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The writing and logic are all right, and it looks good. The author lets himself go and gets a stroke of luck,

I really love this kind of Northeastern novel that is full of slang. This is simply a story about the old Arthur who cheated in the Northeast and took place in the Northeast of Baishan and Heishui during the Beiyang years. Because I am also from the Northeast, I feel very kind when I see the text full of hometown flavor. The only suggestion is this As I commented in the chapter before, there are readers from all over the world. One is the northeastern accent, which many southern book friends don't understand. They read it in confusion and didn't understand the meaning, so they dismissed it. There are also a lot of slang and incisions. My suggestion is that the best of these two aspects is the best. Add parentheses above, and add a rough annotation inside to make it easier for readers who don't understand Northeastern dialect and black dialect cuts to read. This can also improve the word count. Of course, this is a black dialect cut that involves sensitive points without touching sensitive points. It is best to tell everyone. Chapter reviews, after all, there are many great readers in the chapter reviews, and their words are nice [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]. The above is my evaluation of this book. It is very good. It is a rare Northeastern language. If there are no problems and it will not be removed from the shelves, if you insist on updating, I will keep chasing it until the end.

It's super good-looking. Among all the fictional stories about the struggle for hegemony in Guandong, this is undoubtedly the best. It should be said that its value has surpassed that of ordinary serial novels. There is no better description of heroes competing for hegemony in the Guandong Mountains for centuries. The protagonist is very capable and is a Yan Shuangying-style hero in my mind. Many people complain that the golden finger of the protagonist is not enough. Strong, Golden Finger is meant to make readers enjoy reading, but the ability to completely escape the upper limit of personal abilities in the world no longer makes people feel happy and can only become a superpower-style self-pleasure. I support the author's current writing method and hope that the author can stick to his heart and write his own style. Come on, don't doubt yourself, you wrote very well. King of Guandong, when will you write the Republic of China: Traveling through Guandong, with unparalleled guns and horses? The young and old men in the village, the young ladies and the young wives are all waiting to read it. It is quite uncomfortable to hold back. Can you update four chapters every day? We all love to read it. If I don't read it every day, I will have no energy to work and no motivation to watch Cocoon. You have to work hard. You are the best. You write well. We wish you every day to fall in love with Cocoon.

The writing is quite good, but I feel that the label is invincible. I feel uncomfortable about being invincible. It doesn't feel good enough. Just like the author said, no matter how awesome you are, you can't stop the black gun. Then the old man of the Han family and the fourth young master quickly arranged it. The protagonist is alone. If the skills are too big, it will easily collapse. Don't try to defeat ten thousand with one person, so you have to be calm no matter what. , It would be best to be able to reach the level of coming without a shadow, going to the first place of the traceless magic gun, the big sword step eagle or the half-human and half-ghost magic gun first place like Yan Shuangying, which always makes people look like chasing dogs, which makes people feel frustrated, or pulling up a team of people can be a help, so that they don't have to go in on their own if anything happens and then be beaten by the opponent with the crowd tactics [Thinking] The power of the Han family is not small, and it is also an early boss. But from the perspective of a reader, I always think about looking at the whole country based on history, so that the Han family will not be delayed for too long, because there are warlords from all over the country and Japanese soldiers abroad. They are all big boss levels. When the boss To become stronger, you can also upgrade the protagonist's plug-in appropriately, get a portable space, and unblock double-traveling. There is not much to write about (but these are some thoughts and suggestions from a personal perspective. They are not comprehensive and narrow-minded. Use them as a reference for good and bad ones, and don't affect the author's own rhythm and layout)

This book is really well written. From the content point of view, it covers a wealth of knowledge points and profound thinking, allowing people to constantly make new discoveries and insights during the reading process. The plot is compact and orderly, and each chapter is closely connected, making it difficult for readers to put down. The author's character creation is also very successful. The characters are vivid and three-dimensional, as if they are right around us. There is nothing to say about the writing style. It is smooth and natural, and the wording is precise. It is really a pleasure to read. In short, this book is excellent from every angle. It is definitely worth reading and re-reading. I believe it will bring you a lot of inspiration and help!

Good book, low rating is really an injustice! Tomato's novels are illustrated with pictures, so it is a rare and dedicated writer. He is a writer who has a deep affection for the Northeast. The narrative is particularly contemporary and can be made into a movie (director Jiang Wen adapted it haha) ~ The language is humorous and the plot has ups and downs. When reading the book, I sometimes laughed non-stop, sometimes felt nervous and anxious, and sometimes recalled it with emotion. It's not a mindless time-travel-is-invincible cool story, nor is it a time-travel story about a handsome guy who's so handsome that you can't help but be fascinated by it. Han Laoshi is as solid as a rock even when he stands up. Keep writing and keep pursuing. You don't have to worry about some malicious targets or the possession of some domineering spirits.

It is a rare good book about the Northeast of the Republic of China. It is indeed a good book in terms of historical accuracy, characterization, plot arrangement, narrative techniques, and reasonable structure.

After I read all the chapters carefully, I think I finally read a good book that reflects Northeastern culture! The Northeastern dialect is so authentic! For me, who is very picky, the plot is vivid, the language is fresh, and the logic is tight! It is indeed a good book!

