Why Are All Our Sects Full of Monsters?

As this is supposed to be the author's first book, the article is a bit frustrating, but if the author insists, it will be about 300,000 words, and it is worthy of being a self-exciting invincible flow, which is different from what I thought and the invincible flow I have seen before. (ง •̀_•́)งCome on Ah, and although there are ups and downs, there are too many surprises, and even the protagonist can't guard against it. I'm really afraid that I will become a Gu Immortal and try to be invincible later. Well, there is another thing that people are calling at the door.

Five stars for encouragement, the writing is quite good, but the story is a bit bland. For a cultivator, the plot has no ups and downs. For a farming novel, it lacks a lot of daily plot and eye-catching points. My personal suggestion is that for a semi-invincible protagonist, there should be less pretense in fights and more emotional scenes, mentor-disciple relationships, shemale romances, etc. It doesn't necessarily have to be the protagonist. After all, with your semi-invincible setting, fighting is meaningless. The setting of half-demon in the article is good, but not three-dimensional enough. Half-demon is a group related to ethics and morals, and secular prejudices. If you design a few plots, and then let the protagonist revise some unhappy endings, the story will not be full. But the plot must be handled well, and the protagonist should not be deliberately pretentious.

The writing is a bit poor, but the author will add his own meaning in the comment area. Alas, if you pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger, you will really become a pig. It's quite uncomfortable to watch. You know who the enemy is, but you still want to let the danger lie there. The traditional protagonist of the outer sect is a Shabi, so he knows that he can't have the lowest talent. And he is the same. The traditional cheating grandfather said that the protagonist only gives them things to beat them, so why do they still tolerate these people? Why do you insist on sitting there all afternoon without talking to anyone? The protagonist is timid, and the ones who are making trouble are not happy to be beaten to death (it's also a matter of writing. There are too many plots about suppressing the protagonist group, and killing him with just one sentence will not feel good at all). Readers will not care about how big your plot is. They will only care about whether the plot is enjoyable or not, and whether you feel moved by the writing. After you finish writing, they will scold you for being frustrated. He was still guarding against the little fox, and the protagonist didn't cultivate his own spiritual roots or practice any martial arts. In order to prevent himself from being charmed by the little fox, he didn't kill the people from the Lihuo Sect. In addition, Mingyue was clinging to Li Xiao. What about the little mortal girl that Li Xiao saved before? She didn't have any role at all? Isn't this your official match? When he was about to die, he was still thinking of her, and the bright moon was given to him inexplicably. I gave up. It feels so frustrating to watch. In the original text below, Lu Yuan is the protagonist, Li Xiao is the traditional protagonist of the outer sect, and Zhao is the city lord. The segments are taken from different places. But the disciple of Lihuo Sect fell in a pool of blood, his body and head separated! (You should at least say something like you shouldn't offend Jiu'er, then kill him and be done with it) Li Xiao and Zhao Hao stood awkwardly like this until the sun set, and the old man opened his eyes (who are you in the same class? You are so pretentious, you can kill him with the treasure given by the protagonist) The old man held Li Xiao's hand. Li Xiao only felt an overbearing spiritual power invade his meridians and Dantian. Although it was only for a moment, Li Xiao felt as if his skin had been peeled off and cramped. There was no secret in front of the old man. (? Let others slaughter you, but you clearly have the strength to counterattack) If I accept the offer, I'm afraid I'll be sorry for the Fengling Sect. If I don't accept the offer, I'll offend a venerable person of unknown status. What should I do? If I had known earlier I wouldn't have come! (? In the previous article, Grandpa Goldfinger said that his sect is stronger than this person, so why hesitate?) After hearing this, Li Xiao felt a little regretful. He didn't expect that the old man was actually in the realm of enlightenment and had a huge power behind him. The matter was difficult. Perhaps, agreeing to the old ghost was the best solution. (?) "I said, the horn in your arms, the shadow soul-eating beast, is one of the ancient wild beasts. I have to avoid it even if I encounter it. He is only in the realm of enlightenment. If he encounters the shadow soul-eating beast, his soul will naturally be damaged, and there is no possibility of survival. Even I... Can't really see through the sect that can take out such magic weapons at will." Lu Yuan nodded in agreement, but said: "With so many people watching, the city lord Zhao Hao is still the guest elder of the Haotian Sect, so it is not easy to kill him." (My life in the Fengling Yueying Sect is so miserable)

Things were fine up front, but why did I meet a male protagonist who works as a nanny for someone? I don't want a male apprentice, I don't want a male apprentice [I'm about to cry]

Interesting, worth seeing

What did the author think? The protagonist, a sect leader, calls his sect's elder sister, he can't be Wenzhao Gong, right?

Update quickly and don't stop updating [KISS][KISS][KISS]

Interesting, well-written, and bizarre plot, I like it

I think it looks good, but the update is a little slow. It would be better if it were faster.

I finished it in one go. Except for the ink spent on writing the main character's template character in the middle, it's quite interesting to switch back to the main perspective now.

The reason why you lose this point is because you are so easy to use the knife.

It's okay, but it's too short

Still pretty good

Mission Impossible, Mission Impossible

It is well written and fully reflects the harmonious coexistence between man and nature.

Looking for a world view of longevity?

Overall good, give it 4 stars. Considering it is a new author to show encouragement, +1 star to give 5 stars, but I deducted 1 star for not giving me Jiulifa Tang, so I got 4 stars in the end.

Overall, it's quite good. It's slow-paced and focuses on daily life and construction. The only flaw is that the characters are not well written. There are a lot of inconsistent characters, but the impact is not big.

When does the protagonist reshape his heel?