Variety Comic: There Is Always Something Wrong with the Male Protagonist

The writing style is light and a little chronological, but surprisingly not boring. The overall feeling is still very good. However, the worlds behind the protagonist feel a bit background and have become a foil for the original protagonist. Maybe it's a perspective issue. I hope to see more different and wonderful protagonists' lives Big cheers for the author! [Sending Hearts]

The author's imagination and subject matter are very good, but as mentioned in the introduction, the writing style is a bit unsatisfactory. The characterization and emotional transitions are inevitably a bit stiff, the main story is not deep enough, and the characters are too rigid. However, as an experimental work, it is already a very good work. I look forward to the author's progress in the next work. By then, the author will definitely be able to create a work that he feels most satisfied with. So be sure to work hard💪

It's not bad. I've finished the whole book. What's a bit strange is the character of the protagonist. It feels like there's a little change in each world, but it's clear that there's no loss of memories or emotions. The first half of the book is a bit separated from the second half. The first half is a normal quick-travel comic, while the second half is a quick-travel system text, which is actually a bit like an immersive role-playing game. The presence of the system is not strong. The protagonist seems to be a native of the anime. He can only be seen as a quick-travel agent when talking to the system and using skills from the previous world.

The writing is very beautiful, CP is so sweet and I love reading this kind of sweet story. Although there was a bit of love-mindedness at the beginning, there was no such sign later on. [Praise]

For now, it's okay to do it reluctantly. What if you don't lose your mind later? Then this book is pretty good

I like it very much 🥹, I hope the author will not give up because of the rating [cry] and support Yishou [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] (Well, it feels so good to have poked my vagina out of nowhere, hahahahahahahaha)

It's quite interesting. What I like the most is the character of the protagonist as he grows up. A protagonist with independent hobbies, personal goals, firm will and a new life. They will not all follow the original world line, nor will they lose their self-worth and independent pursuit because of love. Love it, so beautiful.

It's quite interesting. At the beginning, the writing was very simple, like a conversation between children (not referring to the plot of the anime, just the writing), but the progress is obvious. The writing gets better as you read later. The author is great~ There are several worlds that I like, and I have read them carefully. They are really good and very interesting [laughing] There are many plots and relatively few emotional lines, but each world is not long, so it is okay. Anyway, I think it is quite interesting [shy][shy][shy]

I really like the world of Lelouch. He grasped Lelouch's twisted character very well, and the protagonist is always by his side. It's a perfect if ending for the original work😎😎😎I finally don't have to hold my pillow and cry.

I want to ask the author if he will write DC in the future, I really want to see it

Except for the last world, I like all the other worlds. The whole process is sweet and there is no bloody plot. In the last world, I always felt that there should be a crematorium. The protagonist was not Gong's first choice several times in the last world. The main protagonist reconciled with Gong very easily, which made me a little angry.

It's super good, but I wasn't too interested in it at first because there were too many Japanese comics and I didn't understand them, so I read Harry Potter and Superman first. The writing is great, and the author has a good control over the description of the characters in the original show. I've read a lot of hp and superhero fanfics, and I hope the author can do a standalone. I really like the world of Superman!!! The writing is super good and getting better and better. The protagonist has a very charming personality and I won't get tired of watching it at all.

Can you write about armored warriors? Haha, I recently read an article about flying shadow armor. It was quite interesting, but there are not many of the same type. I want to see Kirihito in Genki Shoujo Vampire Knight Zero,

It's quite interesting, but I didn't watch the Lelouch part at the end because I didn't like it. 2025/06/04 Life is a book, open it is a story, close it is a memory. May our stories be wonderful, may our memories be beautiful.

Except for the progress of Ye Xiu's chapter, which is a bit sluggish, the rest is pretty good.

Looks good, good luck to the author

The plots of some original animations can describe 1 or 2 plots with relatively key points and turning points, and the emotional scenes can be added later. Keep up the good work, I believe you can do it

Not bad, the story is also very coherent, and it's quite comfortable to watch.

Not bad! Very pretty

Super beautiful, love it😊😊

It's so beautiful, I like it so much😍😍😍😍, please give me more [blowing kisses][blowing kisses]

It's beautiful, why doesn't anyone watch it?

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The next world is written by Shuiyuedongtian cp Tong Bo

I quite like it. It's just that the content is a bit short. Please update it quickly. The kids are hungry and the food is ready.

It looks good, I love reading it, the author writes a lot

Super beautiful! Highly recommended! The author's writing is good and it's very comfortable to read [laughs]

I picked it up because I didn't recognize some of the characters. My favorites are the three worlds of Ye Xiu, Harry and Clark. (Mainly these three are also my favorite characters) [Blowing kiss]

Ahhhhh, it's really beautiful. Every world is very good, and the author's conception is also very good. I just love it.

Wow. It's quite good-looking, but the best part is the part where the male protagonist was a god in ancient times. It felt very interesting.