Not Good at Chinese Food? I'll Take the Halberd at the State Banquet

This fanfic is really well written, it shouldn't be limited to this. Advantages: First of all, it is innovative and does not blindly copy tigers and cats. Secondly, it describes the diversity and flavors of Chinese food in just a few chapters, allowing people to learn about Chinese food culture and history while being entertained. And there is some humor in it. Let the male protagonist be perfectly integrated into the story of "The Spirit of the Halberd Eater". Disadvantages: The male protagonist is a bit too strong, which makes Shouki's passion disappear. Because after all, it is a Shokoku no Soul fanfic. This way of writing will lose some of the passion. There is also a lack of literary literacy, but it doesn't matter for fan fiction. Personal feeling: For those who like Shokuge no Soul and food novels, I can give it about 9.2

Woohoo, finally I saw a decent food article on Tomato. I finally don't have to watch the five-star hotel chef ask the protagonist for instructions on fried rice, only to be told to use overnight rice.

The writing is really good. Unlike most common food articles, most of the food written by this author are extremely classic food in various places, rather than directly writing about the dishes of the gourmet chef or some other things like others. I'm looking forward to when the author writes about the food in my hometown [laughs] In the past, when I read the Shokuki manga, the protagonist's problems with the God's Tongue were either solved with extreme dishes or systemic medication. The solution in this book is really a path I never imagined [Exploration]

This book is really good. So far, every chapter and every dish has pictures. Moreover, this book also has theoretical knowledge on nutrition. Can you stand it? [Crazy][Thinking][Admiration]

The writing style is okay, and the food descriptions are detailed. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into this aspect, but the original characters are a bit OOC (the eldest lady and the little secretary have been together for the entire childhood. Although the eldest lady behaves wantonly, she is only arrogant towards the little secretary. It is difficult for her to be in conflict and ignore others for a few days because of the things in the article). I hope it can be corrected later. All in all, this is a Shokuki fanfic with great potential. I hope the author can write better and better [Note] [Like] The above is purely my personal opinion 🥹

A very good novel about shokuji. The author has a high reserve of knowledge and has done a good job in researching various Chinese dishes. It is a rare masterpiece. The character of the protagonist is also very good. He has the character that a Chinese chef should have, which makes people feel very appropriate. And the most satisfying thing for me is that I taught two Shokuri people who made me feel uncomfortable, Kuaga Terunori's "spicy" Chinese cuisine and Erina's aristocratic food concepts

I have read the Shokuki fanfic on many platforms, and this one can be said to be my favorite. The plot is smooth, without any lag, intentionality, or drowsiness. The grasp of the rhythm is not only in the first echelon of Shoji, but also among other comics I read in Yangshizi. In terms of character creation, the protagonist is very strong and is not a growth-oriented protagonist, so it is really enjoyable to watch it all the way through. The protagonist has a lovable personality and an excellent emotional intelligence, and he never gets used to it when it's time to be quarrelsome. In fact, I prefer to watch the love story without a female protagonist before, but I think this one with a single female protagonist, Little Secretary, is handled very well. On the one hand, the author did not delay the plot narration at all because of the emotional line. On the other hand, the gradually warming emotions are easier to accept and will not be so abrupt that the hero's character will collapse. I think the current rating of this book is a bit low for a Shokugeki fanfic, probably because of the new book. I really look forward to more updates from the author! I originally saved up nine chapters and wanted to read it again, but in the end I couldn't hold it in and finished reading it. Such a refreshing article is really addictive, and there are only a few chapters left before you come back to your senses!

The description of food is detailed, and it can be seen that the author has indeed studied cooking. The emotional line is reasonable, the protagonist's personality is younger, the main plot is based on the original work, and the original part is of appropriate length. As a humanistic work about the spirit of Shizhen, the overall rating is four and a half stars.

Bird Food is good to watch, except that the plot of Four Palaces is a bit abstract (even though the original drama was originally abstract) The author will also listen to feedback from readers (very happy because the author has been complaining about Cantonese cuisine before but ignored other cuisines that are inconsistent with the title of the book). This time he also added some small vegetables such as Yunnan cuisine and the Zu'an version of the Sichuan classic "boiled cabbage" The author is really honest. He creatively came up with protein powder pancakes and actually implemented it. This novel way of playing is the first time I have seen it in a novel. I give it a big five stars. But some parts of the plot may still have some bad points in my opinion. For example, the scientific basis of "God's Tongue" is overemphasized. Although it is a Yakuo fan fan, it can be directly understood as a powerful superpower that "transcends the three realms and is not among the five elements". There is no need to explain this. Then the development of the plot of Erina and the little secretary can only be said to be a bit overwhelming (too much for giving away the daughter Bushi) Then back to the essence of the novel, everyone likes to read Shokuki mainly for the story telling. The emotional scenes are just right for now, but there are also a lot of them. There is still a lot of hope for the appearance rate of Chinese cuisine (Four Palace plot). I believe many readers hope that their hometown dishes can appear and shock the judges. From now on, I hope that the author can write better and better, and become platinum as soon as possible (I almost thought it was the starting point). Then I wish you a great master soon, and take up the banner of Tomato Shoji fandom! [Love][Love][Love][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

This book is a very good food article, and the protagonist and plot are well integrated. The painting style is consistent, and in terms of characterization, this book is pretty good compared to others of the same genre. The plot doesn't drag on either.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a good food article. Many of them in the same series have only their gods but no soul. They write other things in the guise of food articles. This one is particularly well written about food. I can see that the author is very careful.੧ᐛ੭

I beg the author not to be a eunuch, this book is very comfortable to write

Yaowang fanfic Tomato was written by someone before, but there are really few of them recently. This one is still good. It is the best written among all the fanfics I have read. Come on [Like]

The author really knows how to cook.

Hope you can stick to it

Not bad, keep watching

Does the heroine only have a secretary? [Crying]

He really wants to teach us [laughing and crying]

Author nb! If you have a recipe, you are really good at it.

Not much to say, the author really knows how to do it!! [Like]

It can be seen that the author knows food very well [learned]

How many heroines are there? Secretary + Kitayoko?

How to say it? I also write very well, that's right. Can you write the emotional line of Fei Sha Sha better? Write a few more. Is there any Nishijiu Baotao-senpai or Ringdan-senpai?

It's so appetizing, I feel hungry just looking at it.

Not bad, but you will get a little hungry after watching it for a long time!

I just watched Douyin and found a dish made by AI. I think I can try it in a novel. Someone has already made it called "Qilin Fire Smoke Drunken Golden Armor". It's very magical anyway.

It's so satisfying for me. Please write more, especially the emotional scenes between the little secretary and the protagonist.

Love to read, it's a rare food article

Just keep writing. This is the best one I've ever seen. Looking forward to the follow-up. [Adoration][Adoration]. And the food is really good.

It's pretty cool, but some of the emotional lines and conflicts are a bit deliberate. But it should be because of the original work