Journey to the West: After the Fall of the Heavenly Court

Overall feeling: Comfortable! The development of the plot is not abrupt, and the characters are all good. First of all, the Monkey King has nothing to say. The first point is righteousness. He will help his friends without any hesitation when asking for help. The second point is perseverance. No matter how powerful the opponent is, he is not afraid or shrinks. The third point is strong. Needless to say, I have been on the path of spiritual practice. It is so thrilling to achieve it in seven years. No need to say more about my strength! Secondly, there are many, many excellent qualities that I won't introduce one by one. Then there is Qingluan Huofeng. Among the two female fairies, Huofeng is sincere, optimistic, enthusiastic, straightforward and bold in expressing his feelings and love for the great sage. He is really courageous, I admire him! Qingluan feels like a virtuous wife, gentle and shy, which is the embodiment of a lady. Both women are great characters, especially the great sage who is the master of the house and leaves everything to the two fairies. It feels like you can trust them with anything. Ancestor Bodhi also talks about everything without any twists. He first appears and tells Sun Wukong that his strength is too poor and he really laughs like crazy when he can't help him. But I really feel that he is very strong. The key is that he can guide Sun Wukong in the right direction. He is a real good teacher. I really didn't expect Queen Houtu to be a naughty, beautiful, quirky and powerful person. She is reasonable and flexible. She is really the most powerful living person in the three realms. Zhu Bajie also maintains a brotherly relationship with Sun Wukong in it. He really looks like a brother who only wants the best for each other. He also helped me, Brother Monkey, a lot. As for the Sandalwood Buddha, he is like a bald donkey. All in all, this novel really fits the world of Journey to the West in my mind. I hope the author can update 800 times a day!!

It looks good, and I can tell that I have read the original work. The character design is also okay. I understand the structure of the world, the justice of heaven and earth, and I also have my own warm heart. Unlike other Yun authors who only know the ancient world, Sun Wukong is either a despicable villain, a manic-depressive patient, or a weak person who can even be bullied by ants. In order to write upgrades, it is very stupid to forcefully lower the initial level of a similar protagonist like Sun Wukong who is known to be very strong. Not to mention anything else, having a Jade Emperor above the Three Pure Ones and Tathagata is a bonus. Sun Wukong is the Taiyi Golden Immortal above Hunyuan Yiqi, which is also a plus point. Although modern online texts, including this book, definitely need to write about realms, there is no problem that Sun Wukong, the Taiyi Golden Immortal, deviates from the original concept and becomes a realm ranking. However, in Sun Wukong fan fiction, it is generally Taiyi Golden Immortal and Hunyuan Ti. I have never mentioned it. Of course, there must be conflicts in the realms in the ancient world. After all, Taiyi Jinxian - Daluo Jinxian - Hunyuan Daluo Jinxian. Sun Wukong, the Taiyi Jinxian who is above the Hunyuan Qi, seems out of place. But it is a fictional work in the first place. The author cannot rely entirely on AI to write the article. He can use his brain. Generally speaking, the current impression is very good. It is among the top among the Monkey King fanfics. It's just that the good books have no traffic. It's a pity, it's a pity.

Everyone who writes Sun Wukong novels has a common problem. The first thing they write is that Tathagata is stronger than the Jade Emperor. In Journey to the West novels, Tathagata can only be on par with the five elders of Taoism. He is called the Buddha of the West and exists under the four emperors. Then they like to use the title of god to define Journey to the West. When the book of Journey to the West was written, the title of god had not yet been reincarnated.

Not bad. The background of the story is quite interesting. The beginning may be a little rushed. Since it is the prehistoric period, do we need to explain the other saints and Taoist ancestors?

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