Recommended by an 84-year-old bookworm who vomited blood. I read the updates in one breath and still have endless thoughts. It is a rare and excellent book on tomatoes! I saw three good books on System Stream on Tomato, this one is, the second one starts with the Los Angeles Patrol, and the third one is There are still three days until the shooting in the courtyard. Those who give low scores are either stupid or bad! It's a bit painful to watch it every day, like a kitten scratching your heart! Please update the author more, I want to see Han Laoshi pretending to be x!

A good book, very interesting to read. It makes people able to read past books word by word. I would like to ask when will the system be upgraded?

Compared with most protagonists who are endlessly handsome at the beginning, the author used his writing skills to write a protagonist who is not handsome but is definitely humorous and has his own unique insights into things. The pretense is smooth and not obtrusive, and the supporting characters are not stereotyped and have their own styles. It can be seen that the author definitely has an outline and the execution is very good.

It's good to read. There's nothing wrong with it except that it's a little difficult to read. When I read the title, I thought it was in the style of a lone hero from the Northeast. But it's still pretty good. There's nothing to say about professional knowledge. The author has really worked hard, and it's much better than a novice novel.

What did I see? It has characterization, an overall structure, a calm background introduction, a relaxed and relaxed rhythm, smooth and appropriate language, vivid and vivid pictures, a plot that advances layer by layer, and suspense that constantly emerges. An online article written like a serious novel. It can also attract attention quickly. The author is a master.

One of the few fine works with humorous language. Distinctive characters and compact plot

The novel is good. Southerners may not be able to understand many of the slang stories, but it is really good. Goldfinger is not that magical. 👍

This is a very literary novel! The author has a very rich and detailed grasp of the beard culture in Northeast China and the literary and historical materials of the Republic of China period! The author's writing is profound and smooth, making it difficult for readers to put the book down! The author did not add much explanation for the slightly more dialects and bandit slang in the novel, which will definitely affect the reading experience of southern readers, so the slightly lower rating is reasonable.

I have read 2472 books and this one is really good! It is very close to the reality in Northeast China. I hope the author can continue his efforts! [Praise]

It's very good-looking, humorous, and decisive in killing. Although the system is a little bit two-protagonist, it doesn't affect the quality.

Each character is portrayed very well, and different personalities are vividly written. Even the supporting characters have their own personalities, and the transitions are very natural. The firearms used by the protagonist are very enjoyable. If a tactical belt is arranged, Han Kun's belt will not fall off.

A very well-written book, exciting and long-lasting to read. It is one of the few good books recommended by Tomato! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

It was a pleasure to read this book, but it wasn't just pure pleasure. The writing was smooth, and occasionally there were a few bulges in the middle. I stopped and scratched it, and when I realized it, I couldn't help but feel even more sour. It is also like a bowl of pork vermicelli stewed with tofu. It is slippery and delicious to eat. The hot and simmering piece of tofu instantly freezes the tongue. The author's imagination is like this frozen tofu. There are eyes everywhere and it is full of nutritious soup. It is really endless aftertaste.

Wang Runtu is definitely a literary hooligan, the kind who can wake people up with laughter in the middle of the night. They are all time-travel articles, because the writing is very witty and funny, and nothing is so abrupt. It is very silky and feels very good. I can't stop and look forward to updates.

The author's writing style is very good, and it feels like he can pick it up with ease. The plot concept is also very good. It looks pretty cool. Life in ordinary times is quite tiring, and there are also some things that are unpleasant and cannot be helped. It makes me happy to see that Shuangwen can also secrete dopamine.

This is a time travel novel that I particularly like. There are few novels that talk about the Northeastern past in the Beiyang period. As a Northeasterner, I support it very much. It also contains the names of my hometown and nearby places. Both the writing style and the content are very friendly. It introduces the white mountains and black waters in unique words. The author's writing style is delicate and he has a very clear view of the historical context of the Republic of China period, and the time when the characters appear is extremely accurate. He has a very good grasp of the timeline of the story. With the complete timeline, the plot of the entire novel is full but not too long and complicated. The language of the entire novel tends to be concise and concise, but the background of the entire story and characters are explained very clearly without taking up too much space. It is like the finishing touch. The language is humorous and humorous. The knowledge of folklore and history is quite solid, and the writing skills are excellent. It belongs to the top of the historical novels I have read in recent years.

It's really good. Even if it's not a popular novel, it's also very well written. It's so good and I'm happy to read it [staring]

A rare good book, the author has profound literary knowledge,

Interesting, extensive content, humorous, the author is also a surfing expert, there are all kinds of jokes, it is very comfortable to watch, but the 7.62*54 Of Mosin Nagant in that era can be used for svd

How can I put it, overall it is good, but there is no need to write so many women, although most of them are embellishments, and the author always likes to write some suicidal plots. Overall, it's a good read. Those who like harems can check it out. The protagonist travels back to the Republic of China to become a green forest person, and then builds a force and so on. Developed in the Northeast.

The protagonist is a combination of a Western gunslinger and an anti-Japanese hero, Yan Shuangying. Goldfinger has a modest start, with a rich Northeastern gangster slang and earthy plot. The historical pattern and the three levels are relatively positive, but Goldfinger still lacks a certain amount of imagination. It is a slow-burning time-travel drama in the early Republic of China. I hope that the subsequent plot will be more full and unique.

Traveling across Guandong, the mountains and rivers are vast and the stars in the world are vast. A magnificent history of Northeast China, each legendary figure, their stories make people excited. The author's profound knowledge reserve and humorous writing style... A book that makes people want to put it down 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