel like I've seen it before.

It's quite nice to watch, both the dungeon world and the daily plot are pretty good.