[Rebirth] [Fei Long Ao Ti] [Fei Shuang Wen] [Slow Pace] [Everyday] [Twist] [Imperfect Protagonist] [Reality] [First Person]
Is he the reborn person with memories of his past life as he thought he was, or is he a confused young man whose cognition is distorted by the memory fragments of his past life?
Reader comments
I had been leisurely for too long, and one day when I was writing the signature report, I revised it repeatedly, but it still felt awkward to read.
I was worried that my brain would get rusty if I left it idle for too long, so I came up with the idea of writing this novel.
In fact, I know that current readers prefer fast-paced reading. If the beginning of the chapter does not create a conflict, it will be difficult to attract them to continue reading;
If the main line is not clear enough, it will easily put readers off.
But in my opinion, if a person is really reborn, there is a high probability that he will be confused in the early stage and feel lacking in his heart.
After all, even if the current life is full of dissatisfaction, there are still parts that are difficult to let go of.
I don't know if I, as a newbie, can accurately express what I think, but I will try my best.
Since I am not a professional writer and have not saved manuscripts, there may be interruptions in updates, but please rest assured that this novel will be completed normally even if only a few people read it.
[Almost crying] In fact, it will end if no one watches it, because I keep watching it myself...
Whether it is the story in the novel or the knowledge related to self-awareness involved. The writing is very good. I personally prefer this kind of novel. After all, I feel sleepy after reading a psychological book for a while.
Mou Nian represents the past? When are you going to see Mou Nian?
It is a very interesting book with a relatively slow pace and incorporates some of the author's experiences and thoughts. I think it was written by the author based on his own experiences. The self-doubt and inner conflict of the protagonist are clearly shown. Art comes from life. It is precisely because the author has had this kind of realization and experience that he has this book.
Good grass, you can take a look at it, the author can just write according to his own ideas
It's really nice, although I'm a bit uncomfortable with the first person perspective.
This is a very interesting book about daily life.
I'm just curious how to write the next one?
It's quite nice. Much better than the average rebirth novel.
The writing is so good that it seems like it really happened.
I like the author's description of the sense of separation from being reborn into his own youth, and I also like the protagonist's daily life.
Come on, I think the writing is very good and very everyday. I don't know if the author is writing about rebirth and not writing exciting stories, but no one reads it when writing about daily life. I think it's a pity. I also like this book very much.
I really like the characters of Dong and the school beauty, it's hard to choose between them [face covering]
Great book, why isn't it popular?
Come on, author, I hope you can see the growth of the protagonist in the subsequent plots
How hard you work, support, keep on keeping on, it's not enough
It was really well written. I read it in one sitting.
Come on, nice book
It's the end and it's a new beginning
It's been a long time since I've been able to catch up to the latest chapter of a novel, especially a first-person novel, so please keep writing. [Love]
It's pretty good-looking. Don't let Dong down.
It's really delicate and like a personal experience. I hope there are more people like this.
Second comment, complete text. Although the emotional description is indeed delicate in some places, it gave me a very bad impression later on. And doesn't the protagonist feel guilty towards Dong? Later, apart from taking advantage and understatement about pushing Dong, there were no major events (except for one time when Dong was extremely angry). Apart from coaxing, I think if it weren't for Dong's own emotions, would they really be able to get to the end?
It's very beautiful. I like it anyway. Come on, author, you can just follow the ending.
Very well written, keep it up
You must read two chapters with your breakfast every day! !
The author has been following me!
Chase on time!
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
It's okay, I just feel emo-esque when I look at it [almost crying]
It's a great book, but it's a pity it's not popular. I really like Dong Shuyu's character.
It's beautiful. This kind of daily life is quite interesting.
Looks a bit like a spring thing?
What is the meaning of the extra chapter in the last chapter? It seems to me that there is no foreshadowing, except for the will left in advance. Did I miss it?
It looks good but I'm curious about the ending [crying]
Is it a single heroine? There won't be a knife, right?
I had been leisurely for too long, and one day when I was writing the signature report, I revised it repeatedly, but it still felt awkward to read. I was worried that my brain would get rusty if I left it idle for too long, so I came up with the idea of writing this novel. In fact, I know that current readers prefer fast-paced reading. If the beginning of the chapter does not create a conflict, it will be difficult to attract them to continue reading; If the main line is not clear enough, it will easily put readers off. But in my opinion, if a person is really reborn, there is a high probability that he will be confused in the early stage and feel lacking in his heart. After all, even if the current life is full of dissatisfaction, there are still parts that are difficult to let go of. I don't know if I, as a newbie, can accurately express what I think, but I will try my best. Since I am not a professional writer and have not saved manuscripts, there may be interruptions in updates, but please rest assured that this novel will be completed normally even if only a few people read it. [Almost crying] In fact, it will end if no one watches it, because I keep watching it myself...
Whether it is the story in the novel or the knowledge related to self-awareness involved. The writing is very good. I personally prefer this kind of novel. After all, I feel sleepy after reading a psychological book for a while.
Mou Nian represents the past? When are you going to see Mou Nian?
It is a very interesting book with a relatively slow pace and incorporates some of the author's experiences and thoughts. I think it was written by the author based on his own experiences. The self-doubt and inner conflict of the protagonist are clearly shown. Art comes from life. It is precisely because the author has had this kind of realization and experience that he has this book.
Good grass, you can take a look at it, the author can just write according to his own ideas
It's really nice, although I'm a bit uncomfortable with the first person perspective.
This is a very interesting book about daily life. I'm just curious how to write the next one?
It's quite nice. Much better than the average rebirth novel.
The writing is so good that it seems like it really happened.
I like the author's description of the sense of separation from being reborn into his own youth, and I also like the protagonist's daily life. Come on, I think the writing is very good and very everyday. I don't know if the author is writing about rebirth and not writing exciting stories, but no one reads it when writing about daily life. I think it's a pity. I also like this book very much.
I really like the characters of Dong and the school beauty, it's hard to choose between them [face covering]
Great book, why isn't it popular?
Come on, author, I hope you can see the growth of the protagonist in the subsequent plots
How hard you work, support, keep on keeping on, it's not enough
It was really well written. I read it in one sitting.
Come on, nice book It's the end and it's a new beginning
It's been a long time since I've been able to catch up to the latest chapter of a novel, especially a first-person novel, so please keep writing. [Love]
It's pretty good-looking. Don't let Dong down.
It's really delicate and like a personal experience. I hope there are more people like this. Second comment, complete text. Although the emotional description is indeed delicate in some places, it gave me a very bad impression later on. And doesn't the protagonist feel guilty towards Dong? Later, apart from taking advantage and understatement about pushing Dong, there were no major events (except for one time when Dong was extremely angry). Apart from coaxing, I think if it weren't for Dong's own emotions, would they really be able to get to the end?
It's very beautiful. I like it anyway. Come on, author, you can just follow the ending.
Very well written, keep it up
You must read two chapters with your breakfast every day! !
The author has been following me! Chase on time!
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
It's okay, I just feel emo-esque when I look at it [almost crying]
It's a great book, but it's a pity it's not popular. I really like Dong Shuyu's character.
It's beautiful. This kind of daily life is quite interesting. Looks a bit like a spring thing?
What is the meaning of the extra chapter in the last chapter? It seems to me that there is no foreshadowing, except for the will left in advance. Did I miss it?
It looks good but I'm curious about the ending [crying]
Is it a single heroine? There won't be a knife, right?